I am a artist...NOT A RAPPER!

[Guy Fawkes]

First off, NamikazeTheRapper, I commend you on your music, it encouraged me to post mine here. I'm sure I will receive criticism, which is why I never posted any music before...but like lee would say; "nothing ventured, nothing gained". So..with out further ado I present to you CRA$HER WAVE -TALLEY ​

 

[Desanto]

I agree with that quote, i'm glad my threads encouraged you to post some music. You wont get nowhere unless you try right? As far as the track goes...The verse itself needs some work, I like the beat and I got the idea of what you where trying to do with the track but your voice was pretty low and I had a hard time understanding exactly what you where saying. The beat sounded like something XXYYXX would have produced(which is a good thing). You just got to keep practicing my brother !

 

[rasengan616]

Lol.I cant even really understand you.

 

[Guy Fawkes]

yea, I keep hearin people say they cant understand me, so i'll post a song with better quality in a min, as far as verse are concerned, i think i know what im doing Lol. But thanks for posting guys I appreciate the feedback=D

 

[Joon]

I am guessing this was an Intro, correct? Not the whole song? An incomplete version so to say. Nice instruments used to create the beat. I do not know if you were trying to sing or rap. It was like you were mumbling. The lyrics were "standard" in today's Rap and used by Rapper alike such as Lil Wayne and Future. Joking there, but I seems as if your were going for their style due to the tone of the song. Lyrics need more work, deeper meaning to catch the depth and essence of you.

Other than that, its great.

 

[Etari]

*an

Came here just to correct that.
Kbye.

 

[Punk Hazard]

Not gonna lie, didn't really like it. The beat was pretty good for a love or soft track, you know, some Forbidden Fruit or Poetic Justice type of shit, but I could hardly understand you. You were trying to mix rapping with singing or something, and it kinda came out like mumbling. Since I could hardly understand you, I couldn't get a grasp on the lyrics properly, so I can't really judge that though it didn't sound too complex.

 

[Guy Fawkes]

*an

Came here just to correct that.
Kbye.

:bye:

I am guessing this was an Intro, correct? Not the whole song? An incomplete version so to say. Nice instruments used to create the beat. I do not know if you were trying to sing or rap. It was like you were mumbling. The lyrics were "standard" in today's Rap and used by Rapper alike such as Lil Wayne and Future. Joking there, but I seems as if your were going for their style due to the tone of the song. Lyrics need more work, deeper meaning to catch the depth and essence of you.

Other than that, its great.

none of my songs get mixed and mastered so they never sound quality like, it's more Lo-Fi than HI-Fi, and the song wasnt meant to be deep it was just meant to be a feel good record, but thanks for opinion, I do appreciate it sir=D

 

[Desanto]

:bye:


none of my songs get mixed and mastered so they never sound quality like, it's more Lo-Fi than HI-Fi, and the song wasnt meant to be deep it was just meant to be a feel good record, but thanks for opinion, I do appreciate it sir=D

If you need your songs mastered I can plug it into my mastering program, it will make it sound a little more crisp.

 

[Alpha Q up]

as soon as i saw NOT A RAPPER i immediately thought of this

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[Joon]

:bye:


none of my songs get mixed and mastered so they never sound quality like, it's more Lo-Fi than HI-Fi, and the song wasnt meant to be deep it was just meant to be a feel good record, but thanks for opinion, I do appreciate it sir=D

That Marijuana vibe. ......Not every cares about plants. :| Some of us want to sympathize with you or look from your point of view rather it is Hip Hop, R&B, Rock, Country, etc. u_u

as soon as i saw NOT A RAPPER i immediately thought of this

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lol I thought the same. >_>

 

[Filo]

but im not a rapper
[video=youtube;MeB3eYk1Ze0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MeB3eYk1Ze0[/video]

 

[Guy Fawkes]

lol there's always going to be people who poke fun, i dont mind really.

That Marijuana vibe. ......Not every cares about plants. Some of us want to sympathize with you or look from your point of view rather it is Hip Hop, R&B, Rock, Country, etc. u_u

Ummm, it was one song..who says i dont make songs like that? I just posted another..