My attempt at a new manga!

Bantos

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Look at my sig.




Get on my level, noob.

I'm just kidding, but I suggest you use shading and highlights. Adding a little more detail to the clothes and stuff. Also recommend learning vector art.

What the fudge? Have YOU seen your sig? :D
 

Olorin

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Wasnt there a thread about a week ago about a "new manga coming out" and the main char was Aeys and he looked remarkably like your "concept" ;)

Btw, I'm sorry to be blunt but I'm sure every single battle anime fan has come much further than this while thinking about random manga stuff, if this is what you have after years of envisioning a manga it's very, very little, but that's not the biggest problem, that is art, that concept couldn't pass a manga, if after years that is the concept that's a problem ... It's way too simple and basic, maybe it would make a better impression if you drew him facing many different ways, it's a lot different to draw the characters facing forward or at different angles, even the forward facing caharacter doesn't look good but that's by faaaaar the easiest, it's much, much harder to draw him moving ... For example just drawing him with his hands in a different pose would be much tougher, and after that you get different facial expressions, moving limbs, different angles, backgrounds, ...

How goes it with all the character's backstories/personalities/relations/..., the general big plotline of the manga and the world-building?

Sorry but being nice about something that lacked quality never forced anyone to come far
 
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Jack Spicer

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Make a character similar to Bruce Lee and Arnold.

Hey Arnold?

I think it's well drawn. I love Soul Eater. The power is unique enough, so that's good. I don't like his appearance (clothes wise), but that's just me. I'm more curious about his attitude and more about the story.
 

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Ok come up with something new something no one has seen if u make something like something drawn already they will make youtube vidz about it (if u know what I mean) I myself have a few ideas but u might have to improve in drawing unless its not your best
 
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