Story Name?

[Chakra Wizard]

Trying to figure out what to call this new story I came up with. It's a romance where a commonly used phrase is either "You Can Stay", "Stay With Me", or "Stay Here". I'm not sure which one I wanna use as the title, though, so any thoughts on which is better?

 

[Joker]

Stay with me.

 

[chopstickchakra]

Call it Forever that way the phrase wraps up the title, stay here forever stay with me forever you can stay forever.

 

[Skylar Knight]

You Can Stay sounds better to me. It leaves us readers with the question of what the title is reffering to and what the story will be about. While, something like Stay With Me just leaves me with the impression of a normal love story.

 

[layway]

Stay with me

 

[phantomlord22]

Trying to figure out what to call this new story I came up with. It's a romance where a commonly used phrase is either "You Can Stay", "Stay With Me", or "Stay Here". I'm not sure which one I wanna use as the title, though, so any thoughts on which is better?

stay with me ---> it's beautiful and it' like you're asking for this

you can stay ---> comparing to "stay with me" It isn't Romantic, cause It may sounds like it is not different If you stay or not, It feels like "you can stay If you like", you're not asking for him/her to stay with you

stay here ---> not a good option either, cause It seems like you're more referring to place not the one itself

so I think stay with me i more romantic, and says that you like the one to stay beside you

that's all Zzz

 

[Pirate King]

you can stay

stay with me sounds generic

 

[Skylar Knight]

stay with me ---> it's beautiful and it' like you're asking for this

you can stay ---> comparing to "stay with me" It isn't Romantic, cause It may sounds like it is not different If you stay or not, It feels like "you can stay If you like", you're not asking for him/her to stay with you

stay here ---> not a good option either, cause It seems like you're more referring to place not the one itself

so I think stay with me i more romantic, and says that you like the one to stay beside you

that's all Zzz

Romantic stories don't need romantic sounding titles though. He could pick the title "Bloody Brain Matter" as long as it somehow represents the story.

 

[Clouds]

You Can Stay sounds better to me. It leaves us readers with the question of what the title is reffering to and what the story will be about. While, something like Stay With Me just leaves me with the impression of a normal love story.

This^^^^^^

 

[Chakra Wizard]

Some dispute here. Seems the poll wants Stay With Me, but it's a bit more divided in the feedback. I'll just stay that the story is in no way your casual love piece, and with the central topic to consider, Skylar's sarcastic suggestion isn't exactly out of the realm of possibilities, either - if that helps lol

Thanks a lot for all the feedback, though, guys*_* I'll see what a few others think before deciding.

 

[Oksus]

Some dispute here. Seems the poll wants Stay With Me, but it's a bit more divided in the feedback. I'll just stay that the story is in no way your casual love piece, and with the central topic to consider, Skylar's sarcastic suggestion isn't exactly out of the realm of possibilities, either - if that helps lol

Thanks a lot for all the feedback, though, guys*_* I'll see what a few others think before deciding.

Stay With Me sounds better if it's a cute romantic story.

But if "Bloody Brain Matter" wouldn't be out of question then you might want to consider something more assertive.

You can't leave or Don't leave me.

 

[Chakra Wizard]

Stay With Me sounds better if it's a cute romantic story.

But if "Bloody Brain Matter" wouldn't be out of question then you might want to consider something more assertive.

You can't leave or Don't leave me.

Yeah, the subject matter is hardly anything cute. And the two actually only met recently when that saying is first said, so something that sounds too much like a confession of love wouldn't really be the most appropriate thing in the world, y'know?


Anyways, I think I've made my decision, so thanks to everyone who put their two-cents in Appreciate it*_*