[Predictions] Naruto vs Sasuke [FINAL BATTLE]

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I liked the start, the start of their meeting really held me to read it further along with the music you added there.

But I stopped reading (for a while) when you mentioned Naruto activating rinnegan. I seriously do not want Naruto to have a rinnegan. I'll answer it further.

But still I read further to some extent and stopped when Naruto used Shinra Tensei. And then I scrolled down to comment.

The reason I do not want Naruto to have rinnegan is because Sasuke will be eventually getting the Rinnegan in future. For that Kishimoto has already played his cards by reviving Orochimaru in Zetsu's body and also Orochimaru still got Hashirama's DNA samples. Sasuke is directly related to have Rinnegan with all those "ingredients" needed to get a Rinnegan.
I can't see a battle of strong fighters who both will have a Rinnegan and knows its use. Sasuke is a manipulation type fighter, So, he will somehow invent some combination techniques of the Rinnegan. But Naruto already has Kyuubi and he will be tooo OP with Rinnegan.
Since it will be their final battle, I don't want to see both of them spamming Rinnegan techniques after and after to evade each others' attacks.
I would prefer more like Sasuke Uchiha with Rinnegan vs Naruto Uzumaki with the uzumaki seals.

But guess what I will ( I must ) give you a rep as well as thank for the post. Now don't consider it as because we're friends on the base and I don't want to hurt for the efforts you put in the prediction. But I want to thank for considering my thoughts on the prediction and I really liked the start. I continued reading after Naruto getting the rinnegan and I found that you created an epic scene in that fight (neglecting the rinnegan powers) I liked those fighting style.
 

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I liked the start, the start of their meeting really held me to read it further along with the music you added there.

But I stopped reading (for a while) when you mentioned Naruto activating rinnegan. I seriously do not want Naruto to have a rinnegan. I'll answer it further.

But still I read further to some extent and stopped when Naruto used Shinra Tensei. And then I scrolled down to comment.

The reason I do not want Naruto to have rinnegan is because Sasuke will be eventually getting the Rinnegan in future. For that Kishimoto has already played his cards by reviving Orochimaru in Zetsu's body and also Orochimaru still got Hashirama's DNA samples. Sasuke is directly related to have Rinnegan with all those "ingredients" needed to get a Rinnegan.
I can't see a battle of strong fighters who both will have a Rinnegan and knows its use. Sasuke is a manipulation type fighter, So, he will somehow invent some combination techniques of the Rinnegan. But Naruto already has Kyuubi and he will be tooo OP with Rinnegan.
Since it will be their final battle, I don't want to see both of them spamming Rinnegan techniques after and after to evade each others' attacks.
I would prefer more like Sasuke Uchiha with Rinnegan vs Naruto Uzumaki with the uzumaki seals.

But guess what I will ( I must ) give you a rep as well as thank for the post. Now don't consider it as because we're friends on the base and I don't want to hurt for the efforts you put in the prediction. But I want to thank for considering my thoughts on the prediction and I really liked the start. I continued reading after Naruto getting the rinnegan and I found that you created an epic scene in that fight (neglecting the rinnegan powers) I liked those fighting style.
Fair enough, can't be anyone be happy with what I write and you're right, I too thought that they wouldn't be equal if he gets it. In any case, I believe that he mighte get it for some time so when he fights against Sasuke, he will have lost it. I think that Sasuke might get something completely new, I don't know. In any case make an effort to read the whole thing, you'll find out that I didn't make Naruto overpowiring Sasuke because I gave to the latter an even more OP ability and in case you're not interested in the fight, Just read the ending where I have put the last song. I really put effort on that and I tried to make it beautiful in a poetic sense.

Please?=D
 

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Fair enough, can't be anyone be happy with what I write and you're right, I too thought that they wouldn't be equal if he gets it. In any case, I believe that he mighte get it for some time so when he fights against Sasuke, he will have lost it. I think that Sasuke might get something completely new, I don't know. In any case make an effort to read the whole thing, you'll find out that I didn't make Naruto overpowiring Sasuke because I gave to the latter an even more OP ability and in case you're not interested in the fight, Just read the ending where I have put the last song. I really put effort on that and I tried to make it beautiful in a poetic sense.

Please?=D

I liked the end part as well. It was a nice ending. You nicely used that Naruto's leaf cutting in half technique where it as really needed =D
 

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Great read bro

Well made and thought battle but I bet to differ at some of the points Zzz

Anyway plus rep for a excellent and well structured prediction =D
 

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Excellent vision and display of Naruto and Sasuke final battle from your own point of view ;)

Really epic, just should be a bit longer with more thrilling and extended prologue at the begining of their battle.
This prologue could conatins description of scene, surroundings and also add special effects as changes in weathers... to create bigger impact and pull more attention from the readers.

Unless still very well done ;), I know how this is hard to write sometimes and even harder to transfer your images playing out in your head on computer or something ;)

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Excellent vision and display of Naruto and Sasuke final battle from your own point of view ;)

Really epic, just should be a bit longer with more thrilling and extended prologue at the begining of their battle.
This prologue could conatins description of scene, surroundings and also add special effects as changes in weathers... to create bigger impact and pull more attention from the readers.

Unless still very well done ;), I know how this is hard to write sometimes and even harder to transfer your images playing out in your head on computer or something ;)

+ rep ;)
Thank you very much=D and I must say you're right on most of your points. I could have done it way more detailed by adding many more scenes but you know after one point I got tired. To get an idea, this whole prediction took me 2 and half hours and I only incorporated whatever was absolutely necessary. It's not like I have any problem in transfering my imagination into images, just some times it's really time consuming. As you said, you're a fellow writter and specifically one who writes long predictions so you know it first handed. XD

Still though, I must say that I'm preety satisfied with the result, it's exactly as I had it in my mind:hooray:
 

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Not bad at all my friend :p I would have preferred the actual battle/attacks to be better highlighted, as in narrated instead of placed in "()" But other than that, it was interesting for sure. Kind of reminds me of my own FFs at times, while at others, something completely else. You nailed the soundtrack pretty good too as well, and the actual fighting was decent at times. I didn't give it a deep read, so it wouldn't be fair of me to judge it more so than this because of it. Hope that's okay.
 
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