The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 30 [45]
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Student? =p That would be like ThatOneChick and Reborn, haha
I'm nowhere near that good bro, but thanks for the compliment
Btw, I've already completed 1/6 chapters for the final sequel, and quite frankly it's been awhile since I've felt this way writing. I don't feel like I'm bond to notes anymore xP Even though the main story is laid out, there are plenty of room left out when writing it, and I'm sure you all will find the first chapter and the whole sequel... unexpected
Dunno when I'll start releasing it yet though as I'm still on my "official break" ;D
darkstar94
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to think it took u two and a half year to complete yur work.....man u really did great.......keep up the good work......i started reading your a fanfiction a week ago.....and i must say its really good and interesting
Thanks bro =p Although it actually took three years xP ;D And I still got some projects left in this Series before I can say that I'm done
Good to hear, as new readers are always welcomed ^_^
Kuroi Honoo
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It was unfortunate that Aiko and Ami had to fight each other and that Aiko forfeited. However, I suppose you applied logic as the kunoichi(s) simply are the weaker link in Kishimoto’s story unfortunately. So I suppose it was inevitable that Kushina/Ebizo would have children of their own. Whoa-Sasuke’s whereabouts UNKNOWN!!! I definitely don’t like that like of that lol So Minato seems to be torn between Ami/Aiko I wonder how that triangle will turn out lol Minato’s room filling up via a water jutsu and then being vaporized by another jutsu seems very similar-I think this happened earlier in your story lol It was amusing how Miyuki via losing her temper then contradicted herself by using another jutsu XD Wow, I don’t think I would've ever seen the day when Kakashi/Gai actually settled down to have wives/children and of course Kakashi would’ve ended up with Yugao-nice pairing ^^ Kakashi’s comment about his bad memory so reminded me of me-did you have me in mind by any chance? XD Oh, thankfully Sasuke;s missing in action was due to only training! ^^ And he’s back!!! I was wondering just how old exactly the citizens of Konoha were and Kakashi is 66-wow! So Mu and Saria pursued a relationship and ended up married despite their age difference not to mention the struggle to be together as they are both living in different territories. Kakashi/Gai naming their children after each other definitely signifies the bond of friendship between them. That is crazy-I had no idea so the next chapter in Naruto’s life would be to replace Great Toad Sage and whilst also being human lol So another time-skip, Minato has defeated his father and became the eighth Hokage while Aiko won out to her sister as his partner and they even have children named after the three members of former team seven-cool! It is very interesting that Kushina/Ebizo decided to name their two children after Neji/Tsunade-kind of random names. So everything is finally coming full circle as the three sages have gathered. What a shocking revelation between the Great Toad Sage being Rikudou’s personal summoning to Naruto having to lose his humanity!!! Wow and another time-skip!! I liked the ending as it was peaceful and hopeful and was left open-ended. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter even though it had no action but you’re one of the few to be able to pull this off and it was the perfect chapter to tie in your story together! Its been fun these last couple of years reading your grand story and I look forward to your future works =D
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2: Glad you confirmed that as I thought there was something familiar lol I think you did well in your attempt not to confuse
3: Well, that was a huge preview as to the next and final sequel. I’m happy that at least it continues one last time and I’m definitely looking forward to it.
4/5: Interesting facts and I appreciate the time you took to inform your readers. You really have so much planned and the best of luck to you in completing them! ^^
It is very interesting that Kushina/Ebizo decided to name their two children after Neji/Tsunade-kind of random names. So everything is finally coming full circle as the three sages have gathered. What a shocking revelation between the Great Toad Sage being Rikudou’s personal summoning to Naruto having to lose his humanity!!! Wow and another time-skip!! I liked the ending as it was peaceful and hopeful and was left open-ended. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter even though it had no action but you’re one of the few to be able to pull this off and it was the perfect chapter to tie in your story together! Its been fun these last couple of years reading your grand story and I look forward to your future works =DFun Facts & Author's Note:
2: Glad you confirmed that as I thought there was something familiar lol I think you did well in your attempt not to confuse
3: Well, that was a huge preview as to the next and final sequel. I’m happy that at least it continues one last time and I’m definitely looking forward to it.
4/5: Interesting facts and I appreciate the time you took to inform your readers. You really have so much planned and the best of luck to you in completing them! ^^
Damn, finally someone noticed that! xP Yes indeed, it has happened before, as the entire first part of Minato waking up late, until Kakashi starts thinking of the past, is actually the first half of Chapter 3, redone again (copied and pasted for most parts)It was unfortunate that Aiko and Ami had to fight each other and that Aiko forfeited. However, I suppose you applied logic as the kunoichi(s) simply are the weaker link in Kishimoto’s story unfortunately. So I suppose it was inevitable that Kushina/Ebizo would have children of their own. Whoa-Sasuke’s whereabouts UNKNOWN!!! I definitely don’t like that like of that lol So Minato seems to be torn between Ami/Aiko I wonder how that triangle will turn out lol Minato’s room filling up via a water jutsu and then being vaporized by another jutsu seems very similar-I think this happened earlier in your story lol It was amusing how Miyuki via losing her temper then contradicted herself by using another jutsu XD Wow, I don’t think I would've ever seen the day when Kakashi/Gai actually settled down to have wives/children and of course Kakashi would’ve ended up with Yugao-nice pairing ^^ Kakashi’s comment about his bad memory so reminded me of me-did you have me in mind by any chance? XD Oh, thankfully Sasuke;s missing in action was due to only training! ^^ And he’s back!!! I was wondering just how old exactly the citizens of Konoha were and Kakashi is 66-wow! So Mu and Saria pursued a relationship and ended up married despite their age difference not to mention the struggle to be together as they are both living in different territories. Kakashi/Gai naming their children after each other definitely signifies the bond of friendship between them. That is crazy-I had no idea so the next chapter in Naruto’s life would be to replace Great Toad Sage and whilst also being human lol So another time-skip, Minato has defeated his father and became the eighth Hokage while Aiko won out to her sister as his partner and they even have children named after the three members of former team seven-cool!
Fun Facts & Author's Note:
2: Glad you confirmed that as I thought there was something familiar lol I think you did well in your attempt not to confuse
3: Well, that was a huge preview as to the next and final sequel. I’m happy that at least it continues one last time and I’m definitely looking forward to it.
4/5: Interesting facts and I appreciate the time you took to inform your readers. You really have so much planned and the best of luck to you in completing them! ^^
;D Glad finally someone noticed, and I wouldn't expect it to be anyone else than you =DThe thing was that I was actually thinking of just jumping to the scene that would take place after "time finally went back to present time" as detailed in the three first chapters of this sequel, but in the end, I thought it was better to give the readers something familiar to work with instead, to reveal the "leap" that way. Besides, it had gone over a year since I released chapter 3, so not too many people might have noticed ;D
Haha, maybe you asked me that question back at chapter 3? xD I dunno, not in particular my friend, but maybe there's a connection between the two of you there, haha (no offense intended) ;D
The naming of Tsunade was in honor of the 5th Hokage, while the naming of Neji was in honor of Kushina's uncle, so not completely random, but still a bit strange perhaps xP
Thanks my friend, glad to have had you with me for three whole years ^_^ Dunno how it would have been without your precious reviews
Now, to look towards the future!
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Kuroi Honoo
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I’m glad that I was able to recognize the familiarities in this chapter! =DDamn, finally someone noticed that! xP Yes indeed, it has happened before, as the entire first part of Minato waking up late, until Kakashi starts thinking of the past, is actually the first half of Chapter 3, redone again (copied and pasted for most parts)
The thing was that I was actually thinking of just jumping to the scene that would take place after "time finally went back to present time" as detailed in the three first chapters of this sequel, but in the end, I thought it was better to give the readers something familiar to work with instead, to reveal the "leap" that way. Besides, it had gone over a year since I released chapter 3, so not too many people might have noticed ;D
Haha, maybe you asked me that question back at chapter 3? xD I dunno, not in particular my friend, but maybe there's a connection between the two of you there, haha (no offense intended) ;D
The naming of Tsunade was in honor of the 5th Hokage, while the naming of Neji was in honor of Kushina's uncle, so not completely random, but still a bit strange perhaps xP
Thanks my friend, glad to have had you with me for three whole years ^_^ Dunno how it would have been without your precious reviews
No offense taken as I actually had a laugh about that ^^
My bad, I completely disregarded Kushina’s uncle and I think you made reference to the 5th Hokage when choosing that name now that I think about lol
You’re welcome and thank you for the compliments. I had fun reading your FF and its still not over as you have the final sequel in the works! ^^
Hehe, well that goes to show that one that has bad memory as you claim to have, actually can be the only one that remembers in some cases, like in this one
;DYeah, the sequel is progressing quite well actually! If everything goes as planned, I might be looking at a release this weekend!
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Okay, since people seems to have missed it, I'll be pasting in the update I did in my Social Group some days ago here:
* At this stage, I've completed 5/6 actually...Michael92 said:Update 12:
Alright, to begin with, it's not an update to reveal a link to a new chapter release this time around... The purpose of this update is just to notify you people that I haven't gone in the grave during my "official break" from NB writing after I completed the sequel in my TLSoK Series and released its final chapter some weeks ago, for those of you who might think that. In fact, I've actually spent a lot of time writing, and already (almost, or, more or less) completed writing 4 out of 6 chapters of the final sequel, named; The Legendary Sage of Konoha's Legacy. With this sequel, I've taken the liberty to explore and test new ways to both narrate and to play around with characters, and I'm excited to soon be releasing the first chapter to you guys. I don't know when yet, but some time this month for sure! The deal is that I want to complete all six chapters before releasing the first one, so that I can start working on TLSoK Short Movie, that I will end this Series with, and as I suspect, that might take some time.
Now, I don't know how many of you actually reads/cares about this update (or who many of you actually have subscribed to this thread/discussion), but if you do and want to say/ask anything about it, please do so here;
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If enough people care, I might even reveal some details on the plot, the characters, and so forth
* 3-5 are actually the 2nd, 3rd and 4th biggest chapters I've ever written, so prepare for some massive chapters to come ;D
* Since I'm so close to the release date, I'll be keeping the details close to my chest. All I can say is that I'm going to aim for two releases a week.
* As soon as I'm done with chapter 6, I'll be releasing chapter 1, so like I said, stay tuned people.
* If I manage to get chapter 6 done before the 23rd of September, then that means that I've actually been able to write 6 whole chapters in less than a month's time, and considering three of them are gigantic in size already, I think I might be looking at a personal speedy record for me xP
darkstar94
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so with this im finally done with this series and could now move on to the next......and btw i loved this chapter and one of your best written chapter....