"Yes ...my brother is dead now. I don't know if my eyes are working or not yet...I certainly can't use them as weapons yet" He begins to unwrap the bandages around his head
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Ken pours out a triple shot of Everclear "You gonna take all this at once"
He pulls three dollars out of his pocket and places them on the table. He grabs his lemonade and takes slow, short sip. "So."
(I may bring back Ver.)
Ken hands him another lemonade and begins cleaning out old mugs
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Kooji's face contorts into one of extreme suprise
"Th-the Rinnegan?..you mean?"
Kooji sits there, in complete awe.
"A Senju...with the Rinnegan. But that means....*he bolts up and puts his hand on the handle of his katana* You must have stolen the eyes of an Uchiha"
(Sorry for my input but, don't you need Uzimaki/Senju dna and Uchiha dna for the Rinnigan? Or am I missing something?)
(Yeah you do but I dont really care enough to question it)
Kooji takes his hand off the handle of his katana "You were...born with the rinnegan? Thats...unheard of..."
(The one thing that makes me want to go on a rampage is incorrect info.)