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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Tanmirā) - Summoning Technique: Tanmirā
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Tanmirā is a female Tanuki that stands at four and a half feet tall. She wears a traditional straw hat, holds a bottle of sake in one hand and a hand mirror in the other. Tanmirā was never fit for direct combat lacking the physical ability for taijutsu and the use of elemental ninjutsu. But she was quite intelligent and discovered a gift for trickery through genjutsu. She developed her own personal technique in which she mirrors techniques used during a battle, though only as an illusion. In the illusion the opponent sees the technique cast and if hit they experience the effects. For example if the illusion is used to cast gushing water imprisonment, the target will see themselves caught in the water prison. Any technique that is supposed to cause damage will break the illusion when the target is hit, though of course no real physical damage comes to them. The rank of the illusion matches the rank of the technique copied, though Tanmirā can only copy techniques up to A-rank. She can also transform herself into a hand mirror which when held by the user gives him access to this genjutsu. Since it is now the user using the genjutsu, they are allowed to copy any technique that has been used during the match.
-Lasts four turns.
-Casting the illusion counts as a move in the user's turn.
-Can only copy techniques used after summoned.
-Can only copy A-rank and below techniques.
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-Declined- Nice one, but it's way too broad, approving something like this will only cause confusions and problems in the future.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: This is an advanced clone technique that was created in order to bring forth the tailed beasts into the human world in forms much more acceptable to the people around them. The Jinchuriki will form three hand seals and finish with the typical hand seal for the shadow clone technique. Rather then using their own chakra to create the clone they allow their Bijuu to channel its chakra through them providing what is necessary for the clone. This results in the creation of a clone that is made purely of their Bijuu's chakra, but given a human form. The clone has three seals on the back of its neck. The first reads "spirit" which is used to bind the Bijuu's consciousness to the clone. The second reads "control" which the Jinchuriki can use to bind the clone, a safeguard in case the Bijuu decided to act in undesirable ways. The third reads "vanquish" which when activated disperses the clone, returning the Bijuu's consciousness and chakra to the Jinchuriki. While in this clone form the Bijuu can use techniques of the elements it specializes in (Sand and Wind for Shukaku, Lava, Earth and Fire for Son Goku, etc.) as well as Bijutsu and Taijutsu. As the clone is made of the Bijuu's chakra, it can use it in the same way as the Jinchuriki to create the Chakra Shroud technique and incomplete transformation, but as its chakra is limited it can't use its complete transformation. If the clone uses the initial transformation once the technique ends the clone disperses. This technique is not without its drawbacks. The host also cannot go into full transformation until the clone disperses. Since this clone is the Bijuu incarnate, once per battle it is able to use the tailed beast bomb (no transformation needed), though since its not the full power of the bijuu the damage is reduced by 20.
-Can be used once per battle.
-No other clones can be in use at the same time.
-Must have mastered non-medical fuuinjutsu.
-The clone using the Chakra Shroud counts towards the user's three usage limit.
-Host cannot use the full transformation while the clone is active.
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-Declined- All of it is fine apart from the usage of the tailed beast ball without transformation and using the incomplete transformation, that won't be accepted, also if you wanted for your bijuu to communicate with other people you can just make a standard shadow clone and the bijuu can speak through it, like how Kurama spoken to Kakashi and Gai through Naruto xD
Cut back on its drawbacks, added that it can use initial transformation and the TBB (though reduced effect) as a unique ability since it won't need to transform to use it. I figure the stuff with the consciousness, sealing and bijuu abilities is enough to separate it from standard shadow clones. To be honest the main reason I wanted this was so the bijuu could interact directly with other people during battles/RP, so its fine if its a little less practical than a normal shadow clone.
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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Tanmirā) - Summoning Technique: Tanmirā
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Tanmirā is a female Tanuki that stands at four and a half feet tall. She wears a traditional straw hat, holds a bottle of sake in one hand and a hand mirror in the other. Tanmirā was never fit for direct combat lacking the physical ability for taijutsu and the use of elemental ninjutsu. But she was quite intelligent and discovered a gift for trickery through genjutsu. She developed her own personal technique in which she mirrors techniques used during a battle, though only as an illusion. In the illusion the opponent sees the technique cast and if hit they experience the effects. For example if the illusion is used to cast gushing water imprisonment, the target will see themselves caught in the water prison. Any technique that is supposed to cause damage will break the illusion when the target is hit, though of course no real physical damage comes to them. The rank of the illusion matches the rank of the technique copied, though Tanmirā can only copy techniques up to A-rank. She can also transform herself into a hand mirror which when held by the user gives him access to this genjutsu. Since it is now the user using the genjutsu, they are allowed to copy any technique that has been used during the match.
-Lasts four turns.
-Casting the illusion counts as a move in the user's turn.
-Can only copy techniques used after summoned.
-Can only copy A-rank and below techniques.
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-Declined- Nice one, but it's way too broad, approving something like this will only cause confusions and problems in the future.
(Bijutsu: Bijuu Keshin) - Tailed Beast Skill: Tailed Beast Incarnation(Bijutsu: Bijuu Keshin) - Tailed Beast Skill: Tailed Beast Incarnation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: This is an advanced clone technique that was created in order to bring forth the tailed beasts into the human world in forms much more acceptable to the people around them. The Jinchuriki will form three hand seals and finish with the typical hand seal for the shadow clone technique. Rather then using their own chakra to create the clone they allow their Bijuu to channel its chakra through them providing what is necessary for the clone. This results in the creation of a clone that is made purely of their Bijuu's chakra, but given a human form. The clone has three seals on the back of its neck. The first reads "spirit" which is used to bind the Bijuu's consciousness to the clone. The second reads "control" which the Jinchuriki can use to bind the clone, a safeguard in case the Bijuu decided to act in undesirable ways. The third reads "vanquish" which when activated disperses the clone, returning the Bijuu's consciousness and chakra to the Jinchuriki. While in this clone form the Bijuu can use techniques of the elements it specializes in (Sand and Wind for Shukaku, Lava, Earth and Fire for Son Goku, etc.) as well as Bijutsu and Taijutsu. As the clone is made of the Bijuu's chakra, it can use it in the same way as the Jinchuriki to create the Chakra Shroud technique, but, as the clone possesses only a limited amount of chakra it cannot go into its incomplete or complete transformations. If the clone uses the chakra shroud once the technique ends the clone disperses. This technique is not without its drawbacks. Any passive ability (i.e. Gaara's Shield of Sand or the Jinchuriki's immunity to genjutsu) is lost, though elements such as sand, lava, bubbles, etc. are still usable as the majority of the Bijuu's chakra still remains within the host. The host also cannot go into their incomplete or full transformation until the clone disperses.
-Can be used once per battle.
-No other clones can be in use at the same time.
-Must have mastered non-medical fuuinjutsu.
-The clone using the Chakra Shroud counts towards the user's three usage limit.
-Host loses their immunity to genjutsu while the clone exists.
-Host cannot use the incomplete or full transformation.
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-Declined- It does exactly what the normal Shadow Clone Technique does, it's not an advanced version of it, it's actually a weaker version, you can see when Madara faught Naruto and used the Wood Release: Deep Forest Emergance, Naruto "clone" had the Kyuubi give him more chakra, even though he was a clone, also when Naruto was training, some of his clones were turning into the Kyuubi's chakra cloak, it means that the bijuu is within every clone you make, i don't mind if you still want this though, but you need something special for it to make it unique and not a rip off of the Shadow Clone Technique.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: This is an advanced clone technique that was created in order to bring forth the tailed beasts into the human world in forms much more acceptable to the people around them. The Jinchuriki will form three hand seals and finish with the typical hand seal for the shadow clone technique. Rather then using their own chakra to create the clone they allow their Bijuu to channel its chakra through them providing what is necessary for the clone. This results in the creation of a clone that is made purely of their Bijuu's chakra, but given a human form. The clone has three seals on the back of its neck. The first reads "spirit" which is used to bind the Bijuu's consciousness to the clone. The second reads "control" which the Jinchuriki can use to bind the clone, a safeguard in case the Bijuu decided to act in undesirable ways. The third reads "vanquish" which when activated disperses the clone, returning the Bijuu's consciousness and chakra to the Jinchuriki. While in this clone form the Bijuu can use techniques of the elements it specializes in (Sand and Wind for Shukaku, Lava, Earth and Fire for Son Goku, etc.) as well as Bijutsu and Taijutsu. As the clone is made of the Bijuu's chakra, it can use it in the same way as the Jinchuriki to create the Chakra Shroud technique and incomplete transformation, but as its chakra is limited it can't use its complete transformation. If the clone uses the initial transformation once the technique ends the clone disperses. This technique is not without its drawbacks. The host also cannot go into full transformation until the clone disperses. Since this clone is the Bijuu incarnate, once per battle it is able to use the tailed beast bomb (no transformation needed), though since its not the full power of the bijuu the damage is reduced by 20.
-Can be used once per battle.
-No other clones can be in use at the same time.
-Must have mastered non-medical fuuinjutsu.
-The clone using the Chakra Shroud counts towards the user's three usage limit.
-Host cannot use the full transformation while the clone is active.
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-Declined- All of it is fine apart from the usage of the tailed beast ball without transformation and using the incomplete transformation, that won't be accepted, also if you wanted for your bijuu to communicate with other people you can just make a standard shadow clone and the bijuu can speak through it, like how Kurama spoken to Kakashi and Gai through Naruto xD
Cut back on its drawbacks, added that it can use initial transformation and the TBB (though reduced effect) as a unique ability since it won't need to transform to use it. I figure the stuff with the consciousness, sealing and bijuu abilities is enough to separate it from standard shadow clones. To be honest the main reason I wanted this was so the bijuu could interact directly with other people during battles/RP, so its fine if its a little less practical than a normal shadow clone.
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