Riseofthephoenix
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Sorry if there is alot of words. It's a very deep story. Naruto/Bleach inspired
Part 1
There is a explanation that an entity created, two sons. One created hell, the other created heaven. As time passed new rulers were made in hell. On heaven however the son found these beings called ‘The Greater Angels’ and passed his power unto them, bringing the start of the angels. Both hell and heaven searched the wildlands (a vast piece of land separating both), both civilisations finally met. Their happiness of discovery soon turned to violence as a war raged for land, power over the other. One of the Greater Angels realising the strength of hell got a demon and using it’s life, sought to make himself stronger. This began the beginning of the Archangels and the Greater Archangel Gabriel. Heaven has a civil war until the archangels and Gabriel were defeated.
On a dark night in hell. Sousan, Ruler of hell has two sons born, Dervish and Ivan. His wife dies at child birth much to his dismay saying she fears for the future. On streets of hell a stranger dumps a basket on someone’s porch knocking door. Osaris (soldier) and his wife find a baby in it and call him Matius. Matius grows up and Osaris takes interest. One day Matius sees Osaris’s sword room and Osaris shows how to use sword and teaches him sword fighting. Many years pass and Osaris considers quitting the army, they go to markets and Matius sees friend of Osaris (who is a trader) with weapons and becomes inspired.In the royal throne Ivan and Dervish older meet Sousan and Sousan explains that they will both have to fight each other for right of ruler when Sousan dies. Next night Osaris has several soldiers meet him at night telling of problem in wildlands, might need to investigate. Next day Soldiers meet him again and Osaris leaves Matius and wife alone. Next few weeks Osaris doesn’t return and Matius is very upset. One night stranger comes over and tells Matius you will make Osaris proud.
One night Dervish finds something strange about his power which makes him freak out, he blackens the mirror upon touching it. Sees Ivan later and shows off his power, Ivan himself is anxious about Dervish’s power. Matius joins the academy and is shown around the Royal palace halls, at the end of the tour they are shown their dormitories and timetable lessons. Dervish and Ivan also see Matius with the tour guide and both sons get into trouble, angering Sousan (he is very protective of them) Sousan admits to Ivan he fears Dervish’s power, what if he cannot control it? Ivan talks to Dervish and Ivan reassures him there is still hope. Matius next day has weapon training and is better than his trainer expected, he gets friends quickly. Matius then has history lesson finding out the beginning of hell and learning about ‘people who are ruler’s are a desendant of the first ruler (the entity’s son). Dervish starts having nightmares in his sleep, someone hearing Dervish screaming goes to help him only for Dervish to blacken her hand permenantly injuring her. Sousan finds out.
Matius is growing popular with several of the students except on who is envious of Matius, in weapon training both duel it out and Matius wins, suprising everyone. People start to hear about the incident of Dervish blackening the women’s hand, branding him a freak a nightmare. Ivan tries to help Dervsh, assure him in time you will control your power. On a geography tour Matius and several students get a taste of the wildlands for the first time, Matius realising it’s a big world out there. Dervish walking down the corridor gets held up by some men who bully Dervish, Dervish gives in killing the two boys with his power. Sousan turns a blind eye pretending he didn’t hear anything.
Part 1
There is a explanation that an entity created, two sons. One created hell, the other created heaven. As time passed new rulers were made in hell. On heaven however the son found these beings called ‘The Greater Angels’ and passed his power unto them, bringing the start of the angels. Both hell and heaven searched the wildlands (a vast piece of land separating both), both civilisations finally met. Their happiness of discovery soon turned to violence as a war raged for land, power over the other. One of the Greater Angels realising the strength of hell got a demon and using it’s life, sought to make himself stronger. This began the beginning of the Archangels and the Greater Archangel Gabriel. Heaven has a civil war until the archangels and Gabriel were defeated.
On a dark night in hell. Sousan, Ruler of hell has two sons born, Dervish and Ivan. His wife dies at child birth much to his dismay saying she fears for the future. On streets of hell a stranger dumps a basket on someone’s porch knocking door. Osaris (soldier) and his wife find a baby in it and call him Matius. Matius grows up and Osaris takes interest. One day Matius sees Osaris’s sword room and Osaris shows how to use sword and teaches him sword fighting. Many years pass and Osaris considers quitting the army, they go to markets and Matius sees friend of Osaris (who is a trader) with weapons and becomes inspired.In the royal throne Ivan and Dervish older meet Sousan and Sousan explains that they will both have to fight each other for right of ruler when Sousan dies. Next night Osaris has several soldiers meet him at night telling of problem in wildlands, might need to investigate. Next day Soldiers meet him again and Osaris leaves Matius and wife alone. Next few weeks Osaris doesn’t return and Matius is very upset. One night stranger comes over and tells Matius you will make Osaris proud.
One night Dervish finds something strange about his power which makes him freak out, he blackens the mirror upon touching it. Sees Ivan later and shows off his power, Ivan himself is anxious about Dervish’s power. Matius joins the academy and is shown around the Royal palace halls, at the end of the tour they are shown their dormitories and timetable lessons. Dervish and Ivan also see Matius with the tour guide and both sons get into trouble, angering Sousan (he is very protective of them) Sousan admits to Ivan he fears Dervish’s power, what if he cannot control it? Ivan talks to Dervish and Ivan reassures him there is still hope. Matius next day has weapon training and is better than his trainer expected, he gets friends quickly. Matius then has history lesson finding out the beginning of hell and learning about ‘people who are ruler’s are a desendant of the first ruler (the entity’s son). Dervish starts having nightmares in his sleep, someone hearing Dervish screaming goes to help him only for Dervish to blacken her hand permenantly injuring her. Sousan finds out.
Matius is growing popular with several of the students except on who is envious of Matius, in weapon training both duel it out and Matius wins, suprising everyone. People start to hear about the incident of Dervish blackening the women’s hand, branding him a freak a nightmare. Ivan tries to help Dervsh, assure him in time you will control your power. On a geography tour Matius and several students get a taste of the wildlands for the first time, Matius realising it’s a big world out there. Dervish walking down the corridor gets held up by some men who bully Dervish, Dervish gives in killing the two boys with his power. Sousan turns a blind eye pretending he didn’t hear anything.
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