i like it, and its certainly much better than anything i could produce currently however from a technical perspective:
i feel as tho there is a real disconnection from left to right in this sig - even though the depth is fantastic it looks as if the render is sort of pasted on to something in the foreground that doesnt really hit right with the bg.
I also dont really like the blue cloud bubble effects uve used on the right side of the screen
I really like the c4d on the bottom left, but the one on the bottom right doesnt look right - uve done the right thing to create that middle ground of depth but the part of the c4d uve used doesnt fit IMO
I really like the border effect and the effect around the focal, just a few things here and there...once again, pav you're a genious, just some small things <3
Nothin but love brah, i should get back into this haha