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*note this is a continuancy of chapter 661
*note. Please listen to video as you read*
*thoughts*
(actions)
<Emotion>
[Scene Change]
[Scene shows a close up of Ma and Pa]
MA/PA: "NARUTO!!!"
[Scene opens up to Naruto, Ma/Pa, Gaara]
MA/PA: "She was right, we needed to come at once"
Gaara: "I need to do what Kurama said as soon as possible" *hold on naruto*
PA: "Hurry, we will do what we can till reinforcements arrive" *hurry*
[Scene opens up to The Kages]
Oonoki: "I'm gonna make us all lighter, we need to hurry to naruto's defense" *Can't let any other young ones die*
A: "if Naruto is in this shape, so isn't my brother Bee. we need to hurry" *Bee hold on*
Tsunade: "Damn you Madara" *I'm coming Naruto*
[Scene Changes to Kakashi and BZ-Obito]
BZ-Obito: "Damn you Obito, you let him escape"
Kakashi: "Summoning Jutsu" *I know what to do now*
(Smoke Appears)
(Many dogs appear around Kakashi)
Pakku: "Yes Kakashi"
Kakashi: "I need you guys to hold him in place"
BZ-Obito: "You think those dogs will help you here, now that minato's gone"
(Dogs start to rush BZ-Obito, and Launch and attack on each body part)
(Kakashi Charges at obito, but he Disappears in a cloud of smoke that shocks BZ-Obito)
(a dog behind BZ-Obito transforms into kakashi)
Kakashi: "Kamui"
(BZ-Obito shown being Absorbed into the kamui world along with kakashi)
[Scene shows the Kamui world]
(Kakashi, Bz-obito and kakashi's summons appearing)
BZ-Obito: "Damn you Kakashi" *I'm farther away from Madara now*
Kakashi: "i'm not done yet" *only have 1 Kamui left*
[Scene shows Gaara, the Bijuu, Sasuke, Madara, Gedo Mazou]
Gaara: "Shukaku, all the beasts need to give all their chakra to naruto"
Shukaku: "at this rate we will lose"
Gaara: "Kurama! told me everything, you know exactly what I mean"
Shukaku: "Fine, to everyone we need to give naruto our chakra"
Hachibi: "We All know now what needs to be done"
(the beasts tails starts to lower on naruto's body)
Son Goku: "if we Split our chakra we will no longer be here" *it better work this time*
Madara: "the beast what do they plan to do?!"
Sasuke: "I'm your opponent, not them"
(susano's clash together again)
[Scene shows minato arriving to Naruto, Pa and Ma]
Minato: "Son, I'm sorry I wasn't there" *I won't be here when you wake up*
Gaara: "I must seal you inside naruto you know"
Minato: "it must be done"
(Gaara Makes hand seals to seal Minato and the beasts chakra inside naruto)
(the beasts starts to disappear)
Madara: "Damn it looks like i only get half of the beasts" *its still enough for what i need to do*
[Scene shows Naruto in a Dimension]
Pervy Sage: "The World needs their Prophet"
Itachi: "Sasuke needs you, more then ever"
Nagato: "Find that answer, for both of us"
Neji: "Protect Everyone, including Hinata"
?????: "You're not done yet, Naruto Uzumaki"
Kushina/Minato: "We Love you son, Wake Up"
(Naruto Gasps for air as he stands up)
(sasuke is show laying down in front of naruto slowly getting up)
(Tobirama and Hiruzen and kages are standing behind naruto)
Everyone: "welcome back naruto"
End caption: Madara and Naruto have half of bijuu's chakra what now becomes of world
Naruto Chapter 661:
Please listen to the video to enjoy your reading, thanks!
*thoughts*
(actions)
<Emotion>
[Scene Change]
*note* Might be a few errors in name calling
[Opens up to Kurama being pulled out of naruto]
Gaara: "Naruto!!"
Naruto <Shocked and in Pain>
[Scene switches to Hinata, Sakura and SA/Kages]
Hinata: "N..NA...NARUTO!!!!!" <starts to tear up>
(Rushes off towards Naruto)
Sakura and K11: "Whats wrong Hinata!"
(as the KCM cloaks disappear from the shinobi)
Shikamaru: "Shit, something bad must have happened to naruto" *This isn't good*
Kages: "We are going ahead"
(Kages rush forward ahead of everyone else)
[Scene switches to Kakashi/Minato and BZ-Obito]
BZ-Obito: "Hahahahaha, you guys can't even save anybody, can you?"
Dark Kurama: "Minato, my other half is gone from naruto" <Enraged>
Minato: "?!, Kakashi, I have to get to naruto quickly" *Hang on, Son"
Kakashi: "This Feeling, its naruto isn't it? Go, Sensei i'll take care of things here" *Save Naruto, sensei. i'll save obito"
(Minato starts to rush off)
BZ-Obito: "Where do you think you're going"
(Raises Hand at minato)
Obito: "I...Won... Let You!!" *Got to Help sensei get to naruto*
Kakashi: "Obito Hang on, Keep fighting!" *I need to do something*
(Minato disappears)
(BZ-Obito is standing struggling with himself)
[Scene switches to Tobirama, sarutobi and Hashirama]
Tobirama: "Brother, we can't get you out of this thing, its to strong" *this is bad*
(as tobirama senses naruto)
Hashirama: "FORGET ABOUT ME! GET TO NARUTO NOW!!!" *Naruto, wish I could be more of a help*
Tobirama: "But we need you to help against madara, Specially now"
Hashirama: "he is in danger, I know you can sense it."
Sarutobi: "We must go, we aren't any help here"
(Footsteps appear behind them)
??????: "Maybe I can be of assistance, while you go help the kid"
Sarutobi: "Orochimaru, how we tried everything"
Orochimaru: "Remember, You Hokages are not at full power. I'm taking the restraints off for now"
[Scene switches to gaara/naruto, the bijuu]
(Naruto laying on the ground next to gaara crying)
Naruto: "Sav......Kur...ma" *Can't hold my promises, no matter what I do*
Madara: "HAHAHAHA, you said I wouldn't get the fox back. you are weak. nobody can stand in my way!!" *I need my other eye soon, or I can't complete it*
Gaara: "I'll try Naruto, but first I must fill my promise"
[Flashback]
Light Kurama "You must Save Naruto, give him more chakra from all of the beasts As quickly as you can"
Gaara: "I understand, Kurama"
[Flashback ends]
Sasuke: "NARUTO!!, Damn it! <Enraged, at his friend/rival>
(Sasuke,activating Susano. his susano starts to get bigger as his anger erupts)
Madara: "Oh?! whats this, you think that will help your precious weakling of a friend? Young Uchiha!" *Another User who can wield the Perfect Susano? this will be fun*
Sasuke: "He.. Was Mine To Finish, I will Kill you myself if its the last thing I do" *Don't give up naruto, we still have our fight to become hokage*
Madara: "HAHA, it will be the last thing you do"
(enters his perfect Susano)
(Sasuke and Madara's perfect susano's clash together)
Naruto: *Sorry Everyone, I let you down*
[Flashback]
Nagato: "i'll leave it to Naruto, to find peace to the world"
Pervy Sage: "You are the child of Prophecy, Naruto"
Itachi: "I Leave my brother to you Naruto"
To Everyone: "I'll Be the Next Hokage, Believe it"
[Flashback ends]
Naruto: *I have enough chakra to do one thing*
(Gaara Looks at naruto raising a hand to his face)
Gaara: "Naruto! Save your Chakra!!"
(Naruto bites his finger)
(narutos hands fall)
Naruto: "Summoning Jutsu"
[Scene shows a close up of Ma and Pa]
MA/PA: "NARUTO!!!"
Ending Caption: "Is there still hope for naruto or is it to late"
What did you guys think? if theres enough people I will do a sequel.
*thoughts*
(actions)
<Emotion>
[Scene Change]
Naruto Chapter 661:
The Unexpected Occurrence
The Unexpected Occurrence
*note* Might be a few errors in name calling
[Opens up to Kurama being pulled out of naruto]
Gaara: "Naruto!!"
Naruto <Shocked and in Pain>
[Scene switches to Hinata, Sakura and SA/Kages]
Hinata: "N..NA...NARUTO!!!!!" <starts to tear up>
(Rushes off towards Naruto)
Sakura and K11: "Whats wrong Hinata!"
(as the KCM cloaks disappear from the shinobi)
Shikamaru: "Shit, something bad must have happened to naruto" *This isn't good*
Kages: "We are going ahead"
(Kages rush forward ahead of everyone else)
[Scene switches to Kakashi/Minato and BZ-Obito]
BZ-Obito: "Hahahahaha, you guys can't even save anybody, can you?"
Dark Kurama: "Minato, my other half is gone from naruto" <Enraged>
Minato: "?!, Kakashi, I have to get to naruto quickly" *Hang on, Son"
Kakashi: "This Feeling, its naruto isn't it? Go, Sensei i'll take care of things here" *Save Naruto, sensei. i'll save obito"
(Minato starts to rush off)
BZ-Obito: "Where do you think you're going"
(Raises Hand at minato)
Obito: "I...Won... Let You!!" *Got to Help sensei get to naruto*
Kakashi: "Obito Hang on, Keep fighting!" *I need to do something*
(Minato disappears)
(BZ-Obito is standing struggling with himself)
[Scene switches to Tobirama, sarutobi and Hashirama]
Tobirama: "Brother, we can't get you out of this thing, its to strong" *this is bad*
(as tobirama senses naruto)
Hashirama: "FORGET ABOUT ME! GET TO NARUTO NOW!!!" *Naruto, wish I could be more of a help*
Tobirama: "But we need you to help against madara, Specially now"
Hashirama: "he is in danger, I know you can sense it."
Sarutobi: "We must go, we aren't any help here"
(Footsteps appear behind them)
??????: "Maybe I can be of assistance, while you go help the kid"
Sarutobi: "Orochimaru, how we tried everything"
Orochimaru: "Remember, You Hokages are not at full power. I'm taking the restraints off for now"
[Scene switches to gaara/naruto, the bijuu]
(Naruto laying on the ground next to gaara crying)
Naruto: "Sav......Kur...ma" *Can't hold my promises, no matter what I do*
Madara: "HAHAHAHA, you said I wouldn't get the fox back. you are weak. nobody can stand in my way!!" *I need my other eye soon, or I can't complete it*
Gaara: "I'll try Naruto, but first I must fill my promise"
[Flashback]
Light Kurama "You must Save Naruto, give him more chakra from all of the beasts As quickly as you can"
Gaara: "I understand, Kurama"
[Flashback ends]
Sasuke: "NARUTO!!, Damn it! <Enraged, at his friend/rival>
(Sasuke,activating Susano. his susano starts to get bigger as his anger erupts)
Madara: "Oh?! whats this, you think that will help your precious weakling of a friend? Young Uchiha!" *Another User who can wield the Perfect Susano? this will be fun*
Sasuke: "He.. Was Mine To Finish, I will Kill you myself if its the last thing I do" *Don't give up naruto, we still have our fight to become hokage*
Madara: "HAHA, it will be the last thing you do"
(enters his perfect Susano)
(Sasuke and Madara's perfect susano's clash together)
Naruto: *Sorry Everyone, I let you down*
[Flashback]
Nagato: "i'll leave it to Naruto, to find peace to the world"
Pervy Sage: "You are the child of Prophecy, Naruto"
Itachi: "I Leave my brother to you Naruto"
To Everyone: "I'll Be the Next Hokage, Believe it"
[Flashback ends]
Naruto: *I have enough chakra to do one thing*
(Gaara Looks at naruto raising a hand to his face)
Gaara: "Naruto! Save your Chakra!!"
(Naruto bites his finger)
(narutos hands fall)
Naruto: "Summoning Jutsu"
[Scene shows a close up of Ma and Pa]
MA/PA: "NARUTO!!!"
Ending Caption: "Is there still hope for naruto or is it to late"
What did you guys think? if theres enough people I will do a sequel.
*note. Please listen to video as you read*
[video=youtube;pI7Jc-fSQQ8]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pI7Jc-fSQQ8[/video]
*thoughts*
(actions)
<Emotion>
[Scene Change]
Naruto Chapter 662:
Gaara's Promise!
Gaara's Promise!
[Scene shows a close up of Ma and Pa]
MA/PA: "NARUTO!!!"
[Scene opens up to Naruto, Ma/Pa, Gaara]
MA/PA: "She was right, we needed to come at once"
Gaara: "I need to do what Kurama said as soon as possible" *hold on naruto*
PA: "Hurry, we will do what we can till reinforcements arrive" *hurry*
[Scene opens up to The Kages]
Oonoki: "I'm gonna make us all lighter, we need to hurry to naruto's defense" *Can't let any other young ones die*
A: "if Naruto is in this shape, so isn't my brother Bee. we need to hurry" *Bee hold on*
Tsunade: "Damn you Madara" *I'm coming Naruto*
[Scene Changes to Kakashi and BZ-Obito]
BZ-Obito: "Damn you Obito, you let him escape"
Kakashi: "Summoning Jutsu" *I know what to do now*
(Smoke Appears)
(Many dogs appear around Kakashi)
Pakku: "Yes Kakashi"
Kakashi: "I need you guys to hold him in place"
BZ-Obito: "You think those dogs will help you here, now that minato's gone"
(Dogs start to rush BZ-Obito, and Launch and attack on each body part)
(Kakashi Charges at obito, but he Disappears in a cloud of smoke that shocks BZ-Obito)
(a dog behind BZ-Obito transforms into kakashi)
Kakashi: "Kamui"
(BZ-Obito shown being Absorbed into the kamui world along with kakashi)
[Scene shows the Kamui world]
(Kakashi, Bz-obito and kakashi's summons appearing)
BZ-Obito: "Damn you Kakashi" *I'm farther away from Madara now*
Kakashi: "i'm not done yet" *only have 1 Kamui left*
[Scene shows Gaara, the Bijuu, Sasuke, Madara, Gedo Mazou]
Gaara: "Shukaku, all the beasts need to give all their chakra to naruto"
Shukaku: "at this rate we will lose"
Gaara: "Kurama! told me everything, you know exactly what I mean"
Shukaku: "Fine, to everyone we need to give naruto our chakra"
Hachibi: "We All know now what needs to be done"
(the beasts tails starts to lower on naruto's body)
Son Goku: "if we Split our chakra we will no longer be here" *it better work this time*
Madara: "the beast what do they plan to do?!"
Sasuke: "I'm your opponent, not them"
(susano's clash together again)
[Scene shows minato arriving to Naruto, Pa and Ma]
Minato: "Son, I'm sorry I wasn't there" *I won't be here when you wake up*
Gaara: "I must seal you inside naruto you know"
Minato: "it must be done"
(Gaara Makes hand seals to seal Minato and the beasts chakra inside naruto)
(the beasts starts to disappear)
Madara: "Damn it looks like i only get half of the beasts" *its still enough for what i need to do*
[Scene shows Naruto in a Dimension]
Pervy Sage: "The World needs their Prophet"
Itachi: "Sasuke needs you, more then ever"
Nagato: "Find that answer, for both of us"
Neji: "Protect Everyone, including Hinata"
?????: "You're not done yet, Naruto Uzumaki"
Kushina/Minato: "We Love you son, Wake Up"
(Naruto Gasps for air as he stands up)
(sasuke is show laying down in front of naruto slowly getting up)
(Tobirama and Hiruzen and kages are standing behind naruto)
Everyone: "welcome back naruto"
End caption: Madara and Naruto have half of bijuu's chakra what now becomes of world
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