The people of Despair

Craziie

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You feel hate
but feel no love
You feel lonely
but forget the existence
around you
You feel misread
but forget the ones who understand
You feel dark
but forget the light
You feel mental pain
but you just lose your
happiness
You try and heal
but scars stay opened
you get labeled as abnormal
but You are the same person
who hase yet to find
your own light
You think you have lost
the battle
but there is still
a war
for you
to win
yourselves back
and this is never
faced
alone
because those
who care and want
to see you smile
will be your loyal soliders
on helping you
steal your heart

from what
we call
despair


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If may be horrible, I don't know. I'm rusty with poems right now, it's been months. So if you missed the message it is.... :
People feel the opposite on what is really going on, and stay stuck in depression. Perceiving things wrong, and thinking there is some pill or treatment to get you out of the dark, it is only you. You may get labled as some freak but No matter what you think, there will always be someone who cares and wishes to help. It could be anybody, to your family to a stranger you never met.So don't close them out, and answer to their aid, and stop being your own enemy.
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Oh yeah, listen to it with this ....it makes it better >__>
If you like the instrumental, here is the orginal song
Just beautiful, right?

Anywho, thanks for reading =D

Lemme get dat ass ;) too....
 

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It's wonderful, and well thought out. Keep posting these poems. You inspired me enough to consider posting some of my poems on here.

made me tear a little.

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Craziie

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It's wonderful, and well thought out. Keep posting these poems. You inspired me enough to consider posting some of my poems on here.

made me tear a little.

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Thanks, I apre pre ate, commens like this, and you should post your own peoms, it feels really nice to let other people know a story or feeling in words that are more understandable than you speaking yourself... ;)
 

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Negged, it fukin sucks

this is very nice, plus rep O__O
 
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