Jutsu Idea: Yoshin Rasengan!

ThatOfLegend

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Welcome to my thread, this will the first of many threads I will be making, featuring my (hopefully) original jutsu ideas. The jutsu I am featuring today is one that I had made a previous thread about, but back then, it had just been a fresh idea I was eager to show the base, it was also not officially named at the time, so lets get this started, shall we?

The name of my jutsu is the Yoshin(Aftershock) Rasengan(This name is given credit to the user Lazerus Eks) or potentially Sage Art:Aftershock Rasengan. Yes, this is ANOTHER Rasengan variation, but I assure you that it distinctly different from any other in manga Rasengan. The reason I say potentially Sage Art is because this may cause the jutsu to work better/faster/easier. Now I will show you what gave me the idea for this idea in the first place.

Do you see how this Rasengan is drawn, back when it was first introduced to the Anime/Manga?

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As opposed to one of the most recent chapters?

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Now it is fairly obvious of one thing, Kishi probably just changed his drawing style for the Rasengan, maybe it was because of sage mode or something, I'm just showing you how I got my idea and how I think that it might help to have a clear visual while imagining how this would work.

Now here is what actually makes this variant unique, and I think, very useful. The Yoshin Rasengan actually forms INSIDE of the victim. This would either work by the forming chakra to push the organs away or simply shredding away the insides. This could potentially seriously harm someone with a very strong defense (For example, a Bjiuu cloak) that coats their body, something like a Susano'o would probably be too thick for this to work effectivily. Combining this with variants like the Odama Rasengan could one-shot even the most powerful foes.

Now on to the Sage Art:Yoshin Rasengan. Now this is where skeptics about the non-sage art technique might have some explanations. Now, one of the two biggest problems people have been having with this(As I observed with my previous thread) was the fact that chakra might experience some problems forming inside of another shinobi. Now, unrelated to Sage Mode(Prehaps more towards Kyubii Mode) would be Naruto's impressive chakra control, as shown once the bond between Naruto and Kurama was formed, this could help when trying to form the jutsu within another chakra network. Also, this does have to do with Sage Mode, the control of Nature chakra could prove very useful with this technique. The only problem with that is the jutsu may require too much chakra and just turn the victim to stone first(Though I seriously doubt it). Plus, with BSM Naruto has shown to be able to manipulate and build natural chakra very quickly.

The other problem to address is, of course, how would someone preform this jutsu fast enough? Well, as addressed in the previous paragraph, Naruto can manipulate natural chackra very quickly. But its obvious that even that wouldn't be fast enough, right? Well, we've seen that a Sage Mode punch (Prehaps frog kumite...?) is very strong, and could potentially stun an opponent that isn't too strong, and with BSM could potentially stun an opponent Kage-level, or prehaps a bit higher.

The last way I could even dream of this jutsu hitting consistently with out asspull Plot-no-jutsu is by using a seal.
Now I know that Naruto has never shown any feats whatsoever in sealing, but he is an uzumaki, and his father IS Minato Namikaze, so he could pick up something, maybe. Im honestly not even sure a jutsu like rasengan could be projected out of a seal, but hey, its an idea.

If you ask me, a Senjutsu-based Yoshin Rasengan (Or Sage Art:Yoshin Rasenshuriken, or Sage Art:Wind-Style Yoshin Rasenshuriken?) could potentially kill, or do some serious damage to Jubito. Now this is NOT a prediction thread, this will probably never happen, I just like sharing my ideas

Feel free to give feedback, just please don't be a jerk on purpose.
As always, thanks for reading!:win:
 

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The pictures don't show up for me. Otherwise, cool stuff.
 

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Man, this is a brutal jutsu. I can only imagine what the victim's insides would look like after but I doubt something like this would ever make it to a shonen manga.
 

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The pictures doesn't work but i don't like it at all

What about a rasengan made of Love and Plot no jutsu, that'll be better than TBB.
 

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Sorry for the technical errors with the pictures, the first shows Jiraiya wielding the rasengan for the first time in the manga, the second one was naruto wielding the rasengan right before he landed a blow on Jubito (Difference, one was touching the hand, the other floating)

Thanks for the positive feedback guys, it means alot:happy:
 

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Holy shit... This move would be devestating!!
 

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Only Kakuzu can learn such a move
 

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I'm fine with this, but could I get some feedback of why you don't like this idea, for future reference?

Well the technique itself looks Powerful but the thing is, it's a RASENGAN! i'm tired about rasengan variety, we need a new jutsu U_U

Look at this variety of rasengans;

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Well the technique itself looks Powerful but the thing is, it's a RASENGAN! i'm tired about rasengan variety, we need a new jutsu U_U

Look at this variety of rasengans;

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I tried to make it unique from the other varients, but I completely understand what you're saying, thanks for the info, I'll keep it in mind for later threads (Those are some pretty sick Rasengans)
 

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I tried to make it unique from the other varients, but I completely understand what you're saying, thanks for the info, I'll keep it in mind for later threads (Those are some pretty sick Rasengans)

@Bold, And i appreciate your hard work, i like those kind of people that make good threads in NB, you're one of them.

@Underline, A new version of Tailed Beast Bomb would be sick U_U, Fuuton RasenShuriken Tailed Beast Bomb would be sick U_U
 

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We need a new jutsu!

What next? Oodama Chidori? XD
 
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