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I'm working on a much better one but I've been gone for a while so i felt like i had to drop something lol Even if it sounds rusty... This rap is RAW though, no editing mixing or mastering really. Thanks for listening ! Drop some feedback..

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Oh AND I APOLOGIZE FOR NO SHOUT-OUTS, I TOTALLY FORGOT BUT THEY'LL BE INCLUDED IN THE NEXT ONE, THANKS.

[video=youtube;t19oVrq0sOM]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t19oVrq0sOM&feature=youtube_gdata[/video]




Lyrics in vid description
 
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Shizzy Sixx, shofu, Scoot, and Archer and anyone associated with WDFA can do better... a lot better.
Leave Pokemon Raps to the Professionals and keep to *other Anime Raps. Just saying.

It was good, but not your profession.
 
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Shizzy Sixx, shofu, Scoot, and Archer and anyone associated with WDFA can do better... a lot better.
Leave Pokemon Raps to the Professionals and keep to *other Anime Raps. Just saying.

It was good, but not your profession.
Thanks for your opinion, but don't underestimate me either. I'm not just a Naruto rapper

and shizzy? I have to somewhat disagree, i have heard his pokemon raps and the best he can do is compare sand to sandslash and beedrill to 'youll be drilled" so much so that i doubt he even did his homework on pokemon. i know my shit buddy and ill continue to improve and do what I do regardless ! So yes i do appreciate your feedback and dont get me wrong i know shizzy is a few levels above me but ill be there someday. 1
 

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Shizzy Sixx, shofu, Scoot, and Archer and anyone associated with WDFA can do better... a lot better.
Leave Pokemon Raps to the Professionals and keep to *other Anime Raps. Just saying.

It was good, but not your profession.
Shizzy and Shofu are dope. I like Archer when he's freestyling..

OT: This shit is nice man, I noticed a lot of fire type references (my second favorite type after dragon)
 
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Thanks for your opinion, but don't underestimate me either. I'm not just a Naruto rapper

and shizzy? I have to somewhat disagree, i have heard his pokemon raps and the best he can do is compare sand to sandslash and beedrill to 'youll be drilled" so much so that i doubt he even did his homework on pokemon. i know my shit buddy and ill continue to improve and do what I do regardless ! So yes i do appreciate your feedback and dont get me wrong i know shizzy is a few levels above me but ill be there someday. 1
Have you listened to any of his features with shofu? -sigh-
He got cho ass in this one:
[video=youtube;3HSXMaWik5c]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3HSXMaWik5c&feature=share&list=PLs51uL5uFrRG6HiFma3XoBbRZg6E6GSkn[/video]

Shizzy Sixx's part @2:46:
Spittin a frickin heater, felon to misdemeaners
Watch suicune sixx turn into a giratina
The sickest spitter in here with the illest of dimeanors
Aint no nigga meaner, boy im steady speedin off the meter
I murder with every letter, either die or go ghost gengar
Yo girl Im gon haunt her, then again she wants me to get her
*****es steady holla shizzy you so bomb,
then they gimme that skull like cubones mom
I'm a bit of a menace turnin bullies to frail
****in around i'll put out a charmanders tail
My bars what you hail you don't wanna be my enemy
***** I'm psychic I know you'll remember me
You talkin on the net and i'll bring you this leprocy
Cuz I got TIME to Travel like mother ****in celebi
Get it B You besta be gone
when I die, rap dies, destiny bond
What a castrophe, an awkward development
Suicune's wildin' and steadily wreckin shit
Aint a nigga alive with a flow that can stop me
I'm a mother ****in boss, giovanni

I'm hard to to the bone your marrows wack
Catch 2 to your knee i'll take the arrows back
The pharoes back, Im poppin you merked
I couldnt care less if you rot in the dirt
Suicune sixx, you'll pass with this sound
You resting place is lavender town
You'll never come back from it bow im too cold
Legendary shit nigga you know
I'm disrespectful as ****, now watch me piss on your tombstone

Yeah, that verse you can't disagree on.

Notice: In your rap, you started raping fast too early. I barely got to feel the flow of the Rap and you took off like it was the middle of the song, or the second verse. At 0:25 seconds into the song, you took off without letting us get to feel your flow. You should've did that part later in the song, maybe in the 2nd verse?
 

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Have you listened to any of his features with shofu? -sigh-
He got cho ass in this one:
[video=youtube;3HSXMaWik5c]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3HSXMaWik5c&feature=share&list=PLs51uL5uFrRG6HiFma3XoBbRZg6E6GSkn[/video]

Shizzy Sixx's part @2:46:
Spittin a frickin heater, felon to misdemeaners
Watch suicune sixx turn into a giratina
The sickest spitter in here with the illest of dimeanors
Aint no nigga meaner, boy im steady speedin off the meter
I murder with every letter, either die or go ghost gengar
Yo girl Im gon haunt her, then again she wants me to get her
*****es steady holla shizzy you so bomb,
then they gimme that skull like cubones mom
I'm a bit of a menace turnin bullies to frail
****in around i'll put out a charmanders tail
My bars what you hail you don't wanna be my enemy
***** I'm psychic I know you'll remember me
You talkin on the net and i'll bring you this leprocy
Cuz I got TIME to Travel like mother ****in celebi
Get it B You besta be gone
when I die, rap dies, destiny bond
What a castrophe, an awkward development
Suicune's wildin' and steadily wreckin shit
Aint a nigga alive with a flow that can stop me
I'm a mother ****in boss, giovanni

I'm hard to to the bone your marrows wack
Catch 2 to your knee i'll take the arrows back
The pharoes back, Im poppin you merked
I couldnt care less if you rot in the dirt
Suicune sixx, you'll pass with this sound
You resting place is lavender town
You'll never come back from it bow im too cold
Legendary shit nigga you know
I'm disrespectful as ****, now watch me piss on your tombstone

Yeah, that verse you can't disagree on.

Notice: In your rap, you started raping fast too early. I barely got to feel the flow of the Rap and you took off like it was the middle of the song, or the second verse. At 0:25 seconds into the song, you took off without letting us get to feel your flow. You should've did that part later in the song, maybe in the 2nd verse?
ive heard that one and i honestly dont like it man, im not hating or anything but the -time travel like celebi- and _im a motherfkin boss, giovanni- along with most of his other punches are too played out.. (btw im not trying to sound like a d*ck, we cool lol)

at the end of the day i know i can top even my own rhymes with time but i just hope you guys enjoyed it for what it is cause i was gone for a while :)
 

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Shizzy and Shofu are dope. I like Archer when he's freestyling..

OT: This shit is nice man, I noticed a lot of fire type references (my second favorite type after dragon)
Nuff said:

[video=youtube;oyvB4GkZSnA]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oyvB4GkZSnA&feature=share&list=PLs51uL5uFrRG6HiFma3XoBbRZg6E6GSkn[/video]
 

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Have you listened to any of his features with shofu? -sigh-
He got cho ass in this one:
[video=youtube;3HSXMaWik5c]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3HSXMaWik5c&feature=share&list=PLs51uL5uFrRG6HiFma3XoBbRZg6E6GSkn[/video]

Shizzy Sixx's part @2:46:
Spittin a frickin heater, felon to misdemeaners
Watch suicune sixx turn into a giratina
The sickest spitter in here with the illest of dimeanors
Aint no nigga meaner, boy im steady speedin off the meter
I murder with every letter, either die or go ghost gengar
Yo girl Im gon haunt her, then again she wants me to get her
*****es steady holla shizzy you so bomb,
then they gimme that skull like cubones mom
I'm a bit of a menace turnin bullies to frail
****in around i'll put out a charmanders tail
My bars what you hail you don't wanna be my enemy
***** I'm psychic I know you'll remember me
You talkin on the net and i'll bring you this leprocy
Cuz I got TIME to Travel like mother ****in celebi
Get it B You besta be gone
when I die, rap dies, destiny bond
What a castrophe, an awkward development
Suicune's wildin' and steadily wreckin shit
Aint a nigga alive with a flow that can stop me
I'm a mother ****in boss, giovanni

I'm hard to to the bone your marrows wack
Catch 2 to your knee i'll take the arrows back
The pharoes back, Im poppin you merked
I couldnt care less if you rot in the dirt
Suicune sixx, you'll pass with this sound
You resting place is lavender town
You'll never come back from it bow im too cold
Legendary shit nigga you know
I'm disrespectful as ****, now watch me piss on your tombstone

Yeah, that verse you can't disagree on.

Notice: In your rap, you started raping fast too early. I barely got to feel the flow of the Rap and you took off like it was the middle of the song, or the second verse. At 0:25 seconds into the song, you took off without letting us get to feel your flow. You should've did that part later in the song, maybe in the 2nd verse?
Man I had Waaaaay better Pokemon bars then that in the back to school royale, @ Namikazi, ON point, Though I prefer other animes to pokemon obviously. I still got to give you the props for the effort and thought. Where my shout out at though?
 

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Man I had Waaaaay better Pokemon bars then that in the back to school royale, @ Namikazi, ON point, Though I prefer other animes to pokemon obviously. I still got to give you the props for the effort and thought. Where my shout out at though?
Thanks bro, and i got you next time Ive just had too much on my mind.

OT- Im working on getting more professional as far as videos and sound quality ya'll so stay tuned and i promise to only get better with time.
 

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ive heard that one and i honestly dont like it man, im not hating or anything but the -time travel like celebi- and _im a motherfkin boss, giovanni- along with most of his other punches are too played out.. (btw im not trying to sound like a d*ck, we cool lol)

at the end of the day i know i can top even my own rhymes with time but i just hope you guys enjoyed it for what it is cause i was gone for a while :)
Yeah, you did good, but you threw me off when you started going in 0:25 seconds on the track like it was the 2nd verse. That train didn't even come yet and you were on it.
 

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Yeah, you did good, but you threw me off when you started going in 0:25 seconds on the track like it was the 2nd verse. That train didn't even come yet and you were on it.
That means I got a lot of work ahead of me. I also noticed my flow was a off quite a few times. Next time i promise not to disappoint and like i said before, thanks.
 
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