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Naori Uchiha waits eagerly at the training grounds for Barney to arrive. It is mid day and their is a slight breeze afoot. Naori sits with her back against a wooden pillar and watches some leaves twirl about in the wind. She wonders what kind of person Barney will be. She only knows what she has heard from legends and outlandish rumors. Nevertheless she keeps her eyes open for a man donning an Akatsuki robe with a straw hat.

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She was soloed by Itachi in the Uchiha massacre btw

Thank you so much for this crucial information. I really didn't know this and now that I do my life is finally fulfilled.

Alright then, start by telling me everything you know about the 1 tomoe and the sharingan in general. I need to see if you're aware of what you're expecting and doing here.
 

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Thank you so much for this crucial information. I really didn't know this and now that I do my life is finally fulfilled.

Alright then, start by telling me everything you know about the 1 tomoe and the sharingan in general. I need to see if you're aware of what you're expecting and doing here.
That sarcasm, so characteristic of Barney. XD
Ok, I'm not looking up anything on Wiki or NB so here I go.

The Sharingan along with the Byakugan and Rinnegan are the three great Dojutsu in the ninja world. The Sharingan is a kekkei genkai belonging to members of the Uchiha clan. By enhancing a person's visual prowess the Sharingan grants its users the ability to see chakra flow, perceive motions quicker than a normal ninja, and cast powerful genjutsu with stronger effects than normal illusions. Chakra flow can only be seen by looking at a target with the Sharingan. This is different than chakra sensing where you can sense all chakra in your vicinity. Also the Sharingan is able to distinguish different types of chakra from each other.

The Sharingan develops in 3 main stages. The first phase is an initial activation where the Sharingan is awakened for the first time. This activation is triggered by strong emotions of which most noticeably is anger. Most people experience these feelings at some point during a battle. Upon initial activation of the Sharingan a user's eyes will turn red and 1 tomoe will form in each of their eyes. With the 1 tomoe Sharingan a user gains the ability to see chakra flow and perceive motions slightly quicker than before. By spotting irregular chakra flow the user also gains the ability to see whether they or someone else is in a genjutsu.

Further progression of the Sharingan leads to the 2 tomoe and 3 tomoe stages. At each stage the perception of speed becomes much quicker for a person. At the 2 tomoe stage a user will be able to decipher an opponent's hand signs allowing them to predict their moves. Also gained at the 2 tomoe stage is the ability to break out of even higher rank genjutsu than the 1 tomoe stage. The abilities at the 2 tomoe stage only heighten at the 3 tomoe stage. At the 3 tomoe stage you can copy non-dojutsu abilities of an opponent. Finally the Sharigan can be progressed a step further to the Mangekyo and eventually Eternal Mangekyo stages where a whole new set of Sharingan jutsu are unlocked.
 
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That sarcasm, so characteristic of Barney. XD
Ok, I'm not looking up anything on Wiki or NB so here I go.

The Sharingan along with the Byakugan and Rinnegan are the three great Dojutsu in the ninja world. The Sharingan is a kekkei genkai belonging to members of the Uchiha clan. By enhancing a person's visual prowess the Sharingan grants its users the ability to see chakra flow, perceive motions quicker than a normal ninja, and cast powerful genjutsu with stronger effects than normal illusions. Chakra flow can only be seen by looking at a target with the Sharingan. This is different than chakra sensing where you can sense all chakra in your vicinity. Also the Sharingan is able to distinguish different types of chakra from each other.

The Sharingan develops in 3 main stages. The first phase is an initial activation where the Sharingan is awakened for the first time. This activation is triggered by strong emotions of which most noticeably is anger. Most people experience these feelings at some point during a battle. Upon initial activation of the Sharingan a user's eyes will turn red and 1 tomoe will form in each of their eyes. With the 1 tomoe Sharingan a user gains the ability to see chakra flow and perceive motions slightly quicker than before. By spotting irregular chakra flow the user also gains the ability to see whether they or someone else is in a genjutsu.

Further progression of the Sharingan leads to the 2 tomoe and 3 tomoe stages. At each stage the perception of speed becomes much quicker for a person. At the 2 tomoe stage a user will be able to decipher an opponent's hand signs allowing them to predict their moves. Also gained at the 2 tomoe stage is the ability to break out of even higher rank genjutsu than the 1 tomoe stage. The abilities at the 2 tomoe stage only heighten at the 3 tomoe stage. At the 3 tomoe stage you can copy non-dojutsu abilities of an opponent. Finally the Sharigan can be progressed a step further to the Mangekyo and eventually Eternal Mangekyo stages where a whole new set of Sharingan jutsu are unlocked.

Nice banner in the sig! ^^

Requirements:

The user will need to experience a terrifying, stressful and life threatening situation to awaken his sharingan, which will invariably awaken as a 1 Tomoe sharingan. The user will then have to pass through a training session with a certified sensei that helped him awake it.

Description:

This type of Sharingan has 1 tomoe surrounding the users pupil and is gained at the moment of awakening the Sharingan. It allows the user to perceive motions and see chakra. The user's pupil turns bloody red, and gains an extra pupil, or tomoe within each eye that will surround the original, centered pupil. When active the user now has the ability to track speeds that would only be seen by a higher ranked, more experienced ninja. They also gain the ability to see through visual D rank genjutsu (visual illusions) and can follow the movement of most taijutsu moves done by normal Shinobi, even those faster than the user and the movement of most Ninjutsu, allowing one to be able to react best to the situation. To activate it the user will spend a move of his 3 per turn while he can keep it active throughout the match as long as he has chakra to fuel it.

This is the detailed information for the sharingan. If you have any questions feel free to ask. If not, I think we're clear to start beating you up. :)
 

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Nice banner in the sig! ^^



This is the detailed information for the sharingan. If you have any questions feel free to ask. If not, I think we're clear to start beating you up. :)

No questions as everything there is explained pretty well.

Barney stands before Naori with a disgusting smirk on his face. He taunts her being ever so sure he can beat her up. Such impudence and such arrogance. Disgraceful. Naori bends her knees slightly and brings her hands close together in front of her chest. She stands ready to defend herself.

I appreciate you taking the time to train me, but don't think I will stand idly by and not defend myself. Now come at me and don't hold back!!
 
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No questions as everything there is explained pretty well.

Barney stands before Naori with a disgusting smirk on his face. He taunts her being ever so sure he can beat her up. Such impudence and such arrogance. Disgraceful. Naori bends her knees slightly and brings her hands close together in front of her chest. She stands ready to defend herself.

I appreciate you taking the time to train me, but don't think I will stand idly by and not defend myself. Now come at me and don't hold back!!

The more you resist the longer it will take.

I lean my body forward and I let my own body weight increase my momentum and force me into running. As I start running towards you, a spike emerges from behind you and hits you in between your shoulders. The spike is not sharp and it isn't aimed to damage you in any way; just so serve as a temporary distraction as well as to force you into leaning and stumbling forward in order to create an opening for my next attack. As the spike pushes you closer towards me, I'm already at full pace running at you with a rasengan formed in my hand and my hand extended towards your body and aimed at your left shoulder. The ransengan is formed in my left hand and I'm running slightly to your left side, just enough to hit your left shoulder with my left hand while avoiding any direct damage. As the rasengan blasts you away, I follow your body and watch for any changes.

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

(Fūton: Rasengan) - Wind Style: Spiral sphere
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 (-20 to user if attain direct hit)
Description: Rasengan doesn't require handseals, only molding of the chakra. The user focuses and creates a fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact. A direct Rasengan hit can be lethal but the user needs to actually physically hit the opponent for it to work.
 

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The more you resist the longer it will take.

I lean my body forward and I let my own body weight increase my momentum and force me into running. As I start running towards you, a spike emerges from behind you and hits you in between your shoulders. The spike is not sharp and it isn't aimed to damage you in any way; just so serve as a temporary distraction as well as to force you into leaning and stumbling forward in order to create an opening for my next attack. As the spike pushes you closer towards me, I'm already at full pace running at you with a rasengan formed in my hand and my hand extended towards your body and aimed at your left shoulder. The ransengan is formed in my left hand and I'm running slightly to your left side, just enough to hit your left shoulder with my left hand while avoiding any direct damage. As the rasengan blasts you away, I follow your body and watch for any changes.

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

(Fūton: Rasengan) - Wind Style: Spiral sphere
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 (-20 to user if attain direct hit)
Description: Rasengan doesn't require handseals, only molding of the chakra. The user focuses and creates a fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact. A direct Rasengan hit can be lethal but the user needs to actually physically hit the opponent for it to work.
As Barney begins to run Naori feels slight vibrations from the ground behind her. She instinctively knows something is forming behind her and as a natural reaction she builds up her lightning chakra. Naori releases small bolts of lightning behind her stopping the formation of the pillar dead in it's tracks.

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.
As the pillar stops forming Naori looks to Barney to find out to her dismay that he is approaching much quicker than she thought. Naori only has an instant to act. She knows she doesn't have time to defend the rasengan outright so she tries for evasion instead. Naori jumps 0.5 m in the air and shifts her body weight to her right. As she does this she blows a stream of wind out of her mouth in an attempt to dodge the rasengan.

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.
Note: The user must already be airborne to use
Barney is too fast though. He connects partially with his rasengan and just grazes Naori's left shoulder. The force of the impact changes Naori's momentum and she falls to the ground on her butt as a black shred of her robe floats down to the ground. Naori grabs her left shoulder with her right hand which is in pain, but not fatal pain. She stares up at Barney who still has that disgusting grin on his face. Naori wants nothing more than to put Barney in his place, but she is paralyzed by fear and can't move. He anger quells at the fact she is powerless to do nothing in the face of this man.
 

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As Barney begins to run Naori feels slight vibrations from the ground behind her. She instinctively knows something is forming behind her and as a natural reaction she builds up her lightning chakra. Naori releases small bolts of lightning behind her stopping the formation of the pillar dead in it's tracks.

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.
As the pillar stops forming Naori looks to Barney to find out to her dismay that he is approaching much quicker than she thought. Naori only has an instant to act. She knows she doesn't have time to defend the rasengan outright so she tries for evasion instead. Naori jumps 0.5 m in the air and shifts her body weight to her right. As she does this she blows a stream of wind out of her mouth in an attempt to dodge the rasengan.

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.
Note: The user must already be airborne to use
Barney is too fast though. He connects partially with his rasengan and just grazes Naori's left shoulder. The force of the impact changes Naori's momentum and she falls to the ground on her butt as a black shred of her robe floats down to the ground. Naori grabs her left shoulder with her right hand which is in pain, but not fatal pain. She stares up at Barney who still has that disgusting grin on his face. Naori wants nothing more than to put Barney in his place, but she is paralyzed by fear and can't move. He anger quells at the fact she is powerless to do nothing in the face of this man.

I didn't expect any resistance, but oh well.

As the rasengan connects and blasts your shoulder I see you falling onto the ground and groaning in pain. This was only the beginning and you were already in pain. If it continues this way, you'll see the hospital soon enough. Hopefully you'll at least try to channel your anger and hatred into activating the survival instinct that is flowing through your veins and unlock the sharingan. With you on the ground I walk up to you while unsheathing my CW. With the sword in my hand, I unleash my fury and follow up with a barrage of slashes across your body. All of them are carefully calibrated not to kill you but to only inflict pain, while the last strike is aimed to pierce you mercilessly and take your life.

(Ken Rendan no Jutsu) - Sword Barrage Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 25
Description: With this technique, the user will make a sequence of slashes with their sword and finishes with a powerful final slash dealing liberal damage to their enemy.
 

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I didn't expect any resistance, but oh well.

As the rasengan connects and blasts your shoulder I see you falling onto the ground and groaning in pain. This was only the beginning and you were already in pain. If it continues this way, you'll see the hospital soon enough. Hopefully you'll at least try to channel your anger and hatred into activating the survival instinct that is flowing through your veins and unlock the sharingan. With you on the ground I walk up to you while unsheathing my CW. With the sword in my hand, I unleash my fury and follow up with a barrage of slashes across your body. All of them are carefully calibrated not to kill you but to only inflict pain, while the last strike is aimed to pierce you mercilessly and take your life.

(Ken Rendan no Jutsu) - Sword Barrage Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 25
Description: With this technique, the user will make a sequence of slashes with their sword and finishes with a powerful final slash dealing liberal damage to their enemy.
Barney walks over to Naori and unsheathes his sword. Naori is motionless paralyzed in fear. She hates this. Why can't she move, why is she powerless to do nothing? Barney connects with his first sword strike and the pain it causes is excruciating. It doesn't end their though as Barney begins to go on a stabbing rampage. With each thrust Naori's pain grows along with her hatred of herself and her hatred of Barney with his condescending attitude. Immobilized Naori thinks to herself, "Dammit move, I have to move, Move body, MOVE!!". With this last thought Naori channels her anger towards one goal, survival. She rotates her body to her right by shifting her body weight and evades Barney's final and most lethal sword thrust causing her to fall chest first onto the ground to her right. Naori uses her arms to slowly push herself off the ground and onto her knees. As she does this she turns her head and stares directly at Barney's eyes with rampant fury.

I HATE YOU!!! HOW DARE YOU LOOK DOWN ON ME!!! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!

 

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Barney walks over to Naori and unsheathes his sword. Naori is motionless paralyzed in fear. She hates this. Why can't she move, why is she powerless to do nothing? Barney connects with his first sword strike and the pain it causes is excruciating. It doesn't end their though as Barney begins to go on a stabbing rampage. With each thrust Naori's pain grows along with her hatred of herself and her hatred of Barney with his condescending attitude. Immobilized Naori thinks to herself, "Dammit move, I have to move, Move body, MOVE!!". With this last thought Naori channels her anger towards one goal, survival. She rotates her body to her right by shifting her body weight and evades Barney's final and most lethal sword thrust causing her to fall chest first onto the ground to her right. Naori uses her arms to slowly push herself off the ground and onto her knees. As she does this she turns her head and stares directly at Barney's eyes with rampant fury.

I HATE YOU!!! HOW DARE YOU LOOK DOWN ON ME!!! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!


As you spin to the side to evade my last stab, our eyes connect and it's clearly visible that they're different than before. The eyes are red with a black pupil. The sharingan was activated due to following the instinct of survival.

I already killed your counterpart. Don't make me actually kill you too. Let's take you to the hospital and get someone to heal your wounds.
 

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Thank you for the training. I'll return for a rematch one day.
 
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