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SPOILERS Here are my criticisms of the latest naruto chapter:
Kishi isn't making a clear enough distinction between the powers they obtained naturally, and the sages powers. For example, naruto's current form and black spheres was a result of having 9 bijuu. only his revival power (and maybe the super sensing) is a part of the sages chakra. Also sasuke's rinnegan was from getting hashi cells, only the special sage abilities were form the sage but its hard to distinguish.
It took a solid couple minutes for obito to communicate to sakura "destroy this eye" "k, its destroyed". Between the time naruto left, there's been 2 full chapters for this to happen, yet they didn't do it in time.
kakashi was just standing there. Not doing anything. There was no reason for him to be standing there. wasn't he with lee and gaara? But now he was just alone? He didn't even give a reaction. He just got ganked. Kishi was like "madara needs kamui, lets have him snatch kakashi's" with no further thought. When you lazily do something like that, you ruin the integrity of a character. All kakashi's reputation gets destroyed when kishi did something so horrible to him. I legitimately thought it was a trick because it was so rushed and lazy. I thought it might be a clone until i saw him use kamui. I'm hoping this is just a genjutsu sasuke put him in or something.
Its become WAY to easy to transplant eyes. It use to take a medic to not only remove an eye, but to put it in. Thats not something the human body can handle. Now madara just be poppin eyes in his skull. I get the whole "he has regen" thing, but its complicated. peoples eyes aren't just compatible. This makes me mad
the mangapanda translation was horrible. Naruto just casually using irk more than once in a chapter. Its not a common word, so having it used twice is just lazy.
This chapter was too rushed i could barely tell what was happening. How did naruto use sage energy in that last attack? how did naruto "throw" the sand ball? how did sasuke move around like that? None of it made sense
Limbo made no sense. If limbo is just a shadow madara, how did he simultaneously knock back all the bijuu (it was pre juubi madara).
This is a 1/5 for me. Now worth the read.