Chapter 664 : Are you f...ing kidding me ?!!?

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come on !!! imagine you are reading this as a whole ... madara does all that shit and becomes 10tails jin , then he spits out rikudou's ninja tools on gai and lee !!! it's even worse if you read it all published

So what?


Where's the bad writing
 

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So what?


Where's the bad writing

ITs called suspension of disbelief, every writer has to work with the readers sense of what they believe is believable. Kishi just happens to ignore that concept in totality.
 

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So what?


Where's the bad writing

judging by your ava and sig you are a madara fan !! are you really happy with this ??! in your opinion is it normal for his character to do something like this ??! not caring for such important tools !! won't you get mad if he be defeated by those , that he just spitted out and happened to fall on gai and lee ??

I don't know , but imo it's just poor !!
 

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judging by your ava and sig you are a madara fan !! are you really happy with this ??! in your opinion is it normal for his character to do something like this ??! not caring for such important tools !! won't you get mad if he be defeated by those , that he just spitted out and happened to fall on gai and lee ??

I don't know , but imo it's just poor !!


He doesn't need em not ATM

Would ever waste a shotgun a few ants?
 

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ITs called suspension of disbelief, every writer has to work with the readers sense of what they believe is believable. Kishi just happens to ignore that concept in totality.


lol Madara is stronger than ever a now and he doesn't need those tools


The suspension of disbelief has nothing to do with anything in this chapter
 

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Lots of assumptions here. Madara would never be defeated by ninja tools. That's absurd.
 

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i have to agree with the minato point.this guy was suppossed to be the fastest ever and he couldnt simply blitz BZ obito? or prevent him from stealing kurama? hmmm
 

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I liked it...despite its flaws.!!
 
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My thoughts exactly. I dont think it was a bad chapter specifically, I mean its been like this for the last year or so. This is what Kishi's doing now, silly stuff "Oh, whats this in my throat CHHHHHHHH ptoooi! Oh, just a 5 foot barrel and a gourd. Better out than in I always say."

WTF

So what, Zetsu slips under Minatos hand while hes TOUCHING NARUTOS SKIN and doesnt even realize it? Hes day dreaming in the middle of a life and death war? And then suddenly so slow he cant take a swipe at ZETSU? Seriously ZETSU is too fast for the 4th?

This isnt the Naruto Shippuuden I loved anymore.
 

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My thoughts exactly. I dont think it was a bad chapter specifically, I mean its been like this for the last year or so. This is what Kishi's doing now, silly stuff "Oh, whats this in my throat CHHHHHHHH ptoooi! Oh, just a 5 foot barrel and a gourd. Better out than in I always say."

WTF

So what, Zetsu slips under Minatos hand while hes TOUCHING NARUTOS SKIN and doesnt even realize it? Hes day dreaming in the middle of a life and death war? And then suddenly so slow he cant take a swipe at ZETSU? Seriously ZETSU is too fast for the 4th?

This isnt the Naruto Shippuuden I loved anymore.

Yup its full of "I'm Minato Namikaze! The Fastest Shinobi alive" Oh crap forgot to take my super fast shinobi pills this morning DAMN. Oh crap Naruto SOO fast he can deflect Bijudamas with his HEAD! Oh wait I'm slow as a pudding on a bad day again Lawl.

Inconsistent powers which are SUBJECT to the plot! The plot should be SUBJECT to the characters capabilities and powers. Kishi does it the other way round.
 
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You know what's the most funniest thing ? Dark Kurama asked Minato to switch to sensor type, and yes he is not bound to use kurama's chakra to become a sensory type we did not see any cloak surrounding him + he did also in kakashi gaiden. And even so beeing a sensory type he did NOT sense dark zetsu at all. I know he is madara's will and stuff, but there is something weird.. either he doesn't posses chakra and is made out of pure nature which doesnt make any sense how someone's will is made of nature chakra or i just dont know.
 

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Is there still 9Tails Chakra inside that Jar? Maybe the ninja tools will revive Naruto instead of being used on Madara or something. Seems like a lame plot thrown in there otherwise.

I also didn't like how they're dragging this Mysterious Figure by Sasuke stuff out for probably several more chapters.
 

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My thoughts exactly. I dont think it was a bad chapter specifically, I mean its been like this for the last year or so. This is what Kishi's doing now, silly stuff "Oh, whats this in my throat CHHHHHHHH ptoooi! Oh, just a 5 foot barrel and a gourd. Better out than in I always say."

WTF

So what, Zetsu slips under Minatos hand while hes TOUCHING NARUTOS SKIN and doesnt even realize it? Hes day dreaming in the middle of a life and death war? And then suddenly so slow he cant take a swipe at ZETSU? Seriously ZETSU is too fast for the 4th?

This isnt the Naruto Shippuuden I loved anymore.

i feel the same for a long time now !

Yup its full of "I'm Minato Namikaze! The Fastest Shinobi alive" Oh crap forgot to take my super fast shinobi pills this morning DAMN. Oh crap Naruto SOO fast he can deflect Bijudamas with his HEAD! Oh wait I'm slow as a pudding on a bad day again Lawl.

Inconsistent powers which are SUBJECT to the plot! The plot should be SUBJECT to the characters capabilities and powers. Kishi does it the other way round.

well said !!
 

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You know what's the most funniest thing ? Dark Kurama asked Minato to switch to sensor type, and yes he is not bound to use kurama's chakra to become a sensory type we did not see any cloak surrounding him + he did also in kakashi gaiden. And even so beeing a sensory type he did NOT sense dark zetsu at all. I know he is madara's will and stuff, but there is something weird.. either he doesn't posses chakra and is made out of pure nature which doesnt make any sense how someone's will is made of nature chakra or i just dont know.

yeah i totally forgot that !! Minato changed to sensori type before black zetsu came for god's sake !!!!
 

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I did like how he had plenty of room for 9 tailed beast but no more room for a simple bucket.

~That just had to go~. Gee wonder why? Asspull in its purest form.

And Props to Black Zetsu. Dude be wrecking Team Minato like a champ.

IDK what Sakura can do now for Naruto. Props for the effort I guess.

And now the villains have all 9 tailed beast and the SA have a bucket...

Whatever happens in the future happens, but I just got a feeling it will be worse than Juubito vs Carebear Katana
 

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The OP skipped anger management class this week...
 
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