[Predictions] Humanity fails! (my first pridiction. :D)

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<(..)> -> Thoughts/Scene
{...} -> flashback

<(Madara finally shows up in front of kakashi and others)>
Madara-You're as clumsy as always, black zetsu.
Bz-oiii, Madara-sama. These guys are a bit afterall. Even it took you several minutes to fight them, you know?
Madara-Don't put me on the same level as you, or them. Especially not now. I've wasted much time talking..It's time for the ceremonies to begin-The flower of despair will bloom as the last hope of this deceased world!

Kakashi-It's time dead men go back to sleep. I'm afraid this is the end of you-Uchiha Madara. Sensei?
<(Minato takes out several of his kunai, with a grave look on his face)>
{ It's because I'm a Father....}
{ well, I know you're just as bada*s as mom! ;)}
{ I can handle all this pain..I'm the son of the yondaime afterall!}
{ It's because I'm a Father....}
Minato-Kushina, I promised you I'll protect naruto at all cost. Kazekage, medic-girl, I'll tell you the location where my body was sealed. Since I'm an edo tensei-you will be able to find the other half of the kyuubi there and take control from that black thing. Here's the way to undo the seal!
Meanwhile-I'll make sure the kyubbi doesn't get to the jubbi. Make it fast.

Gaara-Got it. Hold tight Sakura!
Sakura-Hai! <(nothing will happen to you naruto. I won't allow it at any cost!)>
<( *Sakura starts sending electrical pulses through naruto's veins* )>
I may not be a lightning-style user, but being a medic-nin, i am able to produce a little of this nature, just like tsunade-shisho!

Minato-Kakashi, I need a bit of a moment, I'm planning to use it now.
Kakashi-Got it. I will take care of everything meanwhile. <(Mangekyou sharingan)>
Madara- That borrowed power of yours won't be working against a true wielder of the Sharingan. Just seeing you makes me sick! You repel me, but you will be there in *my* world-so I guess I don't need you in this world!

<(Meanwhile..)>
Orochimaru-*Karin is afraid I might take over Sasuke. But I'm not planning anything of the sort until I see his wind*
Tobirama- My soul-transfer kinjutsu can still work on you. So it's better you start speaking if you don't want to end up causing casualities you won't like!
Mystery Person- What were you again? Ahh..The nidaime of the leaf village, right? But you don't need to worry..I will save this young man. Afterall, death was never a part of my plan!
Tobirama-Your plan? What do you mean?
Mystery person-You don't need to worry about that. All you can know is-I am the one who saved Madara at the valley of end. And I'm going to save this kid too. But you can rest in peace-I will release your edo-tensei.

Kakashi-Kuchiyose no jutsu:Dog pillars. <(four pillars surround Madara and BZ)>
Madara-You intend to stop me with mere pillars? So naive! Hah..you make me laugh!
Kakashi-Not *mere* pillars!
<(Lightning starts building up in the pillars-which are not of rock-but metal. The clouds all gather above the pillars)>
Kakashi- take that!
<(smoke)>
Madara-You forgot my onmyodon, did you? How foolish, calling yourself a shinobi?!
A bit too naive your thoughts are, that all of you have painted this dismal sheet of overconfidence in front of your eyes! And when you fail-it makes you fall, breaking you from the inside. *This is where the humanity fails*
<(suddenly madara and BZ freeze)>
Madara-What's this?
<(He notices weird shaped kunais all around them in circle with the pillars)>
Minato-Finally time for my *Rasen senko cho rinbuko sanshiki*!!!


So guys, how did you find it? :hooray:
I really wish this happens! Your thoughts?? :win:
 

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Not bad, A bit short but I liked it. :)
 

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I liked it, nice job...
 

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Thanks. :win:
And well, you saw all those clouds gather around the pillar?
I was thinking of doing something like sasuke's kirin, but didn't as i thought it'll be long! :shy:

Though it'd be good since Madara now has a weakness against nature's energy.
 

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It was good, I guess. I personally don't like predictions
 

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It was good, I guess. I personally don't like predictions

Cool.
But I like people discussing all the possibilities.
But two things i hate in predictions:
i. Giving your favorite char a bit too much of spotlight, it looks like they're the main characters! :|
ii. Pridicting somethings so soo stuppid-that you start doubting the existence of people with brains on earth! lol.. :p
 
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plausible, i believe it could be that same person, but kishi is quite obvious in his mysteries so i
think it probably will be kabuto based on previous mysteries.

i mean i knew it was obito the second i saw his hair. when he was disguised as tobi

and kabuto's foot is pretty recognizeable too, i mean he is the only one in the series using no shoes atm...
karin cant say that she recognize his chakra because kabuto has mixed his chakra with hundreds of shinobi
affiliated with orochimaru inc. thats why his chakra is unrecognizeable
 

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plausible, i believe it could be that same person, but kishi is quite obvious in his mysteries so i
think it probably will be kabuto based on previous mysteries.

i mean i knew it was obito the second i saw his hair. when he was disguised as tobi

and kabuto's foot is pretty recognizeable too, i mean he is the only one in the series using no shoes atm...
karin cant say that she recognize his chakra because kabuto has mixed his chakra with hundreds of shinobi
affiliated with orochimaru inc. thats why his chakra is unrecognizeable

Could be, it's Kishi afterall.

But i wanted it to be this same character who saved Madara as it would be a hugel-gigantic plot development and fun! :hooray:
 
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