[Predictions] Naruto 647: Minutes to Midnight

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The Tree of God reaches tall, almost piercing the night sky! As the flower atop it slowly blooms, the rest of the world begins to descend into duress. How will the Shinobi Force be able to best the mighty member that ultimately means ruin for the entire world?!

Obito: Sit still ladies and gentleman (panel shows dead Shinobi drained of their chakra) ... the end is nigh!

Out of the undergrowth of trees covering the desolate area, a hand reaches out from mess. More and more limbs outstretch into the night sky as the Konoha shinobi pull themselves up warily from the instant attack!

Sakura: (Breathing heavy, the mark on her head is fading)

Ino: (Gasp) Katsuya! You saved us!

Shikamaru: (Sweating) No, I'm sure it was Sakura who summoned her to save us.

Kiba: Man, we really are useless!

Hinata: Don't say that! Naruto-kun is probably coming up with an idea right now, so the best thing we can do now is just not get in his way!

???: Guys! Help!

TenTen looms over the muddled body of Shino. His skin is shriveled and dry devoid of all life after being drained dry of his chakra!

Elsewhere:

Naruto: Shit! I'm completely out of chakra!

Tobirama: This is bad... when that blooms...

Hiruzen: We must try and destroy it! Maybe from the base... if we can topple it over...

Minato: I'm sorry third, but the possibility of us being able to uproot that thing is probably near impossible.

Hiruzen: So what do we do then?!

Minato: (Looking up at tree, looks at Naruto who's sweating profusely) Our only hope before was Naruto's combination of Sage Mode and Bijuu Mode.

Naruto: Yeah... but Kurama just told me he can't gather up enough chakra in time for me to enter that mode again! Those branches totally drained me dry!

Hiruzen: Damn! Perhaps Enma can manage to do some harm!

An eye slowly reveals itself in the middle of the staff. It's pupil focuses on Hiruzen and then a deep voice solemnly reveals the futility of such plan.

Enma: Hiruzen... that will not work against the Shinju. It is far too durable.

Tobirama: Monkey King... how do you know such a thing.

Enma: I've existed for quite a long time. In my younger days, the Elder Frog and I use to traverse the world, spying on humans during the age of countless warfare. In fact, I lived along with a clan of other primates that used the branches of the Shinju as our home. Eventually, it transformed into the Juubi, expelling us and separating us all across the world.

Hiruzen: You never told me that story!

Enma: When I met you, it wasn't important... and I never would've thought the Shinju would stand tall in front of me again.

Minato: Don't worry, I have an idea.

Tobirama: ?!

Hiruzen: ?!

Naruto: ?!

Minato: Naruto, I'm going to give you the other half of the Kyuubi's chakra. You need it more than I at the moment.

Naruto: D-dad... ?!

Minato: I'll perform a sealing technique your mother taught me in order to transfer my half. I'll need the rest of you to defend me though.

Tobirama: Of course!

Hiruzen: We got it!

Juugo: Sasuke, we should really get out of here.

Sasuke: (Standing tall) No... we stay here and fight. Besides, Orochimaru and the others should be getting closer to the goal...

Elsewhere:

Hashirama: Madara! I won't allow that tree to bloom!

Madara: (Sarcastically) Right, you can't even get past me! Listen, there's nothing you can do about this. You're already destined to lose just like at the Valley of the End!

Hashirama: That's right! How did you survive? I'm almost positive you were dead!

Madara: That was all an illusion, my dear friend... along with the help of a ... certain individual.

Hashirama: What?! Who?!

Madara: (Seemingly distracted) Hmm... it's getting closer to Midnight.

Hashirama: So! Don't change the subject!

Madara: The flower will bloom at midnight.

Hashirama: !!!

Madara: I guess it's time I activated my... trump card!!!

Elsewhere:

Orochimaru: Ahhh, we finally made it.

Suigetsu: What the hell... is this place?!

Karin: Wow, it looks completely the same.

Tsunade: Why are we here?!

Oonoki: ... Please, forgive me of my sins...

Ay: It's been a long time since I last seen this place.

Mei: So it's still standing... the village of the Uzumaki clan.

The Kages stand before a massive shrine. Two golden Buddha figures stand opposite another seemingly guarding the entrance to the monastery. Why is Orochimaru here?! What is Madara planning?! Please, continue reading Naruto to find out!
 
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ahmher

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great predication i like it
 

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Plot twist ftw
 

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Magnifico mi hombre just magnif we got some kishi's coming out tonight
 

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Great prediction. Not all fighting, but actual purpose.
 

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I'A couple of thoughts....


1. If Shino is dead as you make it sound... Tenten who hardly reacted to Neji's desth probably wouldn't be the one to freak out/call attention to it.

2. Hinata loves Naruto, but she's smart enough to know he isn't s genius. If she says something along those lines... It will be closer to , "Don't say that, like Shikamaru-San/Kun said we have to watch for the right opportunity.

3. Shino should not die :hint: LOL I'm mostly poking fun here as I like Shino, but I wouldn't be surprised if the tree gets him or Tenten.

4. Katsuyu isn't seemingly saving anyone... As the tree branches/roots were grappling people regardless of Katsuyu... So most likely Ino would comment they barely escaped.

5. Forgot to mention... Kiba and Hinata would be upset or calling attention to Shino if he got caught... They are teammates.

6. Madara was wounded (hence him taking Hashirama's DNA and implanting it... So it can't ALL be an illusion!

7. Katsuyu had already been on the battlefield so I can't see Shikamaru mentioning her summoning something that's already here.


Anyways, I still really liked the idea despite my knit picking!!!

We have the Kurama transfer that is LONG overdue finally starting. The idea Madara had some form of help at VoTE is interesting. Also going to the Uzumaki village is cool... Not to mention it sounds like Oonoiki was responsible. One thing I would say is most likely the village would have damage to it... Especially since it was mentioned to have been destroyed.



Thanks for the cool read ^.^
 

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I'A couple of thoughts....


1. If Shino is dead as you make it sound... Tenten who hardly reacted to Neji's desth probably wouldn't be the one to freak out/call attention to it.

2. Hinata loves Naruto, but she's smart enough to know he isn't s genius. If she says something along those lines... It will be closer to , "Don't say that, like Shikamaru-San/Kun said we have to watch for the right opportunity.

3. Shino should not die :hint: LOL I'm mostly poking fun here as I like Shino, but I wouldn't be surprised if the tree gets him or Tenten.

4. Katsuyu isn't seemingly saving anyone... As the tree branches/roots were grappling people regardless of Katsuyu... So most likely Ino would comment they barely escaped.

5. Forgot to mention... Kiba and Hinata would be upset or calling attention to Shino if he got caught... They are teammates.

6. Madara was wounded (hence him taking Hashirama's DNA and implanting it... So it can't ALL be an illusion!

7. Katsuyu had already been on the battlefield so I can't see Shikamaru mentioning her summoning something that's already here.


Anyways, I still really liked the idea despite my knit picking!!!

We have the Kurama transfer that is LONG overdue finally starting. The idea Madara had some form of help at VoTE is interesting. Also going to the Uzumaki village is cool... Not to mention it sounds like Oonoiki was responsible. One thing I would say is most likely the village would have damage to it... Especially since it was mentioned to have been destroyed.



Thanks for the cool read ^.^

At the end of the showing of the Shinobi Alliance, TenTen revealed that Shino was dead hence why I didn't show the reaction of Hinata and Kiba. Also, Katsuya has the ability to store people inside her In order to protect them, so that's that. Umm... Hinata's timid personality, while still existent, has nearly been excavated by Naruto in the war. And if you remember Hashirama's reminiscing of his past, after he fought Madara, it showed the moon and something happened so I think Genjutsu was involved at least a little bit.

Thanks for the criticism.
 

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Wow you just blew my mind with.a semiautomatic ,that.was great I want see the Haymaking village before being destroyed. =D
 

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mhh.... pretty good. :)
 

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honestly speaking that was awesome..
and by d way i m listining "given up" of minutes to midnight right now..what a coincidence=D
 

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[video=youtube;2IfM6HM2rRs]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2IfM6HM2rRs[/video]


This song!
 
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