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(Ranton: Kumono Ware)-Storm Release: Cloud Cracking
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description The user will send storm chakra towards any construct that is made of metal like substances (Kunais, shurikens,etc) this also includes normal swords, special swords like a CW for example will not be effected. This also effects Paper (Explosive Tags for example) like substances, though this does not effect paper ninjutsu. The user will channel storm chakra around the constructs, using the water vapor in the air they will wet the constructs then a electrical charge due to the storm chakra will appear on the constructs. What happens to the construct is since the water part will force the constructs to weaken, the paper is naturally weak to water. Also metal will weaken and rust the metal due to the chakra infused storm weakening it. The lighting portion will then tear through the constructs rendering them useless.
- Can only be used 3 times in a battle
- Can not use Storm release jutsus the same turn as this one
- Must have mastery over Storm Release

(Ranton: sh no chuushutsu)- Storm Release: Limb extraction
Type: offensive-Supplementary-Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A very dangerous short range technique. The user by channeling storm chakra towards area of bone on the users body and releases the storm chakra in the direction the bone is aiming. So if the elbow of the left arm for example is facing upward towards the oppopents chest, the storm will be released in that direction towards the opponent chest. The storm chakra is concentrated but not sharp it can shock the area hit. So if an opponent is touched by the chakra an electrical shock is sent to the opponent which can severely harm them, this shock is also precise enough to tear through normal armor and normal metal. The storm chakra stays connected to the user and can reach up to 5 meters in length. Its color is bright blue. Note chakra is not molded in the bone but simply uses the bones as a medium to direct the storm chakra.
- Using this jutsu counts towards the turn slot so releasing the storm chakra more then once will count towards move slot
- Can only be used a total of 5 times in battle
- Must have mastery of storm release



Straightforward are they not? If you have any questions please tell me now.
 

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1st one: Why is that S-rank, doesn't seem like an S-rank technique? And, what about metal based CE and, canon steel release? Will they be affected by this technique?

2nd: No questions about that one.
 

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It's S-Rank because not mainly of its destructive ability but because of its usage. Think about it, FTG kunais can be destroyed, Samurais become nothing with this jutsu, kenjutsu becomes useless especially from those lovely kenjutsu users we all love but want to kill. A lot of ninjutsu techs requires shurikens and kunais you can cut half the ninjutsu arsenal with this. In short its purpose is S-Rank worthy in my eyes. As well as paper tags.

It effects NO custom metal, like CE metals or CW. No it won't effect steel release, though its metal I would not allow it would be way to OP. It was not even aloud to do this with paper ninjutsu. So that reason is to make sure its not to OP.

anything else?
 

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(Ranton: Kumono Ware)-Storm Release: Cloud Cracking
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description The user will send storm chakra towards any construct that is made of metal like substances (Kunais, shurikens,etc) this also includes normal swords, special swords like a CW for example will not be effected. This also effects Paper (Explosive Tags for example) like substances, though this does not effect paper ninjutsu. The user will channel storm chakra around the constructs, using the water vapor in the air they will wet the constructs then a electrical charge due to the storm chakra will appear on the constructs. What happens to the construct is since the water part will force the constructs to weaken, the paper is naturally weak to water. Also metal will weaken and rust the metal due to the chakra infused storm weakening it. The lighting portion will then tear through the constructs rendering them useless.
- Can only be used 3 times in a battle
- Can not use Storm release jutsus the same turn as this one
- Must have mastery over Storm Release

(Ranton: sh no chuushutsu)- Storm Release: Limb extraction
Type: offensive-Supplementary-Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A very dangerous short range technique. The user by channeling storm chakra towards area of bone on the users body and releases the storm chakra in the direction the bone is aiming. So if the elbow of the left arm for example is facing upward towards the oppopents chest, the storm will be released in that direction towards the opponent chest. The storm chakra is concentrated but not sharp it can shock the area hit. So if an opponent is touched by the chakra an electrical shock is sent to the opponent which can severely harm them, this shock is also precise enough to tear through normal armor and normal metal. The storm chakra stays connected to the user and can reach up to 5 meters in length. Its color is bright blue. Note chakra is not molded in the bone but simply uses the bones as a medium to direct the storm chakra.
- Using this jutsu counts towards the turn slot so releasing the storm chakra more then once will count towards move slot
- Can only be used a total of 5 times in battle
- Must have mastery of storm release



Straightforward are they not? If you have any questions please tell me now.
No questions asked.
 
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