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[Chapters opens at Naruto talking to Obito ]
Obito: Taking my mask off you say ?
Naruto : No matter what you do , you can't throw away your true self and act as if you are nobody.
(Obito close his eyes and have FB of him when he was younger )
Naruto ( Looks concerned ) :...
Obito ( Eyes still closed ) : This determination , this will to never give up , you resemble my old self a lot Naruto.
Naruto ( Looks concerned ) :...
Obito : But this is the path I've chosen ( Eyes opens ) , so i can't stop right now even if i regret it !
Naruto : ( Shocked )
Obito (Determined look ) : I'm not as naif as Nagato was , if your path is truly the solution then prove it to me by defeating me and changing this world !
Naruto (Determined look ) : As i said i'm taking that mask of your face ,and i'll do it no matter what ( smiles ) because that's my Ninja way !
[Back to the real world ]
Obito ( Determined look ) : I won't go down easily , Uzumaki Naruto !
(Obito puts his hands on the chakra and starts absorbing it )
Obito : Gakido !!
Random Ninja : His sucking back the chakra.
Gai : That's a Rinnegan power !
Naruto ( Determined look ) : Don't worry guys , we can do it !
( Panel shows random SA smiling )
Naruto : Well then everyone , pull !!
SA : YEA !!!
[Scene shift to Madara and Hashirama ]
Hashirama ( smiling ) : Well , looks like your student is about to lose Madara , you should give up , you can't beat us !
Madara : Do you really think that i'm gonna stop when i'm so close to my dream ?
Madara ( annoyed ) : * I didn't think that he will get beaten this fast , even the Shinju is paralyzed , but
if he is in such weakened state , i won't need Hashirama's SM*
Hashirama : You're as stubborn as ever , if it come to this , i'm afraid i have to stop and seal you my old friend.
Madara : Bring it on ! Mokuton Jukai Koutan !!
( Large forest emerges from the ground and attacks Hashirama )
Hashirama : That won't work on me Madara !!
( Hashirama counters with his own version of Jukai Koutan )
( Madara takes advantage of the branches and creates 1 Mokuton bunshin )
Madara :*Since its 1 clone , it should hold him for a while *
( Madara's clone rushes to Hashirama )
Madara's clone : Katon Gouka Mekkyaku !
Hashirama : Kuchiyose: Rashomon !
( Madara takes advantage of the clash and send himself flying to Obito's direction with Shurado )
[Scene change back to Obito vs SA ]
( Obito and the SA are still struggling )
Obito/Naruto : Madara !
Madara (smiling ) : What a nice scene we have here , don't you think Obito ?
Obito: Bastard ! Not only you tried to stab me in the back , but also you let me take care of all of this while doing nothing.
Madara : You shouldn't talk to me like that kid , besides i was busy fighting Hashirama , anyway let's do it !
Obito (confused ) : Doing what ?
( Obito's right half starts to turn into black Zetsu )
Obito ( Shocked ) : What ? but i thought i got rid of this earlier !
Madara : As long as your body is made of Zetsu , you can't get ride of my influence.
Obito ( Angry ) : Tsch !
( Madara makes Obito create 2 mechanical arms and forces Obito to use the seals of the Rinne Tensei with them but Obito resists )
Madara : If you resists , they will take away the Bijuu chakra from you and you'll die , and if you revive me , you'll die as well. ( smirks )
Obito ( Angry ) : Bastard !
Madara( Malicious smirks ) : So which will it be , Uchiha Obito ? !
End
What do you think guys ?
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[Chapters opens at Naruto talking to Obito ]
Obito: Taking my mask off you say ?
Naruto : No matter what you do , you can't throw away your true self and act as if you are nobody.
(Obito close his eyes and have FB of him when he was younger )
Naruto ( Looks concerned ) :...
Obito ( Eyes still closed ) : This determination , this will to never give up , you resemble my old self a lot Naruto.
Naruto ( Looks concerned ) :...
Obito : But this is the path I've chosen ( Eyes opens ) , so i can't stop right now even if i regret it !
Naruto : ( Shocked )
Obito (Determined look ) : I'm not as naif as Nagato was , if your path is truly the solution then prove it to me by defeating me and changing this world !
Naruto (Determined look ) : As i said i'm taking that mask of your face ,and i'll do it no matter what ( smiles ) because that's my Ninja way !
[Back to the real world ]
Obito ( Determined look ) : I won't go down easily , Uzumaki Naruto !
(Obito puts his hands on the chakra and starts absorbing it )
Obito : Gakido !!
Random Ninja : His sucking back the chakra.
Gai : That's a Rinnegan power !
Naruto ( Determined look ) : Don't worry guys , we can do it !
( Panel shows random SA smiling )
Naruto : Well then everyone , pull !!
SA : YEA !!!
[Scene shift to Madara and Hashirama ]
Hashirama ( smiling ) : Well , looks like your student is about to lose Madara , you should give up , you can't beat us !
Madara : Do you really think that i'm gonna stop when i'm so close to my dream ?
Madara ( annoyed ) : * I didn't think that he will get beaten this fast , even the Shinju is paralyzed , but
if he is in such weakened state , i won't need Hashirama's SM*
Hashirama : You're as stubborn as ever , if it come to this , i'm afraid i have to stop and seal you my old friend.
Madara : Bring it on ! Mokuton Jukai Koutan !!
( Large forest emerges from the ground and attacks Hashirama )
Hashirama : That won't work on me Madara !!
( Hashirama counters with his own version of Jukai Koutan )
( Madara takes advantage of the branches and creates 1 Mokuton bunshin )
Madara :*Since its 1 clone , it should hold him for a while *
( Madara's clone rushes to Hashirama )
Madara's clone : Katon Gouka Mekkyaku !
Hashirama : Kuchiyose: Rashomon !
( Madara takes advantage of the clash and send himself flying to Obito's direction with Shurado )
[Scene change back to Obito vs SA ]
( Obito and the SA are still struggling )
Obito/Naruto : Madara !
Madara (smiling ) : What a nice scene we have here , don't you think Obito ?
Obito: Bastard ! Not only you tried to stab me in the back , but also you let me take care of all of this while doing nothing.
Madara : You shouldn't talk to me like that kid , besides i was busy fighting Hashirama , anyway let's do it !
Obito (confused ) : Doing what ?
( Obito's right half starts to turn into black Zetsu )
Obito ( Shocked ) : What ? but i thought i got rid of this earlier !
Madara : As long as your body is made of Zetsu , you can't get ride of my influence.
Obito ( Angry ) : Tsch !
( Madara makes Obito create 2 mechanical arms and forces Obito to use the seals of the Rinne Tensei with them but Obito resists )
Madara : If you resists , they will take away the Bijuu chakra from you and you'll die , and if you revive me , you'll die as well. ( smirks )
Obito ( Angry ) : Bastard !
Madara( Malicious smirks ) : So which will it be , Uchiha Obito ? !
End
What do you think guys ?
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