[Predictions] Naruto Chapter Prediction 664 - Broken

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Who has approched Sasuke's lifeless body

Page 1

????- Indeed this is a mess

The mysterious figure kneels down over Sasuke

????- Why did I revive that monster

The mysterious figure starts to heal Sasuke

????- This isn't good he's lost too much blood

Orochimaru, Karin, suigetsu and Jugo Arrive

Orochimaru- Kabuto I'm surprised you are here

Kabuto- The Genjustu Itachi Put on me lasted longer then I thought it would

Suigetsu- Look at Sasuke he looks awful

Karin punches Suigetsu

Karin- SHUT UP!!! he is still handsome even when he is dying

Orochimaru- Karin help Kabuto now

Karin- Got it

Page 2

Naruto, Garra and Sakura Arrive where Minato is

Garra- Lord Fourth

Kakashi- Naruto!!

Minato- What's happend

Garra- Madara took the Nine tails out of him

Kakashi Impossible!

Black Zetsu- You can't stop Madara

Obito- Gah!

Garra- The Nine tails said the only way to save naruto is to put the other half of the nine tail in him

Minato- Okay Ill do it right away but it may take sometime

Page-3

The spiral Zetsu on the attack again.

Tsunade- I need time to get chakra back to help

Shizune- Me two

Hiruzen- Nevermind just let me handle this guy in the meantime

Spiral Zetzu- Hmph

Shizune- My lady we need retreat back

Tsunade- Okay

Spiral Zetsu- Wood release Thousand hands Buddha

The broken Buddha is fixed

Onoki- He fix it

Mei- The Third hokage Is the only one with chakra

Raikage- Its attacking!!

Hiruzen- Fire style dragon flame bomb

Spiral Zetsu- You need a power jutsu to bring this down

Shizune- The third burnt its hands

Tsunade- No good he can just fix it right back up

Something Flies over there battle

Spiral Zetsu- Madara's chakra

Hiruzen- We are out matched

Page 3

Image of Madara landing

This take up all the page

Madara- Its time Obito

Page 4

Black Zetsu- Master!

Minato- He has absorbed all the bijuu's already

Garra- Keep focused Lord fourth

Madara- What are you doing to Naruto

Black Zetsu- The fourth hokage has apart of the Nine Tails in him

Madara- Really! Its the case give it to me

Minato- Damn Im an open target

Garra and Kakashi stand in front of Minato and Naruto

Kakashi- I will not let you harm any of them

Garra- Sakura keep with the foruth and Naruto

Kakashi- Garra Stay behind me

Madara- I have the power of the God what could you do

Sand grips his legs and Madara jumps up

Madara- I hate sand!

Kakashi is powerinf Kamui Up and Garra I unleashing Sand attacks

Kakashi- Got ya KAMUI!!

The Kamui forms round Madara's left Arm where he is holding the staff

Madara- So the sand was a to get my attention!!

Madara manages to move out the way but loses the staff

Kakashi- Too fast

Garra least you got the staff

Page 5

Back to Orochimaru and the others

Karin- Come on Sasuke

Orochimaru looking at in the distance

Jugo- You can feel it as well

Orochimaru- Yes

Suigetsu- Eh?

Kabuto- That is Madara

Orochimaru- You revived him

Kabuto- Yes

Orochimaru- Well that was a mistake

Jugo looking over at Tobirama

Jugo- The second Hokage

Jugo and Orochimaru go to him

Tobirama- Gah!

page 6

Madara- I think Ill play with you for a bit

Kakashi- Lightning Blade!

Madara forms another staff from the black orbs and block Kakashi's attack

Madara- A sharingan

Minato- Hang in there Kakashi

Obito- Kill me already

Black Zetsu- your time is coming

Sakura- Fourth are you nearly done

Minato- No Its taking longer with one arm

Garra- Sand Tsunami

Madara splits it in half

Madara- Childs play

Kakashi appears at the back of Madara

Kakashi- Lightning blade!

Madara flips over Kakashi

Madara- Nice try but I could sense you

Garra- He's too fast

Page 7

The Buddha Hits Hiruzen

Hiruzen- Damn!!

Spiral Zetsu- Ill end this game

Shikamaru- Shadow imitation!! Quick Choji grab the Third

Choji- Expansion jutsu!!

Choji grabs the Third

Hiruzen- you didnt have to do that

Shikamaru- Actually we did you are the only one with unlimited chakra

The Buddha Attacks again

Ino- Choji lord third get out of there

Shikamaru- Damn!! it broke out

Choza appears and takes the hit

Choji- Dad!!!

Choza hits the floor

Page 8

Orochimaru- Lord second are you okay

Tobirama- Yes but what what about the young uchiha

Orochimaru- He's not doing do good

Tobirama- I need to help Fight Madara

Jugo- His power is too stong

Karin- SASUKE!!!

Kabuto- Shit when I thought we had him back he's slipping away again

Orochimaru- I have a plan

Page 9

Madara Is still playing with Kakashi

Garra- Sand Shower

Madara taps Garra which knock's him over to Minato

Minato- Kazekage!

Kakashi- Fire Style fire ball jutsu

Madara- Oh fire style

Madara returns the flames to Kakashi but with more power

Minato- Kakashi!!

Kakashi- Earth Style Mud wall

Madara- Earth Style as well

Kakashi- Earth and Fire no use Ill use water then

Madara hits kakashi

Sakura- Sensei

Garra catches him

Kakashi- Too stong

Page 10

Kabuto- whatever the plan is hurry uo and do it

Orochimaru- Lord second Is your flying thunder God seal still on Obito

Tobirama- I think so why

Orochimaru- I want you to take us to Obito

Karin- We can't move Sasuke

Jugo- What Is your plan Orochimaru

Orochimaru- Jugo come with me

Page 11

Spiral Zetsu still on the offensive

Choji- Near his dad's side

Choza- Did I get to you in time

Choji- Medic!!

Choza- Its too late for me you are the next generation just like Ino and shikamaru

Choza eyes close

Choji-No dad!

Shikamrau arrive and his side with Ino

Shikamaru- Choji?

Choji- Lets get that bastard

Choji's butterfly wings emerge

Shikamaru- Ino get me in touch with everyone

Ino- Okay

Shikamaru- Listen to me everyone we need to finish this guy of before he get us

Tsunade- Shizune Is your chakra ready

Shizune- Yea Im ready to fight

Page 12

Orochimaru- Lord first we are here to help

Orochimaru removes the rods

Hashirama- I dont know if Ill be of some use

Jugo- we need to return to Sasuke

Hashirama- What happend

Page 13

Madara goes for Obito

Garra- Sand Dome

Madara- Trying to protect yourselves

Madara breaks down the dome

Minato- I'm only half way through

Sakura- What!

Black Zetsu- Hurry up Master

Madara- Hmph I'm bored

Madara strikes

Page 14

Hashirama- Madara obtained all the Bijuus

Orochimaru- Yes

Hashirama starts to crumble

Jugo- what's happening

Orochimaru- Looks like your reanimation is failing

Hashirama- Must have been because I was stripped of Sage Jutsu and the black rods messed me uo as well

Tobirama-Brother we have a big problem

Hashimara- Yes I know

Jugo- Please Orochimaru what is your plan

Orochimaru- I want the First to give Sasuke some of his cells

Page 15

Tsunade and Shizine punch some of the Buddha hands off put left them open for the other hands to Attack

Shizune- Shit

Tsunade- Damn!

Hiruzen- Shadow shuriken Jutsu

Mei- Solid Fog Jutsu

Raikage- horizontal Chop

Onoki- Weight boulder Jutsu

Choji- Bullet Butterfly Punch

Shizune- Thanks

Tsunade- Just in time

Shikamaru- He keeps fixing it

Spiral Zetsu- .......

Page 16

Sai is seen landing

Tobirama- You mean to give him the Rinnegan

Hashirama- I'm just a corpse

Orochimaru- But I have your DNA in me

Orochimaru Spits a bit of himself out

Orochimaru- Kabuto, Karin stay here and put the DNA in Sasuke

Tobirama- What about us

Orochimaru- we are going to pay Madara Vist

Orochimaru, Jugo, Suigetsu and Hashirama grab on to Tobirama

Hashirama- What about you boy

Sai- Ill help the others

Tobirama and the other vanish and Sai gets on his Ink bird and flies towards the Buddha

Page 17

Madara is about to kill Kakashi but

Tobirama- Water style water wall

Madara- Gah!

Orochimaru- Shadow striking snake

The two moves catch Madara off guard and knock him down

Hashirama- Are you all okay

Minato- Lord First

Orochimaru- Kakashi take you and the other to the Kamui dimension

Kakashi- Okay

Black Zetsu- No you dont

Obito- AHHHH!!!

Orochimaru's head stretches outs and bites the black Zetsu on the neck releasing him from Obito's body

Minato- Now Kakashi

Kakashi uses Kamui But leaves him and Garra to fight Madara with the others

Page 19

Obito- Kakashi!!

Minato- Damn he should have come with us

Kakashi and Garra appear

Kakashi- Sorry I had to take a breather

Garra- Is Naruto Okay

Sakura- No he' nearly gone

Minato- I'm nearly finished

Page 20

Big picture that covers the whole page

The black Staff Kakashi sent to this Dimension Appears in front of them

Kakashi- That should have been destroyed

Minato- Everyone its complete Naruto has the other half

Sakura- Okay Naturo let me hear your heart

Page 21

Big Picture that covers the page

Hasiramas DNA Complete

Kabuto- Done

Karin- What do we do now

Kabuto- We Try and get his heart beating

Page 22

The black staff starts to shine

What is the is the Six paths Staff Doing in front of them

Will Naruto and Sasuke Survive

Next Chapter 665- Anger
 

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"Orochimaru- Kabuto I'm surprised you are here" Oro never speaks like this
"Karin- SHUT UP!!! he is still handsome even when he is dying" If he was beaten up badly, OK; but when he is "dying", Karin never speaks like that

other than these, it was good bro :)
 

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I'm not going to lie I like this the only thing I didn't like is sasuke getting te rinnigan tht is it because even when madara had firsts DNA it took him at the very least 40 something years cuz he achieved it when he was old
So even if sasuke were to survive by ur logic he wouldn't have the rinnigan..
 

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An interesting Idea, very different from what I have read. Great Work anyway
 

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I'm not going to lie I like this the only thing I didn't like is sasuke getting te rinnigan tht is it because even when madara had firsts DNA it took him at the very least 40 something years cuz he achieved it when he was old
So even if sasuke were to survive by ur logic he wouldn't have the rinnigan..

when he harnesses Jubbi more easily and quickly than a wink, be rest assured that he can do any other thing
 
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Thanks for all the comments. Yea some things I should have changed to make it a bit more less Sasuke Getting Rinnegan and Hasiramas DNA I just thought in the Manga it may turn out like that
 
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Some character's personalities where a tad off, but I really really enjoyed that!!! Nice thoughts dude!
 

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I didn't finish reading. But personally in my opinion I don't see any of the Edo hokages coming into play besides the third and that's only for so long, hashirama and tobirama are out and minato can very well disappear after doing the tailed beast transplant and that would make the fourth no longer there so the fourth Edo hokage is rendered useless and it really does come down to the new generation which I like so much more. The Edo hokages had to go down at some point. I don't think transplanting the foc into naruto is going to be a long process either. All he does is need to undo the seal and kurama needs to release himself out and then minato just have to transfer and do a new sealing. I'm sure if minato can do the RPS, seal the heavy chakra of the nine tails in himself, get stabbed by a kyuubi claw, and still seal the nine tails in naruto I'm sure he can seal the fox before he disappears. Bottom line is, it's not going to take time. But I do like the idea of kakashi and gaara vs madara but I'd have to expect one of them dying I've thought about it too and honestly the only thing shielding gaara or kakashi or anyone from getting seriously killed by madara for that matter is plot. If we are speaking logically, Madara and Obito had the power of the god of the Narutoverse. By logic nobody should have been able to pose a threat to either of them, and that the two could literally annilhate anybody if they were truly trying to. And just for plot reasons the main characters aren't gonna die so therefore that means we don't see any of madaras true power use effectively. Which is lame. Which is why naruto needs to deliever the final blow w old rikudos help in some god form. Old Rikudo is not as strong as current madara and so therefore narutos power plus old Rikudo I about even.
 
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And kakashi only has fire style in the anime I believe

Just finished reading, and no offense to u but I am just so sick of every single week a bunch of people make a new prediction after each chapter comes out and their prediction of the next chapter ends with "who is this mysterious figure?!" Or something to do w the sage coming. And eh it is possible for them for put senju DNA in Sasukes wound like madara it would make good sense, a good excuse as to how Sasuke would get senju DNA and NEED it at the same time. It's not like he asked for it he'd get it through means of survival
 
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Really way to much happened for in one chapter.
 

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I didn't finish reading. But personally in my opinion I don't see any of the Edo hokages coming into play besides the third and that's only for so long, hashirama and tobirama are out and minato can very well disappear after doing the tailed beast transplant and that would make the fourth no longer there so the fourth Edo hokage is rendered useless and it really does come down to the new generation which I like so much more. The Edo hokages had to go down at some point. I don't think transplanting the foc into naruto is going to be a long process either. All he does is need to undo the seal and kurama needs to release himself out and then minato just have to transfer and do a new sealing. I'm sure if minato can do the RPS, seal the heavy chakra of the nine tails in himself, get stabbed by a kyuubi claw, and still seal the nine tails in naruto I'm sure he can seal the fox before he disappears. Bottom line is, it's not going to take time. But I do like the idea of kakashi and gaara vs madara but I'd have to expect one of them dying I've thought about it too and honestly the only thing shielding gaara or kakashi or anyone from getting seriously killed by madara for that matter is plot. If we are speaking logically, Madara and Obito had the power of the god of the Narutoverse. By logic nobody should have been able to pose a threat to either of them, and that the two could literally annilhate anybody if they were truly trying to. And just for plot reasons the main characters aren't gonna die so therefore that means we don't see any of madaras true power use effectively. Which is lame. Which is why naruto needs to deliever the final blow w old rikudos help in some god form. Old Rikudo is not as strong as current madara and so therefore narutos power plus old Rikudo I about even.

I didn't finish reading urs either
 

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woww nice prediction dude
 

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Its not bad, some of the characters behavior is a little off but the over all idea is alright.
 
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