Abandoned Asylum

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Possessed Sahan blitz gate keeper & keymaster
"I will kill you you hell bastards :devil::devil::devil::devil::devil::devil::devil:"
Solar:

*Sahan manages to find the Gatekeeper and keymaster on the other side of the building* (Somehow)

"Fine we will deal with you" *says the keymaster*

*Solar's hand raises up once again and a void appears that sucks in Sahan too quickly for him to react*

"Where did you send him?" *Says the gatekeeper*

"To hell" *Says the keymaster*
 

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Solar:

*Sahan manages to find the Gatekeeper and keymaster on the other side of the building* (Somehow)

"Fine we will deal with you" *says the keymaster*

*Solar's hand raises up once again and a void appears that sucks in Sahan too quickly for him to react*

"Where did you send him?" *Says the gatekeeper*

"To hell" *Says the keymaster*



Nine tail fox: what happend to me

" too hot I think this is hell"
 

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Nine tail fox: what happend to me

" too hot I think this is hell"
Solar:

*The guard opens the door and sees only Solar*

"Who are you" *Says the guard as he reaches for his pistol*

*Solar's black eyes looking past the guard* "it's not me you should be worried about"

*The Gatekeeper appears behind the guard and takes over his vessel*
 

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Solar:

*The guard opens the door and sees only Solar*

"Who are you" *Says the guard as he reaches for his pistol*

*Solar's black eyes looking past the guard* "it's not me you should be worried about"

*The Gatekeeper appears behind the guard and takes over his vessel*
Possessed Sahan (Nine tail from his dark aura protect it's vessel from burns)swim in the lava
"I must take over Hell king"
 

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Possessed Sahan (Nine tail from his dark aura protect it's vessel from burns)swim in the lava
"I must take over Hell king"
Solar:

*Now both the Gatekeeper and the keymaster have come together, they commence the ritual*

*censored*

"Here he comes"!!!! *Says the Gatekeeper in the guards body.*

"Finally, now he's free the world will be doomed" *says the keymaster*

*A very powerful void appears but this time nothing is getting sucked into it. It appears to be a door way. Moments later a hand appears*
 

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Solar:

*Now both the Gatekeeper and the keymaster have come together, they commence the ritual*

*censored*

"Here he comes"!!!! *Says the Gatekeeper in the guards body.*

"Finally, now he's free the world will be doomed" *says the keymaster*

*A very powerful void appears but this time nothing is getting sucked into it. It appears to be a door way. Moments later a hand appears*
Possessed Sahan sense Super negative energy

"It must be hell king "

Swim super speed saw hell king make the way out of hell

leap out from the door & rolled in to earth world with hell king
 

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Possessed Sahan sense Super negative energy

"It must be hell king "

Swim super speed saw hell king make the way out of hell

leap out from the door & rolled in to earth world with hell king
Solar:

*The King of Hell makes his way into the dilapidated cafeteria but moments later Sahan jumps through and tackles him to the ground, causing him to roll*

*The KOH looks at Sahan and laughs* "Oh my, you found my puppy"

*He reaches into Sahan and releases the seal holding in the demon*

"Come now Fox, eat this puny vessel that held you"

*The keymaster and the Gatekeeper get to their knees* "Welcome back my lord, it's your time to rein"
 

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Solar:

*The King of Hell makes his way into the dilapidated cafeteria but moments later Sahan jumps through and tackles him to the ground, causing him to roll*

*The KOH looks at Sahan and laughs* "Oh my, you found my puppy"

*He reaches into Sahan and releases the seal holding in the demon*

"Come now Fox, eat this puny vessel that held you"

*The keymaster and the Gatekeeper get to their knees* "Welcome back my lord, it's your time to rein"
unconscious Sahan fell down

Nine tail fox: puppy me ha ha ha you don't know my power

open his mouth & draining hell king spirit power
 

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unconscious Sahan fell down

Nine tail fox: puppy me ha ha ha you don't know my power

open his mouth & draining hell king spirit power
Solar:

"Your power huh" *The King of hell stands up with ease and yawns*

"I created your creators, creator. You're less than a pup and more of a fetus"

*The king of hell released more energy and the nine tails started to realize the aura was poisonous and he had to stop*

"You sealed your own fate adsorbing my energy. You adsorbed the hell virus and no one but the current King of hell is immune".

*The fox falls to the ground and starts to dissolve.*
 

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(I'm not trying to down play your character's power in the story but I'm trying to make a villain worth fighting.

I will limit his power but he is the king of hell, so I would get creative in order to beat him.

Also, I built up to him, so don't just pop up with goku and blast him away... work a power up into the story lol)
 

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Solar:

"Your power huh" *The King of hell stands up with ease and yawns*

"I created your creators, creator. You're less than a pup and more of a fetus"

*The king of hell released more energy and the nine tails started to realize the aura was poisonous and he had to stop*

"You sealed your own fate adsorbing my energy. You adsorbed the hell virus and no one but the current King of hell is immune".

*The fox falls to the ground and starts to dissolve.*
nine tail fox dissolved without any trace
Sahan regain consciousness
"where am I "
Saw the possessed Solar & other demons
Sahan remain as unconscious to listen their talk



(I'm not trying to down play your character's power in the story but I'm trying to make a villain worth fighting.

I will limit his power but he is the king of hell, so I would get creative in order to beat him.

Also, I built up to him, so don't just pop up with goku and blast him away... work a power up into the story lol)
(ok I understand)
 

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nine tail fox dissolved without any trace
Sahan regain consciousness
"where am I "
Saw the possessed Solar & other demons
Sahan remain as unconscious to listen their talk





(ok I understand)
Solar:

*The King of Hell notices Sahan laying on the ground*

"It appears you managed to survive. Well that's just fine, I'll put you to use"

*The KOH claps his hands and a demonic energy starts to develop in the dark corner of the room. The energy takes shape of a faceless man.*

"Now shadow take control of Sahan" *Says the king of hell*

*The shadow teleports in front of Sahan and long, black tentacles grab him from the floor and raise him up*

"Slenderman, say hello to your new host" *the KOH smiles*

Please drop me from this. I am quite busy nowadays and will not get time to reply. Sorry. :'(
Next time just have your character exit the story.
 

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Solar:

*The King of Hell notices Sahan laying on the ground*

"It appears you managed to survive. Well that's just fine, I'll put you to use"

*The KOH claps his hands and a demonic energy starts to develop in the dark corner of the room. The energy takes shape of a faceless man.*

"Now shadow take control of Sahan" *Says the king of hell*

*The shadow teleports in front of Sahan and long, black tentacles grab him from the floor and raise him up*

"Slenderman, say hello to your new host" *the KOH smiles*
Sahan: oh my god
please don't do this to me I will serve you without this demon
 

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Sahan: oh my god
please don't do this to me I will serve you without this demon
Solar:

*The King of Hell hears the plea and smiles* "Oh how I've missed you humans, you do love to beg"

*He snaps his fingers and slenderman goes away* "I'll give you a chance, now I need you to find me something to eat human, I usually eat young adults but any age will do for now. Find me some human souls"
 

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Solar:

*The King of Hell hears the plea and smiles* "Oh how I've missed you humans, you do love to beg"

*He snaps his fingers and slenderman goes away* "I'll give you a chance, now I need you to find me something to eat human, I usually eat young adults but any age will do for now. Find me some human souls"
Sahan face showing adust emotion
"Ok my lord"
 

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Iris: *drops down from the rapters behind you*
BOO...... -_-.....
*The Gatekeeper and the Keymaster quickly move in front of the King of hell, and they both raise their hands in the new comer's direction*

"you're a strange one, aren't you" *Said the Keymaster in Solar's body.*

*The king of hell pulls out some chalk and starts to draw on the floor, then he looks at Sahan* "Sahan you should take care of the new guest"
 
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