Rinianne
Jōnin Strategist 🧠
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Page 1
SCENE 1-[Naruto and Madara on the battlefield)
Madara: Oh, don't get too cocky Naruto, you still can't beat me!
Gai: Narut--. How'd you get here that fas-t?
Naruto: Oh about that, Obito and Kakashi boosted up their Kamui, which made me arrive here a lot faster.
Oh and hey Madara, who said anything about me beating you alone!
Madara: ... ?
Naruto: After all, I got my comrades!
Page 2
Madara: Heh, let's see you dance some more, kid!
*launches Gudou dama*
SCENE 2-[switches to Sasuke disintegrating the Gudou dama]
Madara: You...! I thought I dealt with you!
Sasuke: Unfortunately, hell had no vacancies.
Madara: Damn you kids, let's see how long both of you can dance!
Page 3
Naruto: Looks like the old man visited you as well, huh Indra?
Sasuke: You're not one to talk
Madara: What are you kids getting cocky about!
Naruto and Sasuke: Nothing, but looks like, you Madara, will be outdone by us!
Madara: You pesky little brats! I'll show you what the true Sage of six paths
can do!
Page 4
SCENE 3-[Madara is shown to be releasing a massive bijuu dama]
Madara: Oodama Bijuu Dama!
SFX boom
Madara: *grins* So it's over eh? By just that... xD
Smoke clears up revealing Naruto and Sasuke still living.
Madara: WHAT?!
*looks sternly*
How co-oome?!
Page 5
SCENE 4-[Naruto is shown with the 9 beasts]
Naruto: Oh it's a long story, but consider it as me, having the powers of the Juubi
Madara: Won't you kids ever learn?
~Rinbo Hengoku!~
Sasuke: Looks like that won't work, idiot Uchiha.
Madara: So, you cloaked the beasts with your Susano'o huh? Pretty good if you ask me,
wielding a multiple number of Susano'os.
Page 6
Madara: Looks like I underestimated you kids. But you see, you're pretty late.
SCENE 5-[A tiny portion of the chakra fruit is shown to emerge from the tree]
Now, all of our chakras are one!
Until that time, dance for me!
~Moon's eye!~
SCENE 6-[Naruto is shown dashing onto Madara, a new cloak emerges]
Page 7
Naruto: Fuuton: Rasengan!
Madara: Don't you think you can touch me with a low level jutsu like that!
*manipulates gudou dama into shield*
SCENE 7-[Naruto's rasengan vanishes]
Madara: Looks like you haven't healed completely yet, eh Naruto?!
*kicks Naruto in mid-air*
Page 8
SCENE 8-[The rasengan is to be shown just centimeters away from Madara's face]
Madara: What?! But HOOOW?!
Kakashi: Oh, sorry about that, Madara ^_^
Madara: I clearly forgot about you guys!
Naruto- *grins* heh.
*Rasengan enfused with Senjutsu hits Madara*
Page 9
Madara: Hah, you sure got me! But you do know that won't finish me off, right?
Naruto: Yeah, we were just warming up. Kakashi, Father, Sakura and Obito, take Guy
with you. Sasuke and I will deal with this freak.
Page 10
Sasuke: It's time we get dead serious.
Susano'o!
Madara: So that is your perfect Susano'o huh?
Sasuke: Yeah, what about it? Naruto, fuse your tailed beasts as one.
Naruto: Right!
Page 11
SCENE 9-[A new form of Juubi is seen, a wolf with white fur, signifying a pure tailed beast.]
Madara: Looks like you two really got stronger! Both of you are getting annoying.
Sasuke: You disgrace my clan, you are not fit to be called an UCHIHA! And that is why, I will
wipe you off the face of the earth.
Madara: You talk big, I give you that.
JUUBI!
Page 12
Naruto: Let's see which team will prevail then! Sasuke do it!
Sasuke: Enton! Amaterasu cloak!
SCENE 10-[Juubi is cloaked with PS having the Amaterasu cloak]
Naruto: Let's dance shall we?
Madara: Don't you dare mock me you lowly Uzumaki!
Page 13
SCENE 11-[Naruto seems to fuse a mini bijuu dama and rasenshuriken]
[Sasuke fuses chidori and amaterasu]
Naruto and Sasuke: RasenDoriDaMaKen!
Naruto: Kurama,Gyuuki,Chomei,Saiken,Kokuo,Son Goku,Isobu,Matatabi and Shukaku!
I need your help on this one!
HEAVENLY BIJUU DAMA!!!
Page 14
Madara: Hahah!!! Let's see if you're better than your Red beast!!! Dance for me!!!
Sasuke: I can't believe how much of a masochist you are!
Susano'o!
The Susano'o launches arrows forged with black flames
Enton: Odama kagetsuchi!
Page 15
SCENE 12-[Madara is seen to be pierced by Naruto and Sasuke's techniques]
Madara: You sure can dance! *spits blood*
~smoke clears up~
Madara: But you-----
SFX gwuaaah!!!
Naruto: Let's see how good you can fight hand-to-hand Madara!
*madara is clearly dominating Naruto but Naruto's defensive skills were blocking Madara's movements*
Page 16
Madara: You can't keep this up forever Naruto!
SFX Aah!
SCENE 13-[Madara finds an open spot and is about to deliver his final blow]
Sasuke: Naruto! To your right!
Naruto: Heh!
SFX Psssh
Page 17
Madara: So Sasuke will be the one to read my moves eh?
Sasuke: Not only that bastard!
SCENE 14-[Sasuke punches Madara]
Madara: So it'd be your clone who'd read my moves ha? HA! Quite clever!
Sasuke: Hmph! You are a smart one! Hahah!
Page 18
SCENE 15-[Battle royale continues]
Sasuke: Naruto now!
Naruto: Yossh!!! Dattebayou! Uzumaki, Naruto RENDAN!!!
*Sasuke waits for Madara to hit the ground*
Sasuke: Uchiha's lone wolf KICK!
Page 19
*Madara gets hit on the trunk of the tree*
Madara: Hahahah, I just found a shortcut. Anyways, thanks for the fun!
FOCUS *BIG PICTURE*
Madara: Now I'll just take this fruit if you don't mind.
Editor's text Madara is about to get Kaguya's power :vision:
~END~
What do you guys think? xDD Sorry if you are disappointed
Just leave your opinions below
SCENE 1-[Naruto and Madara on the battlefield)
Madara: Oh, don't get too cocky Naruto, you still can't beat me!
Gai: Narut--. How'd you get here that fas-t?
Naruto: Oh about that, Obito and Kakashi boosted up their Kamui, which made me arrive here a lot faster.
Oh and hey Madara, who said anything about me beating you alone!
Madara: ... ?
Naruto: After all, I got my comrades!
Page 2
Madara: Heh, let's see you dance some more, kid!
*launches Gudou dama*
SCENE 2-[switches to Sasuke disintegrating the Gudou dama]
Madara: You...! I thought I dealt with you!
Sasuke: Unfortunately, hell had no vacancies.
Madara: Damn you kids, let's see how long both of you can dance!
Page 3
Naruto: Looks like the old man visited you as well, huh Indra?
Sasuke: You're not one to talk
Madara: What are you kids getting cocky about!
Naruto and Sasuke: Nothing, but looks like, you Madara, will be outdone by us!
Madara: You pesky little brats! I'll show you what the true Sage of six paths
can do!
Page 4
SCENE 3-[Madara is shown to be releasing a massive bijuu dama]
Madara: Oodama Bijuu Dama!
SFX boom
Madara: *grins* So it's over eh? By just that... xD
Smoke clears up revealing Naruto and Sasuke still living.
Madara: WHAT?!
*looks sternly*
How co-oome?!
Page 5
SCENE 4-[Naruto is shown with the 9 beasts]
Naruto: Oh it's a long story, but consider it as me, having the powers of the Juubi
Madara: Won't you kids ever learn?
~Rinbo Hengoku!~
Sasuke: Looks like that won't work, idiot Uchiha.
Madara: So, you cloaked the beasts with your Susano'o huh? Pretty good if you ask me,
wielding a multiple number of Susano'os.
Page 6
Madara: Looks like I underestimated you kids. But you see, you're pretty late.
SCENE 5-[A tiny portion of the chakra fruit is shown to emerge from the tree]
Now, all of our chakras are one!
Until that time, dance for me!
~Moon's eye!~
SCENE 6-[Naruto is shown dashing onto Madara, a new cloak emerges]
Page 7
Naruto: Fuuton: Rasengan!
Madara: Don't you think you can touch me with a low level jutsu like that!
*manipulates gudou dama into shield*
SCENE 7-[Naruto's rasengan vanishes]
Madara: Looks like you haven't healed completely yet, eh Naruto?!
*kicks Naruto in mid-air*
Page 8
SCENE 8-[The rasengan is to be shown just centimeters away from Madara's face]
Madara: What?! But HOOOW?!
Kakashi: Oh, sorry about that, Madara ^_^
Madara: I clearly forgot about you guys!
Naruto- *grins* heh.
*Rasengan enfused with Senjutsu hits Madara*
Page 9
Madara: Hah, you sure got me! But you do know that won't finish me off, right?
Naruto: Yeah, we were just warming up. Kakashi, Father, Sakura and Obito, take Guy
with you. Sasuke and I will deal with this freak.
Page 10
Sasuke: It's time we get dead serious.
Susano'o!
Madara: So that is your perfect Susano'o huh?
Sasuke: Yeah, what about it? Naruto, fuse your tailed beasts as one.
Naruto: Right!
Page 11
SCENE 9-[A new form of Juubi is seen, a wolf with white fur, signifying a pure tailed beast.]
Madara: Looks like you two really got stronger! Both of you are getting annoying.
Sasuke: You disgrace my clan, you are not fit to be called an UCHIHA! And that is why, I will
wipe you off the face of the earth.
Madara: You talk big, I give you that.
JUUBI!
Page 12
Naruto: Let's see which team will prevail then! Sasuke do it!
Sasuke: Enton! Amaterasu cloak!
SCENE 10-[Juubi is cloaked with PS having the Amaterasu cloak]
Naruto: Let's dance shall we?
Madara: Don't you dare mock me you lowly Uzumaki!
Page 13
SCENE 11-[Naruto seems to fuse a mini bijuu dama and rasenshuriken]
[Sasuke fuses chidori and amaterasu]
Naruto and Sasuke: RasenDoriDaMaKen!
Naruto: Kurama,Gyuuki,Chomei,Saiken,Kokuo,Son Goku,Isobu,Matatabi and Shukaku!
I need your help on this one!
HEAVENLY BIJUU DAMA!!!
Page 14
Madara: Hahah!!! Let's see if you're better than your Red beast!!! Dance for me!!!
Sasuke: I can't believe how much of a masochist you are!
Susano'o!
The Susano'o launches arrows forged with black flames
Enton: Odama kagetsuchi!
Page 15
SCENE 12-[Madara is seen to be pierced by Naruto and Sasuke's techniques]
Madara: You sure can dance! *spits blood*
~smoke clears up~
Madara: But you-----
SFX gwuaaah!!!
Naruto: Let's see how good you can fight hand-to-hand Madara!
*madara is clearly dominating Naruto but Naruto's defensive skills were blocking Madara's movements*
Page 16
Madara: You can't keep this up forever Naruto!
SFX Aah!
SCENE 13-[Madara finds an open spot and is about to deliver his final blow]
Sasuke: Naruto! To your right!
Naruto: Heh!
SFX Psssh
Page 17
Madara: So Sasuke will be the one to read my moves eh?
Sasuke: Not only that bastard!
SCENE 14-[Sasuke punches Madara]
Madara: So it'd be your clone who'd read my moves ha? HA! Quite clever!
Sasuke: Hmph! You are a smart one! Hahah!
Page 18
SCENE 15-[Battle royale continues]
Sasuke: Naruto now!
Naruto: Yossh!!! Dattebayou! Uzumaki, Naruto RENDAN!!!
*Sasuke waits for Madara to hit the ground*
Sasuke: Uchiha's lone wolf KICK!
Page 19
*Madara gets hit on the trunk of the tree*
Madara: Hahahah, I just found a shortcut. Anyways, thanks for the fun!
FOCUS *BIG PICTURE*
Madara: Now I'll just take this fruit if you don't mind.
Editor's text Madara is about to get Kaguya's power :vision:
~END~
What do you guys think? xDD Sorry if you are disappointed
Just leave your opinions below
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