[Premium Tournament Round #1] Sterling Malory Archer vs Cursed Prince

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lol yeah, lets have a good battle


Deidara arrives in this majestic looking forest, the waterfall off to his left. He can tell by looking that the man he is facing is Jiraiya, one of the legendary Sannin of the Leaf. Quite an impressive title, even rivaling his own as a member of the Akatsuki. But he knew he couldn't lose, he couldn't afford to.
For the sake of the Cursed Prince I will win! hmph
With that Deidara gathers the nearby moisture in the air in the form of a rock sized glob of water that is formed behind Jiraiya's head and is then slammed into the rear of his head, causing a damage equivalent to that of a solid smack in the back of his head, jerking his head violently forward. While the water was being formed Deidara had taken a windmill shuriken off his back and as once the mans head was hit forward and he would likely be facing the ground, charged that shuriken with a chidori and then thrown it towards Jiraiya's abdomen, aimed to pierce him where it would have paralyzing effects once it pierced. But, before it hit Deidara formed a single handseal and cause a large boar shaped lid 10x10 meters in size that wasnt solid, instead having a solid bottom, after the chidori shuriken hit this would follow up and crush the man into bits.

(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.

( Raiton: Fusei Shuriken Chidori Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Rigged Shuriken One Thousand Birds Style
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will utilize a large shuriken and channel a chidori into it. The user will then throw the shuriken charged with chidori towards the opponent resulting in paralysing them on impact. (paralysis lasts for 1 turn)
Note: Must Know Chidori

(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After doing the Snake handseal and slamming his hands on the ground, he user creates a portal above the target, high in the sky from which a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid drops and falls on the target, trapping it underneath. The lid can be hollow or solid, depending on if the user wants to deal damage to the enemy or not. Because of its size, to safely used, the lid has to be created at least mid range from the user otherwise he will also be caught inside. The biggest lid can dwarf a boss summon like Nagato's Dog or Gamabunta.
 

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lol yeah, lets have a good battle


Deidara arrives in this majestic looking forest, the waterfall off to his left. He can tell by looking that the man he is facing is Jiraiya, one of the legendary Sannin of the Leaf. Quite an impressive title, even rivaling his own as a member of the Akatsuki. But he knew he couldn't lose, he couldn't afford to.
For the sake of the Cursed Prince I will win! hmph
With that Deidara gathers the nearby moisture in the air in the form of a rock sized glob of water that is formed behind Jiraiya's head and is then slammed into the rear of his head, causing a damage equivalent to that of a solid smack in the back of his head, jerking his head violently forward. While the water was being formed Deidara had taken a windmill shuriken off his back and as once the mans head was hit forward and he would likely be facing the ground, charged that shuriken with a chidori and then thrown it towards Jiraiya's abdomen, aimed to pierce him where it would have paralyzing effects once it pierced. But, before it hit Deidara formed a single handseal and cause a large boar shaped lid 10x10 meters in size that wasnt solid, instead having a solid bottom, after the chidori shuriken hit this would follow up and crush the man into bits.

(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.

( Raiton: Fusei Shuriken Chidori Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Rigged Shuriken One Thousand Birds Style
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will utilize a large shuriken and channel a chidori into it. The user will then throw the shuriken charged with chidori towards the opponent resulting in paralysing them on impact. (paralysis lasts for 1 turn)
Note: Must Know Chidori

(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After doing the Snake handseal and slamming his hands on the ground, he user creates a portal above the target, high in the sky from which a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid drops and falls on the target, trapping it underneath. The lid can be hollow or solid, depending on if the user wants to deal damage to the enemy or not. Because of its size, to safely used, the lid has to be created at least mid range from the user otherwise he will also be caught inside. The biggest lid can dwarf a boss summon like Nagato's Dog or Gamabunta.
your move kinda confusing =/ what do you mean by : "10x10 meters in size that wasnt solid, instead having a solid bottom" ....

While surveying one of the members of Akatsuki, Jiraiya surveys him closely. Seeing the handseals, Jiraiya hears gushing water behind his head (amount of noise allows Jiraiya to estimate the size of it) and quickly creates a pillar of earth beneath him shooting him as he flips backwards over the water behind him, landing back on to his feet...

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

Seeing the shuriken heading for him and the large shadow above him, Jiraiya gets low and enters the earth beneath him and stealthily plans his retaliation so when he enters the earth below, it would seem as if he was crushed.

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth. While inside the earth, the user cannot make handseals and can only use Earth techniques below C-Rank. If he tries to do a higher ranked technique, he'll disrupt the Hiding like a mole technique and be left crushed.

With his target assuming Jiraiya's death, Jiraiya moves to behind the lid (opposite side Deidera), and leaves the earth unnoticed. Jiraiya displays one handseal and channels his chakra in to the sky and makes it rain on em hoes.

(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.
 

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your move kinda confusing =/ what do you mean by : "10x10 meters in size that wasnt solid, instead having a solid bottom" ....

While surveying one of the members of Akatsuki, Jiraiya surveys him closely. Seeing the handseals, Jiraiya hears gushing water behind his head (amount of noise allows Jiraiya to estimate the size of it) and quickly creates a pillar of earth beneath him shooting him as he flips backwards over the water behind him, landing back on to his feet...

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

Seeing the shuriken heading for him and the large shadow above him, Jiraiya gets low and enters the earth beneath him and stealthily plans his retaliation so when he enters the earth below, it would seem as if he was crushed.

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth. While inside the earth, the user cannot make handseals and can only use Earth techniques below C-Rank. If he tries to do a higher ranked technique, he'll disrupt the Hiding like a mole technique and be left crushed.

With his target assuming Jiraiya's death, Jiraiya moves to behind the lid (opposite side Deidera), and leaves the earth unnoticed. Jiraiya displays one handseal and channels his chakra in to the sky and makes it rain on em hoes.

(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.
Yeah, I can see you. And I had meant "hollow"


Jiraiya back flipped over Deidara's water and then went into the ground, avoiding the lightning shuriken and the giant earthen lid. Knowing while underground he is vulnerable Deidara forms a single handseal and manipulates his earth chakra so that the ground towards the middle of the lid becomes a pit suddenly and begins to suck everything into it, swallowing Jiraiya who underground would be swallowed up even easier. Jiraiya would be crushed, trapped, and would eventually suffocate. Waiting just some time, when Jiraiya would likely be caught in the pit and be trapped and suffocating Deidara forms 2 handseals and slams his hands on the ground, causing all of the ground infront of him to cave in and spiral in itself, crushing Jiraiya wherever he was.
Its a shame to give someone such an inartistic death, hmh...
(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.

(Doton: Retsudo Tenshō) - Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the required hand seals Boar → Ox → placing hand on the ground, the user causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them in a mayhem of jagged rocks. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to a large area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.
 

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Well. Malory did state he made the timing into the ground in which it would seem as if he had been crushed. Making CP's move a tad bit metagamed. However I think it's possible to see him go underground, given that there was no large obstacle preventing CP from observing Malory. Other than that, I felt more live from CP's moves. Well thought out, while Malory's only move was mainly kept to the defensive and going hidden. Being a short fight, there's not much I can base this on, but CP did provide a stronger use of tactics. So he is the winner. Sorry Malory.
 
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