[Predictions] Naruto Manga 667: Midnight Sun

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Obito has taken Naruto along with Sakura to the "other" world to heal him. In the meantime, Gai and his squad has shown up to help Kakashi and Minato. What will happen?!

Kamui Dimension

Sakura: [Looking Around] What . . . what is this place?

Obito: [Determined Look] This is a universe that my eye is connected to. Only I can access this realm. [Looks Around] . . . I used to go here when I was younger if I needed time or just wanted to be by myself. [Flashback of Rin]

Sakura: [Sentimental] [Angry] No! You don't get to be sad! You swayed Sasuke to the dark side and that's why he wanted to attack Konoha! You're also responsible for the Fox infiltrating our village all those years ago aren't you?! Half of this is your fault!!! And why, because you lost someone important to you?! Naruto lost his parents, Sasuke lost his family, and you lost some girl and that's why you try to kill all of us?!?!

Obito: [Ashamed] I know how you feel, please ---

Sakura: No! I want a legitimate answer from you and not some half-ass one about your feelings because I can promise you; half of the villagers will still hate and despise you even with your change-of-heart!

???: Enough, Sakura.

Sakura: [Surprised] Oh my gosh, Naruto! [Bends Down and Hugs him]

Obito: So it worked. Good.

Naruto: [Sits up] [Begins Coughing]

Sakura: Don't try and move too much! You're still very weak.

Naruto: Sakura, where's my dad and Kakashi-sensei?

Sakura: They're back in the real world battling Madara as we speak.

Naruto: Then I have to go! I can't just lie here while my teacher and family fights by themselves! [Tries to Leave]

Obito and Sakura: No! Stay down Naruto!

Naruto: [Struggling] [Begins Coughing Profusely] [Looks Down at Hand] *Blood [Surprised]

Sakura: You need to stay here and mold some chakra.

Obito: And even that won't be enough. There's something the Kyuubi told me after Zetsu had stolen him. He came to me in my consciousness . . .

Flashback

Obito: [Floating in Murky Water]

???: Oi! What the hell are you taking a swim for?! You're being used out there and you don't even have a problem with it?!

Obito: [Slowly Turns Head Left to Right] Who's . . . there?

Yin Kurama: It's me you dumbass! We have to figure out a plan to escape.

Obito: [Weakly Laughs] Yeah right. I've already tried escaping. Zetsu is just too strong.

Yin Kurama: [Stares at Obito with disgust] You're the one who managed to control me all those years back?! How ****ing pathetic I must've been to lose myself to a pansy like you!!!

Obito: [Silent]

Yin Kurama: Although you've done a complete 360, I actually preferred the old you; at least that one had some self-confidence! Or is that only because you were mimicking Madara?!

Obito: What do you want from me?

Yin Kurama:[Leans Forward] I need you to get your ass up and help me get out of here. After that, you can lay back down and sulk.

Obito: [Looking at Kurama]

Flashback/

Obito: He also asked me to get close enough to Madara and try to steal back a portion of the Bijuu he took.

Sakura: Well?! Did you do it?

Obito: Yeah, I got some of the old Kyuubi and the Ichibi back.

Naruto: What was the point of that?

Obito: I'm not sure. Kurama told me it was important though. So, I'm going to seal a those two inside of you. It should help your recovery process! Are you ready? Lay down.

Naruto: [Closes Eyes] [Lays Down]

Obito: [Puts Hands Over Chest] Hrmm!!!

The portion of the Bijuu's exit Obito's body and sinks into Naruto's. His eyes begin to flutter and he feels chakra surging throughout his body.

Naruto: [Gasp] [Blinding White Light Overtakes Kamui World]

Sakura: [Arms Up] Naruto!!!

Obito: What's going on?!

White Room

Naruto: Where am I?

???: [Behind Him] It's finally time we met, Naruto.

Naruto: Hmm? [Turns Around] [Gasp]

In the Real World

Kakashi: [Huffing] Be careful Gai! Maintain your distance!

Gai: [In Gates dodging Madara's Attacks] Shit he's fast! At this rate, he'll catch me!

Minato: [Determined] Hold on! I'm coming!

Madara: Tch. How annoying. [Speed Blitz]

Minato: He's coming for me?!

Madara: [Right in Front of Minato] [Disappears]

Minato: What the ---- !!!!

Kakashi: !!!

Madara: [Appears Behind Him] [Creates Black Stake]

Gai: KAKASHI!!!!!

Minato: No!!! Flying Thunder God; Version 4!!! Raijin!!! [Vanquishes]

Gai: Seventh Gate Open!!! [Charges]

Madara: Not fast enough. [Stabs Kakashi through the Heart]

Kakashi: *Grghhgrh [Falls on Knees] [Falls Down]

Minato: [Appears Next to Madara] Ultra Rasengan!!! Gai, get Kakashi out of here!!! [Strikes]

Madara: [Dodges] [Creates Six Stakes Out of Body] [Spins and Impales Minato with all of them]

Minato: [Falls] Shit! I can't move. !!!

Madara: [Stake through the Head] That's enough of you.

Minato: [Eyes fade]

Madara: Two down. One to go.

Gai: You... you... ****ing MONSTER!!!!! EIGHT GATE OF DEATH OPEN!!!!!!!!!!

A bright red light consumes Gai in a fiery haze. It forms a sphere that stretches for miles upon miles. In the night air, it's as bright as a . . . Midnight Sun!!!
 
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You are a very good writer. You always know how to convey emotions and keep characters consistent. Well done my friend. Only qualm is the part about Obito saying he used to go to the Kamui dimension when he wanted to get away when he was younger. He couldn't. He awakened the 2 Tomoe Sharingan when they were saving Rin from the Mist ninja the first time. Kamui was awakened when he "phased" through the boulders. He didn't even know of its existence until he was going to Kakashi and Rin's site and subsequently went on a rampage.
 

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Gai: [In Gates dodging Madara's Attacks] Shit he's fast! At this rate, he'll catch me!

Minato: [Determined] Hold on! I'm coming!

Madara: Tch. How annoying. [Speed Blitz]

Minato: He's coming for me?!

Madara: [Right in Front of Minato] [Disappears]

Minato: What the ---- !!!!

Kakashi: !!!

Madara: [Appears Behind Him] [Creates Black Stake]

Gai: KAKASHI!!!!!

Minato: No!!! Flying Thunder God; Version 4!!! Raijin!!! [Vanquishes]

Gai: Seventh Gate Open!!! [Charges]

Madara: Not fast enough. [Stabs Kakashi through the Heart]

Kakashi: *Grghhgrh [Falls on Knees] [Falls Down]

Minato: [Appears Next to Madara] Ultra Rasengan!!! Gai, get Kakashi out of here!!! [Strikes]

Madara: [Dodges] [Creates Six Stakes Out of Body] [Spins and Impales Minato with all of them]

Minato: [Falls] Shit! I can't move. !!!

Madara: [Stake through the Head] That's enough of you.

Minato: [Eyes fade]

Madara: Two down. One to go.

Gai: You... you... ****ing MONSTER!!!!! EIGHT GATE OF DEATH OPEN!!!!!!!!!!

A bright red light consumes Gai in a fiery haze. It forms a sphere that stretches for miles upon miles. In the night air, it's as bright as a . . . Midnight Sun!!!

^^The suspense and emotion here is surreal!
 

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Finally found really good prediction thread, and I enjoyed it for the most part, I mean most people can't write prediction thread like seriously always make look like a Joke
 
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