LUMOS ULTIMATUM
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Page 1
Minato and Naruto charges bijuu dama to the maximum and aims at the ten-tails.
Obito(inside Juubi):Don't understimate me!
SFX:Turn
The Juubi's head spin and its mouth faces Minato and Naruto.
SFX:Charge!!!
Juubi starts creates a small bijuu dama amazingly fast and fires it at the same time as Minato and Naruto launch their attack..
Page 2
SFX:Bijuu damas firing
The two balls collide with each other after some seconds and energy scatters through the battlefield.
SFX:Shockwave
Leaf Shinobi shouting to surrounding shinobi: (What power...!) Brace yourselves!
SFX:BOOOOM!
Stone Shinobi: Let's get further away from here!
Shinobis dash from all directions away from the explosion
Shikamaru(impressed): Our speed has been significantly increased through this chakra cloak.
A giant explosion is followed by an earthquake and a mushroom cloud.
Page 3:
Naruto and Minato crash on the ground
Naruto: Father, you all right?
Minato: Yeah. Fortunately, we managed to synchronise our chakra at the last moment which resulted in that dense chakra from earlier.
Naruto staring at Juubi's indistinct shape amidst the smoke: I can't believe this!
SFX: Smoke being blown by the wind
Juubi: GIIIIIIIIIIIIIK
Tobirama: That creature is invincible. Even this combined attack couldn't damage it.
Page 4
Obito inside Juubi: (Let's make preparations for the infinite tsukuyomi)
SFX: Turn
The juubi's head turns again. Its eye targets the moon and its mouth at Minato and Naruto
The juubi's cavernous mouth lights up and fires a giant chakra beam.
SFX:BOOOOOOM
After some seconds, the smoke disappears but no one is to be seen.
Obito inside Juubi: Flying thunder god, huh?
Page 5
Tobirama, Sasuke, Minato,Naruto and Juugo are teleported kilometres away.
Tobirama: Nice save, fourth hokage.
Minato(smiling):It's the first time you are calling me by this title, Lord Second
Sasuke clenches his fist, still thinking.
Naruto: Let's worry about this later, Sasuke!
Sasuke smiling: Like I will let you surpass me. (What's happening?My eyes have been enhanced with this chakra.)
Scene changes to Obito:
Obito inside Juubi:(Let's start!!!)
The tomoes in juubi's eye start to swirl rapidly.
Obito inside Juubi:(It will have to gather chakra for a while)
Page 6
SFX:Sigh
Obito : (One hour preparation! At its prime, it would have taken 30 minutes.)
Obito looks at Naruto and Minato:(I will have to deal with these two, even if I need some help from the ten tails)
SFX: Focusing chakra
The Juubi continues on focusing its chakra
Scene returns to Obito
SFX:Tap
Obito casts hand seal
The Juubi is surrounded by a black chakra layer, much thicker and pitched than the one Obito used.
Inside the barrier, the juubi propels its tails underground. The tails re-emerge 500 metres away from the barrier and hurl into the air.
SFX: Halt
Page 7
The tails open like flowers, revealing giant buds.
SFX: Inflating and gathering chakra
The 10 giant buds expand in size
Tobirama: This doesn't look good. I have a bad feeling about this
Sasuke enters susanoo mode
Sasuke: I will destroy all of them. Yasaka Magatama!
The magatamas hit all the sacks but are absorbed into it.
Naruto: What the hell are those things?
Suddenly,they stop expanding.
Several Juubi clones start emerging from them in all sizes.
Sasuke: This has no end!
Page 8:
Naruto gives his chakra to Tobirama
Naruto: Let's fight together, old man.
Tobirama shouting: Stop calling me old man, I am only 32.
Sasuke: Let's do this, Naruto! Juugo! Assist us as well.
Tobirama: Kuchiyose No Jutsu!
An ancient-looking sword appears
Tobirama: I can't believe that Hiruzen had succeeded in keeping it this long!
The team(Naruto,Sasuke, Tobirama, Minato and Juugo) run towards the Juubi clones.
SFX:Slashing
Sasuke blitz through several clones.
Page 9:
SFX: Crashing
Minato and Naruto take down 3 giant Juubi clones.
Tobirama: Hirashin Giri!
10 small Juubi clones on his path is killed in an instant.
Juugo transforms into his curse mark stage and goes berserk on the battlefield.
Juugo(maniac laughing): My bloodlust has no end!!!
Sasuke to Juugo: Just make sure you don't get out of control again.
Page 10:
SFX:Emerge
The clones keep on emerging from the bud
Tobirama: We won't reach the main body like this. Fourth hokage and Naruto! Perform your most powerful senjutsu attack and destroy the barrier surrounding the main body.
Naruto: Right! I will put wind style and senjutsu to bijuu dama
Minato: I will perform the bijuu dama!
Minato and Naruto charges their destructive attack quickly
SFX: Screeching and rotating
Tobirama: Go!!!
Page 11:
Minato and Naruto teleport above Juubi .
Minato: Fuuton Senjutsu Bijuu Dama Rasen Chou-
SFX:Sighs
Tobirama :(Another weird jutsu name)
Naruto(smiling): Let's just name it Fuuton-SenBijuuRasenShuriken
Minato(beaming): Good idea!
Naruto and Minato fire their ultimate attack and teleport away to avoid getting caught in the impact
Page 12
SFX: Intense screeching and rotating explosion followed by consequent shockwaves
Stone Shinobi: No Way! Ninjas can't fight like this.
SFX: Blast
Sakura:(The shockwave can still be felt from so far..) Naruto.....
Scene changes to Madara and Hashirama
Madara looks at the moon and sees one Juubi tomoe forming.
Madara:(The genjutsu is about to take effect) Let's stop the fun here, Hashirama! Tengai Shinsei!
A meteor falls from the sky but Hashirama manages to hold it with difficulty
Madara: Keep at it until then! Time to set my trumph card into motion.
Madara jumps away and fall on solid ground.
Madara:You understimate a rinnegan user, Obito!....(pause).... First, the Juubi!
Madara concentrates and access Juubi's mind through rinnegan link.
Madara: You can't control its power, Obito!
Madara performs a hand seal
SFX: Cast
Rikudo is pictured in Juubi's mind.
SFX: Juubi is enraged
Obito(furious):That Madara.....
Madara:Now, come out Juubi.
Minato and Naruto charges bijuu dama to the maximum and aims at the ten-tails.
Obito(inside Juubi):Don't understimate me!
SFX:Turn
The Juubi's head spin and its mouth faces Minato and Naruto.
SFX:Charge!!!
Juubi starts creates a small bijuu dama amazingly fast and fires it at the same time as Minato and Naruto launch their attack..
Page 2
SFX:Bijuu damas firing
The two balls collide with each other after some seconds and energy scatters through the battlefield.
SFX:Shockwave
Leaf Shinobi shouting to surrounding shinobi: (What power...!) Brace yourselves!
SFX:BOOOOM!
Stone Shinobi: Let's get further away from here!
Shinobis dash from all directions away from the explosion
Shikamaru(impressed): Our speed has been significantly increased through this chakra cloak.
A giant explosion is followed by an earthquake and a mushroom cloud.
Page 3:
Naruto and Minato crash on the ground
Naruto: Father, you all right?
Minato: Yeah. Fortunately, we managed to synchronise our chakra at the last moment which resulted in that dense chakra from earlier.
Naruto staring at Juubi's indistinct shape amidst the smoke: I can't believe this!
SFX: Smoke being blown by the wind
Juubi: GIIIIIIIIIIIIIK
Tobirama: That creature is invincible. Even this combined attack couldn't damage it.
Page 4
Obito inside Juubi: (Let's make preparations for the infinite tsukuyomi)
SFX: Turn
The juubi's head turns again. Its eye targets the moon and its mouth at Minato and Naruto
The juubi's cavernous mouth lights up and fires a giant chakra beam.
SFX:BOOOOOOM
After some seconds, the smoke disappears but no one is to be seen.
Obito inside Juubi: Flying thunder god, huh?
Page 5
Tobirama, Sasuke, Minato,Naruto and Juugo are teleported kilometres away.
Tobirama: Nice save, fourth hokage.
Minato(smiling):It's the first time you are calling me by this title, Lord Second
Sasuke clenches his fist, still thinking.
Naruto: Let's worry about this later, Sasuke!
Sasuke smiling: Like I will let you surpass me. (What's happening?My eyes have been enhanced with this chakra.)
Scene changes to Obito:
Obito inside Juubi:(Let's start!!!)
The tomoes in juubi's eye start to swirl rapidly.
Obito inside Juubi:(It will have to gather chakra for a while)
Page 6
SFX:Sigh
Obito : (One hour preparation! At its prime, it would have taken 30 minutes.)
Obito looks at Naruto and Minato:(I will have to deal with these two, even if I need some help from the ten tails)
SFX: Focusing chakra
The Juubi continues on focusing its chakra
Scene returns to Obito
SFX:Tap
Obito casts hand seal
The Juubi is surrounded by a black chakra layer, much thicker and pitched than the one Obito used.
Inside the barrier, the juubi propels its tails underground. The tails re-emerge 500 metres away from the barrier and hurl into the air.
SFX: Halt
Page 7
The tails open like flowers, revealing giant buds.
SFX: Inflating and gathering chakra
The 10 giant buds expand in size
Tobirama: This doesn't look good. I have a bad feeling about this
Sasuke enters susanoo mode
Sasuke: I will destroy all of them. Yasaka Magatama!
The magatamas hit all the sacks but are absorbed into it.
Naruto: What the hell are those things?
Suddenly,they stop expanding.
Several Juubi clones start emerging from them in all sizes.
Sasuke: This has no end!
Page 8:
Naruto gives his chakra to Tobirama
Naruto: Let's fight together, old man.
Tobirama shouting: Stop calling me old man, I am only 32.
Sasuke: Let's do this, Naruto! Juugo! Assist us as well.
Tobirama: Kuchiyose No Jutsu!
An ancient-looking sword appears
Tobirama: I can't believe that Hiruzen had succeeded in keeping it this long!
The team(Naruto,Sasuke, Tobirama, Minato and Juugo) run towards the Juubi clones.
SFX:Slashing
Sasuke blitz through several clones.
Page 9:
SFX: Crashing
Minato and Naruto take down 3 giant Juubi clones.
Tobirama: Hirashin Giri!
10 small Juubi clones on his path is killed in an instant.
Juugo transforms into his curse mark stage and goes berserk on the battlefield.
Juugo(maniac laughing): My bloodlust has no end!!!
Sasuke to Juugo: Just make sure you don't get out of control again.
Page 10:
SFX:Emerge
The clones keep on emerging from the bud
Tobirama: We won't reach the main body like this. Fourth hokage and Naruto! Perform your most powerful senjutsu attack and destroy the barrier surrounding the main body.
Naruto: Right! I will put wind style and senjutsu to bijuu dama
Minato: I will perform the bijuu dama!
Minato and Naruto charges their destructive attack quickly
SFX: Screeching and rotating
Tobirama: Go!!!
Page 11:
Minato and Naruto teleport above Juubi .
Minato: Fuuton Senjutsu Bijuu Dama Rasen Chou-
SFX:Sighs
Tobirama :(Another weird jutsu name)
Naruto(smiling): Let's just name it Fuuton-SenBijuuRasenShuriken
Minato(beaming): Good idea!
Naruto and Minato fire their ultimate attack and teleport away to avoid getting caught in the impact
Page 12
SFX: Intense screeching and rotating explosion followed by consequent shockwaves
Stone Shinobi: No Way! Ninjas can't fight like this.
SFX: Blast
Sakura:(The shockwave can still be felt from so far..) Naruto.....
Scene changes to Madara and Hashirama
Madara looks at the moon and sees one Juubi tomoe forming.
Madara:(The genjutsu is about to take effect) Let's stop the fun here, Hashirama! Tengai Shinsei!
A meteor falls from the sky but Hashirama manages to hold it with difficulty
Madara: Keep at it until then! Time to set my trumph card into motion.
Madara jumps away and fall on solid ground.
Madara:You understimate a rinnegan user, Obito!....(pause).... First, the Juubi!
Madara concentrates and access Juubi's mind through rinnegan link.
Madara: You can't control its power, Obito!
Madara performs a hand seal
SFX: Cast
Rikudo is pictured in Juubi's mind.
SFX: Juubi is enraged
Obito(furious):That Madara.....
Madara:Now, come out Juubi.
Madara's trumph card is about to be revealed. Stay tuned for next chapter.
