It’s no secret, I don’t like the pacing and tone of this war, but it could get better. So C'mon from fans to characters, whatever comes mind:
Obito: Stop flapping your gums, sthu and just be OP and menacing looking. Every time you open your mouth it's painful to have to read the nonsense that comes out of it. "Not a moment to spare"! So, lets immediately initiate another conversation with Naruto, Brilliant.
Madara: Do something!!!!!
Sasuke: Just keep rolling out those OP moves without ever having to do anything to attain them, I mean god forbid you have to actually work hard. Oh, and don't forget to act all cool when you show up to play the last 5 min of the football game. Everyone else (especially Naruto) has been busting their asses and carrying the team throughout the last 4 halfs, you on the other hand: Woke up from a nap, went for a walk, watched your brother beat Kabuto, went for another walk, listened to a story, and then finally showed up ready to fight.
Kakashi: Enough with Obito, we're all tired of the guilt thing, the guy’s willing to kill everyone and everything so he can live in a permanent heroin trip, and you still wanna have a chat with this assclown??? Get up, and do what needs to be done, knock some sense into him with your fists. After he's wounded and kicks your ass, let his character get some redemption by making Madara mortal or something. He'll be mortal, and Naruto and Sasuke are the only ones standing between him victory - Now that's a fight, not the fight that's probably gonna to happen, but lets propel this story forward. I don't care how it happens, but the tone and pacing of this war needs to be switched up. As epic as the setting to this battle is, this fight feels stale and drawn out.
Sakura: No one expects anything from you, so just continue doing something other then crying from time to time, and maybe the fans won't hate on you to such extremes.
Tsunade: We all know you’re running on borrowed time, so I'm not even going to bring up anything other then the fact that its already been established how a body’s cells can only divide and be created a set number of times using the “Creation Rebirth” technique (It’s probably exactly what happened to Hashi after fighting Madara back in the day. I mean they had to figure out that rule somehow right?)
Sai: Do something heroic, and then die. Go out with some style, don't be that forgotten character at the end of the series that no one remembers. I have no idea what you could possibly do other then seal something, but go for it. - Try to seal Madara and fail.
Gai: 8th gate buddy. Rock Lee needs to rise, and become the man we know he's destined to be. He needs to surpass you. I don't know.... You and Rock lee can be sent to melee Madara while Sai tries to seal him. - Just throwing stuff out there and seeing what sticks.
Killer B: You and A need to fight together, and be that bad ass tag team we've heard so much about. A's probably going to die saving your ass, but he'll always be with you, so make him proud, step up and fight future Raikage! - .... Killer B as Raikage... Don't see it, but your character needs to develop somehow.
Kabuto: Time to snap out of the daydream buddy. C'mon have a laugh, revive Rin, conduct a long overdue group intervention for Obito. Perhaps you, Minato, Rin, and Kakashi could get him to open up, and FINALLY share his feelings.
Oro: We all believe you're going to do something Oro’ish, so it’s fine for you to be reserved with questionable intentions (you have a pass for the moment). Now that you have some Senju DNA via White Zetsu, and you've watched everything Kabuto's done from inside him, Sage mode isn't unreasonable.
Black Zetsu (infused with Madara's will): You're a wild card, we know you're going to play a big role in the turn of events. How? I can speculate all day. For all we know, Obito makes no sense, because he has a split personality. Obito was crushed, half his body was replaced, and then he went bat ****.
Let's go people! End this War on an all out melee of excitement, not a drawn out lull of boredom.
Madara: Using Hashi's "Sage Mode" casting "True Several Thousand Hands" covered over with "Susanoo Armor" kinda excitement.
Enough of this end of the chapter: Oh wow, they're going to do some super amazing attack! - End chapter.
Next chapter: Attack failed... talking, talking, talking, talking, Oh here comes a new amazing attack! -End chapter
Next Chapter: Attack failed... Ego Boost time, talking, talking, talking, Let's go get him! - End chapter
Next Chapter: Attack failed... Ok! lets dig deep, talking, talking, talking, Another super attack - End chapter
Next Chapter: Attack failed.... zz......
Yes... I know it was way too long, but whatever.
Obito: Stop flapping your gums, sthu and just be OP and menacing looking. Every time you open your mouth it's painful to have to read the nonsense that comes out of it. "Not a moment to spare"! So, lets immediately initiate another conversation with Naruto, Brilliant.
Madara: Do something!!!!!
Sasuke: Just keep rolling out those OP moves without ever having to do anything to attain them, I mean god forbid you have to actually work hard. Oh, and don't forget to act all cool when you show up to play the last 5 min of the football game. Everyone else (especially Naruto) has been busting their asses and carrying the team throughout the last 4 halfs, you on the other hand: Woke up from a nap, went for a walk, watched your brother beat Kabuto, went for another walk, listened to a story, and then finally showed up ready to fight.
Kakashi: Enough with Obito, we're all tired of the guilt thing, the guy’s willing to kill everyone and everything so he can live in a permanent heroin trip, and you still wanna have a chat with this assclown??? Get up, and do what needs to be done, knock some sense into him with your fists. After he's wounded and kicks your ass, let his character get some redemption by making Madara mortal or something. He'll be mortal, and Naruto and Sasuke are the only ones standing between him victory - Now that's a fight, not the fight that's probably gonna to happen, but lets propel this story forward. I don't care how it happens, but the tone and pacing of this war needs to be switched up. As epic as the setting to this battle is, this fight feels stale and drawn out.
Sakura: No one expects anything from you, so just continue doing something other then crying from time to time, and maybe the fans won't hate on you to such extremes.
Tsunade: We all know you’re running on borrowed time, so I'm not even going to bring up anything other then the fact that its already been established how a body’s cells can only divide and be created a set number of times using the “Creation Rebirth” technique (It’s probably exactly what happened to Hashi after fighting Madara back in the day. I mean they had to figure out that rule somehow right?)
Sai: Do something heroic, and then die. Go out with some style, don't be that forgotten character at the end of the series that no one remembers. I have no idea what you could possibly do other then seal something, but go for it. - Try to seal Madara and fail.
Gai: 8th gate buddy. Rock Lee needs to rise, and become the man we know he's destined to be. He needs to surpass you. I don't know.... You and Rock lee can be sent to melee Madara while Sai tries to seal him. - Just throwing stuff out there and seeing what sticks.
Killer B: You and A need to fight together, and be that bad ass tag team we've heard so much about. A's probably going to die saving your ass, but he'll always be with you, so make him proud, step up and fight future Raikage! - .... Killer B as Raikage... Don't see it, but your character needs to develop somehow.
Kabuto: Time to snap out of the daydream buddy. C'mon have a laugh, revive Rin, conduct a long overdue group intervention for Obito. Perhaps you, Minato, Rin, and Kakashi could get him to open up, and FINALLY share his feelings.
Oro: We all believe you're going to do something Oro’ish, so it’s fine for you to be reserved with questionable intentions (you have a pass for the moment). Now that you have some Senju DNA via White Zetsu, and you've watched everything Kabuto's done from inside him, Sage mode isn't unreasonable.
Black Zetsu (infused with Madara's will): You're a wild card, we know you're going to play a big role in the turn of events. How? I can speculate all day. For all we know, Obito makes no sense, because he has a split personality. Obito was crushed, half his body was replaced, and then he went bat ****.
Let's go people! End this War on an all out melee of excitement, not a drawn out lull of boredom.
Madara: Using Hashi's "Sage Mode" casting "True Several Thousand Hands" covered over with "Susanoo Armor" kinda excitement.
Enough of this end of the chapter: Oh wow, they're going to do some super amazing attack! - End chapter.
Next chapter: Attack failed... talking, talking, talking, talking, Oh here comes a new amazing attack! -End chapter
Next Chapter: Attack failed... Ego Boost time, talking, talking, talking, Let's go get him! - End chapter
Next Chapter: Attack failed... Ok! lets dig deep, talking, talking, talking, Another super attack - End chapter
Next Chapter: Attack failed.... zz......
Yes... I know it was way too long, but whatever.
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