Ashura Senju

[UzumakiRam]

ASHURA SENJU

name: ashura
nickname: the successor
gender: male
age: 19/20
clan: senju

LOOKS:-

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Asura had short, spiky hair, two locks of which were wrapped in bandages framing either side of his face in a similar manner to his brother. He also wore what seemed to be a blank forehead protector. He wore a light-coloured kimono which was adorned with magatama around the collar. The kimono was held closed by a dark-coloured sash. Underneath all of this he wore a black full-body suit.

PERSONALITY:-

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Asura believed that love was the ultimate key to peace, and loved his father greatly as well.[1] Though the son of the famed Sage of the Six Paths, Asura was born with practically no talent, but because of this, he learned the value of depending on and cooperating with others. Through sheer hard work and determination, he was able to awaken his own power. Because he never lost sight of the value in people, he would ultimately become the successor to his father's ninshū as Hagoromo wanted the world to adopt this way of thinking.

VILLAGE INFO:-

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VILLAGE OF BIRTH: N/A
VILLAGE OF ALLIANCE:N/A

ABILITIES

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As a child, Asura was considered to be unskilled, much unlike his genius older brother, Indra. Over the years, through grueling hard work and dedication, plus support from his friends, Asura awakened his own power: his father's "body", life force, and physical energy; power equal to that of his brother's. He also became a capable leader, obtaining countless loyal followers. It was this way of operating that caused his father to make him the successor to ninshū.

In battle, Asura was seen encased in a three-headed, six-armed avatar wielding several dark-coloured spheres. This avatar was capable of going head to head with Indra's final Susanoo.[2] He also seen wielding a shakujō, as well as a sword on different occasions.

Rank//Chakra Info:

Ninja Rank: GENIN
Specialty: successor of ninshu .

Elements:
all elements mastered

BACKGROUND INFO:-

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Hagoromo noted that Asura's chakra remained even after his body was destroyed, and it was reincarnated in various individuals throughout history who all inherited his will. His prior reincarnation being Hashirama Senju. Naruto Uzumaki is the current inheritor of his will.

Asura's ideals also allowed his father to realise a new possibility for the world, and with this he used the Creation of All Things to separate the Ten-Tails' chakra into nine tailed beasts, gave each of them names, in the hopes that when the time came, they would to be reunited as a single entity, yet not as they originally were, and that one shall appear at that time to show them what true power is. The beasts would come to believe this individual to be Naruto centuries later.

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PICTURES

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BATTLES:-
WON:6
LOST:3

 

[Nathan]

Should probably read the rules.

You actually have to train in the elements, and nin section of things. Just for now, put in one element you want to learn.
So either, Fire, Lighting, Wind, Water, or Earth.

"has sage of six paths body & successor of ninshu" - You can't have that at all.

You rank is your post count - So Genin.
You need a village of birth.

"As a child, Asura was considered to be unskilled, much unlike his genius older brother, Indra. Over the years, through grueling hard work and dedication, plus support from his friends, Asura awakened his own power: his father's "body", life force, and physical energy; power equal to that of his brother's. He also became a capable leader, obtaining countless loyal followers. It was this way of operating that caused his father to make him the successor to ninshū.

In battle, Asura was seen encased in a three-headed, six-armed avatar wielding several dark-coloured spheres. This avatar was capable of going head to head with Indra's final Susanoo.[2] He also seen wielding a shakujō, as well as a sword on different occasions." - Needs to go.

"Hagoromo noted that Asura's chakra remained even after his body was destroyed, and it was reincarnated in various individuals throughout history who all inherited his will. His prior reincarnation being Hashirama Senju. Naruto Uzumaki is the current inheritor of his will.

Asura's ideals also allowed his father to realise a new possibility for the world, and with this he used the Creation of All Things to separate the Ten-Tails' chakra into nine tailed beasts, gave each of them names, in the hopes that when the time came, they would to be reunited as a single entity, yet not as they originally were, and that one shall appear at that time to show them what true power is. The beasts would come to believe this individual to be Naruto centuries later." - Remove that and make another history. Your bio is only new, he doesn't know anything apart from E-rank ninjutsu.

 

[UzumakiRam]

should probably read the rules.

You actually have to train in the elements, and nin section of things. Just for now, put in one element you want to learn.
So either, fire, lighting, wind, water, or earth.

"has sage of six paths body & successor of ninshu" - you can't have that at all.

You rank is your post count - so genin.
You need a village of birth.

"as a child, asura was considered to be unskilled, much unlike his genius older brother, indra. Over the years, through grueling hard work and dedication, plus support from his friends, asura awakened his own power: His father's "body", life force, and physical energy; power equal to that of his brother's. He also became a capable leader, obtaining countless loyal followers. It was this way of operating that caused his father to make him the successor to ninshū.

In battle, asura was seen encased in a three-headed, six-armed avatar wielding several dark-coloured spheres. This avatar was capable of going head to head with indra's final susanoo.[2] he also seen wielding a shakujō, as well as a sword on different occasions." - needs to go.

"hagoromo noted that asura's chakra remained even after his body was destroyed, and it was reincarnated in various individuals throughout history who all inherited his will. His prior reincarnation being hashirama senju. Naruto uzumaki is the current inheritor of his will.

Asura's ideals also allowed his father to realise a new possibility for the world, and with this he used the creation of all things to separate the ten-tails' chakra into nine tailed beasts, gave each of them names, in the hopes that when the time came, they would to be reunited as a single entity, yet not as they originally were, and that one shall appear at that time to show them what true power is. The beasts would come to believe this individual to be naruto centuries later." - remove that and make another history. Your bio is only new, he doesn't know anything apart from e-rank ninjutsu.

do i need to put my rank I thought i have to put his rank!

 

[Lay]

Yes. You gotta put your rank

 

[Deviation]

If you are trying to be Ashura from the manga then you are gravely mistaken and it will be declined. Same reason you will find if you try to submit Hagoromo, his children, his mother, and his brother. EIther there is not enough information or that they possess abilities that would need restrictions not to mention way OP. My suggestion is to just pick another character. If you need some suggestions or help you can VM me and we'll go from there.

 

[Goetia]

This is gonna be a quick decline when checked.

 

[Reborn]

This is a "Just No" Character.