[Predictions] Naruto Chapter 656: Nindō

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[ Description ]

- Actions -

: ( Thoughts )

: Speech

< Scene change >

#Jutsu#

This is my second prediction. I accept praises, criticism, and even tomatoes (fresh tomatoes please). This time I added some music. Enjoy.

PS: For those who ask if manga have music, this is not manga, this is a prediction for the sake of Kishimoto :rolleyes:


Something that is born when people walks together...
What is this thing?


[ The Shinobi is cheering for the victory against the Second Hermit of the Six Paths. All the tracks, all the footprints they left behind, lend to the same fate. They were preparing for the next major threat... Madara Uchiha. ]

< Minato and Kakashi were watching Obito after their speech. Obito was speechless... he was defeated both in strength and will. >

Obito: ...I see... so... that's it...

Kakashi: ...yes, old friend. Just like when you gave me your sharingan...

[ Obito had flashbacks about various events that took place in his past: The time when he was supposed to die under that big rock on the Kannabi bridge. His reminiscence were about the context where Team Minato was under the attack of Shinobis of Iwagakure; Kakashi losing his left eye; Rin's rescue; Obito saving Kakashi from the invisible Iwagakure shinobi; Obito saving Kakashi from the big rock; Obito giving the Sharingan to Kakashi; finally Obito asking Kakashi to protect Rin.

After this, he sees an image of himself in a blank space... an image that fades slowly into Naruto Uzumaki ]

Obito: That time... I gave all my trust to you.

Kakashi: Yes, you did... I held your eyes so I could see the future in your place... and then I failed.

- Kakashi looked Obito with sadness in his eyes -

Obito: ...you... you did not fail at all.

- Obito looked again in the direction of where Naruto was standing. His vision was blurring, the only thing he could see was the figure of an Uzumaki full of conviction, forming a light in his hand. -

Minato and Kakashi: !!??

- The tailed beasts, Minato and Kakashi looked in the direction that Obito was looking. They both saw Naruto. They looked at Obito again -

Obito: I don't need to fill the hole in my heart anymore.

Kakashi: ...why...?

Obito: It seems... like there is another pair of eyes that will look future in my place.

[ ]

- Obito smiled sincerily. This smile was honest, it really was demonstrating mixed feelings... despair and hope. Obito's Mangekyo Sharingan marks were appearing in his eyes. Kakashi and Minato looked at Obito with surprise -

Kakashi: Wait... Obito! What do you intend!?

- It was too late... a vortex in the space appeared, and so Obito dissapeared from the battlefield. After looking in every direction, Minato and Kakashi couldn't detect the presence of the Uchiha. And so, they went in the direction of the God Tree, to get rid of the God Tree from below -

< In other place of the battlefield... Madara and Hashirama were breaching in a battle of epic proportions. The heat of the fight was obvious. The shinobi alliance was advancing in this direction, but even with the Kyuubi cloak they were no match for the legendary duo, who were using techniques of large reach and wide radio. >

- Madara and Hashirama were standing above a giant tree which roots were badly damaged, separated by ten meters of distance one of each other. The Uchiha weaved through seals at a tremendous speed and started to blow air. Hashirama clapped his hands and stomped at the tree with one of his palms where he was standing -

Madara: ( As expected... they got him. It's time to move... ) #Katon - Gōka Mekkyaku!#

Hashirama: #Mokuton - Chō Jukai Heki!#

[ Madara's Majestic Destroyer Flame went out from his mouth in Hashirama's direction. The reachings of his flames were outstanding, there was no way to Hashirama to escape from such technique, so the first Hokage tried to block it instead with his Great World of Trees Wall. From his stomp, a lot of roots started to grow from the place they both were standing, and these roots formed a dense wall between the Uchiha and the Senju. ]

- When Madara's flare blocked Hashirama's field of vision, Hashirama started to oppose resistance with his defensive wall, and in that timespan Madara weaved some seals again. The Majestic Destroyer Flame faded, and so when Hashirama realized, Madara vanished from the place. Even the shinobi in the battlefield were not able to see what happened with the Founder of Konoha -

< Suddenly, an explosion of dust and debris manifested at the base of the God Tree, making Naruto lose some focus and forcing him to regain balance and reform the Wind Technique. It was Madara Uchiha using his Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, who was moving at an unbelievable speed. Madara used the roots as a pillow to reach the place quickly, and then he started to move in the direction of Naruto who was about to use the Ōdama Rasenshuriken to destroy the Tree with one blow. But suddenly... >

- At a blitzing speed, there was something like a thunder that traveled from nowhere and blocked Madara. The Uchiha used his Final Susano'o in the last second and could avoid damage, but the blitzing thunder was wielding another Final Susano'o as well, above Madara, and this familiar entity had a very familiar pair of Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan... -

Sasuke: You won't pass from this point. - Sasuke's Susano'o was being covered by a thin layer of lightning shroud -

Madara: ... ( What's this feeling!? So fast... and these are Eternal Mangekyo Sharingans... and his resemblance... he is like...! ) I won't repeat this again... let me pass, kid.

Sasuke: ...as I thought. You're going for the fruit, aren't you?

- Madara smirks, thinking about what the young Uchiha just said. The Uchiha Founder of Konoha inmediatly deducted that Sasuke had access to the Uchiha Tablet, and automatically took him as an inmediate threat -

Madara: ...nuisance. Out of my way. - Madara pushed forward, this time using the Perfect Susano'o -

Sasuke: Tsk... - Sasuke activated his Enton Kagustsuchi as a shield to cover his Final Susano'o, and the black flames started to cover Madara's Perfect Susano'o. Misteriously, the flames started to dissappear from Madara's Susano'o, while Madara's eyes were glowing with bloodlust. Madara started to walk upwards, pushing back Sasuke's Final Susano'o. -

Madara: You should respect your elders, brat.

Sasuke: Like I should care... - Sasuke's eyes glowed even more, and so he entered his Susano'o to the Perfect Unstabilized Form. This forced Madara to stop from advancing -

< The shinobi alliance started to cheer Sasuke, this was the first time someone aside of Hashirama was pushing Madara to some extent. Hashirama realized what was happening from the moment the impact sounded in the God Tree and was already halfway to reach the position that was being held by Sasuke >

Hashirama: Not bad... not bad at all... - Keeps running while smiling at Sasuke -

- Madara and Sasuke were struggling. Sasuke looking to him from above, Madara looking Sasuke's from below, both standing horizontally in the God Tree's trunk, at 20 meters of height... Madara had the upper hand, since his Susano'o was stabilized. -

[ Hashirama arrived and was some meters away from the Uchiha members. Hashirama shouted with tremendous impetus and magnanimous aura, and an angry face, like when your mom scolds you madly ]

- Hashirama: HEY! YOU! MADARA! WHY DID YOU FORFEIT!? MAYBE I SHOULD TELL SASUKE ABOUT YOUR WEAK POINT!? Ò_Ó

- Sasuke: Weak point? Shodaime, why didn't you talk before!? - Sasuke got distracted. Madara took the opportunity and took Sasuke's Susano'o from one arm and applied a judo technique, launching Sasuke with his Susano'o towards Hashirama, while talking -

Madara: Sorry Hashirama, that's not a weakpoint anymore. I don't need to pee anymore, after all...

- Sasuke and Hashirama were falling from the God Tree, both of them hit the floor. Sasuke fell over Hashirama -

Sasuke: Tsk. Gotta stop him... - Sasuke goes for Madara again -

Hashirama: Ugh... Damn you, Madara! - The first hokage starts to climb the tree as well -

< The shinobi alliance were reaching the base of the tree, which roots were moving slowly and weakly. They started to cut everything they could. Meanwhile, in the upper part of the God Tree, Madara found Uzumaki Naruto, who was in the peak of his power just about to use his wind technique. The Uzumaki and the Uchiha were separated by 3 meters of distance. Madara activated his Rinnegan while deactivating his Susano'o, and tackled with great speed, absorbing Naruto's Ōdama Rasenshuriken in the process. Naruto get a hold on one of the branches of the Tree and didn't fell. Madara walked towards Naruto, and when he was about to reach the branch... >

Naruto: - Naruto looked Madara seriously - What happened to Sasuke...!?

Madara: Who? Are you talking about that Uchiha? He just fell... - Madara puts a carefree face -

Naruto: !!?? You... you'll pay for that!

- Madara was going to start to walk towards the Uzumaki again with a emotionless expression, but then, a vortex appeared between Madara and Naruto. It was Obito, looking towards Naruto -

Madara: ... - Madara stopped and waited for Obito's next move. He couldn't see what was Obito doing -

- Obito was smiling to Naruto. His lips talked silently without expressing any sound, but Naruto was able to read them clearly. In a matter of seconds, Naruto's pupils started to shrink -

[ ]

[ Obito said: Peace will be reached. I... won't go back on my words... That's also... is my... nindō ]

Naruto: ... - Naruto dropped a last tear... and Obito's Mangekyo Sharingan started to change, while his Rinnegan started to turn pitch black. His Mangekyo lost the original pattern, and in its place a spiral pattern appeared. Finally, sound came out from Obito's mouth -

Obito: You have good eyes... Naruto. Look at the future in my place... - Obito extended both hands and arms to his sides - #Shinra Tensei#

[ Naruto, Hashirama and Sasuke were sent flying towards various places of the battle field. Naruto, while falling, looked into Obito's right eye, who resembled the eyes of the Elder Son of the Sage and the Uzumaki Clan Symbol, eye which was glowing bright red.

But Madara countered the force of Shinra Tensei with his Banshō Ten'in, so he was able to force his position through the tremendous repulsive pulse.

The former Obito was reborn. While a giant vortex with a black spiral made from black fire was absorbing the entire God Tree. Obito's body was being dismembered by the force of the black hole, as well as the trunk of the tree, and the fruit was being turned into ashes.

Madara was caught in the vortex, and he was trying to use the Rinnegan to counter the absorption force, but this time his own strength was not enough. Madara's eyes changed his colors in the last second to a bloodlust red, and after that, he got completely dismembered ]

Sasuke: ...

[ After this vortex faded... everything went silent. A column of dust and smoke was formed in the place where the God Tree used to be standing... And suddenly the smoke column dissappears... and the God Tree, Obito and Madara appears again, above the top. ]

[ ]

Obito: ...this is... Izanagi?

Madara: ...you'd like that being the case...

[ The shinobi alliance looks hopeless to this unexplainable event ]

< One kilometer away from that place, a live man with a red armor and long black hair was standing over some rocks. That man wielded a pair of Rinnegan. He was looking directly to the battlefield, where every single shinobi were in a state of eternal sleep. The sky revealed a red moon with the pattern of the Rinnegan + 9 Tomoes >

Something that is born when people walks together...

This is... a Dream.

Will Naruto be able to turn it into reality!?

I hope you like it, guys ;)
 
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It was good, but I felt that it was lengthy(probably because I don't read predictions these days), you should have added more dialogues into it and should edit out that Sasuke dialogue with Madara, otherwise it was decent..:p
 
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to tell you the truth it was amazing untill madara detectives renningan im still wondering why would he do that couple other people did the same thing the first part up to that sounds like it could really happen it a little to long to read for a naruto manga chapter it if it was like one piece this would fit but naruto manga not really overall i give it a 7/10 5 for hard thinking 1 for adding music 2 for parts i liked basicly a 3/5 from what i thought about it
 
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OMG! For god sake why don't you write predictions more often?! Do you know how many times I come here to read predictions only to be left disappointed or completely indifferent. This was the first prediction in a really long time that had soul. Impressive emotionals and even greater twists and actions. And this comes from me who I rarely recognise anyone's predictions. As a matter of fact it's so good that it might be one of best predictions I have ever read, if not the best!:flowers:flowers:happy:

P.S I didn't like that joke with the pee, it ruined the whole atmosphere, I suggest you to change it maybe.
 

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That's a pretty cool fan made chapter.
Thanks! I appreciate the support!

It was good until you made Sasuke seem humorous, you should delete that part out and only add Hashirama and Madara's humor comments.
Made a little change. I'll take that in consideration for next time.

Sasuke's ps is not strong enough to even hold madara's ps...other than that its pretty good
I know his Susano'o is not enough, that's why Madara was able to lift Sasuke from that complicated position.

One of the best I've ever read top 5 no doubt you had good character presents and good time spacing of the plot, you the truth =D
Thanks man :D

It was good, but I felt that it was lengthy(probably because I don't read predictions these days), you should have added more dialogues into it and should edit out that Sasuke dialogue with Madara, otherwise it was decent..:p
Thanks, took note. That will do. But why edit Sasuke dialogue with Madara?

I enjoyed it.
I'm glad you did.

to tell you the truth it was amazing untill madara detectives renningan im still wondering why would he do that couple other people did the same thing the first part up to that sounds like it could really happen it a little to long to read for a naruto manga chapter it if it was like one piece this would fit but naruto manga not really overall i give it a 7/10 5 for hard thinking 1 for adding music 2 for parts i liked basicly a 3/5 from what i thought about it
Emm thanks, I guess. I don't understand the criticism, I didn't know 'detectives' were a verb nowadays xD.

Great job. Keep making more.
Thanks man, I guess I could do some more.

Nice job....I liked it , but it's a bit too rushed.Anyway, you deserve a reputation point
Thanks man. :D

Good Prediction
Your -actions- did the most part ;)
It's already IT ?
Thanks sensei, actions did the most part as you say.

And yes... the message behind this prediction is that IT started long time ago (from the moment Obito was 'becoming Jinchuuriki'). The man in the end of the prediction was Uchiha Madara, who was revived with Rinne Tensei by Obito (everyone saw him becoming Jinchuuriki in the place of this other event). That gives the manga another taste.

nice job for the most part xd just try and space out your dialoque more
great predication
Thanks :)!

This was pretty interesting!
Thanks :D!

OMG! For god sake why don't you write predictions more often?! Do you know how many times I come here to read predictions only to be left disappointed or completely indifferent. This was the first prediction in a really long time that had soul. Impressive emotionals and even greater twists and actions. And this comes from me who I rarely recognise anyone's predictions. As a matter of fact it's so good that it might be one of best predictions I have ever read, if not the best!:flowers:flowers:happy:

P.S I didn't like that joke with the pee, it ruined the whole atmosphere, I suggest you to change it maybe.
Nobodies like that joke :C but thanks, you flattered me, sempai! >:C
 
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