If i had my own manga i wouldn't have thone these things:

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Create such a powerfull villiain as DSM Kabuto was... I mean really he had no weakness, he was the perfect warrior, and then kishi realized he made a too OP villiain so he killed him with the biggest aspull ever izanami

Now he created Juubito... This guy really should have already buttraped all the alliance, but he's loosing to them, Tobirama already teleported to his back 3 times and Juubito still isn't doing anything... He not killing all the alliance in a second is a very big aspull... And Juubito's death will suck (i think its related to Madara's trump card, wich will be another aspull because kishimoto realized there's no other way to kill obito)

KISHIMOTO STOP THE ASPULLS, DON'T MAKE SUCH STRONG VILLIANS IF THEY'RE GONNA DIE BY MORE ASPULLS
 

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I'm interested in what the manga would be like if i took over after the Invasion of Pain arc.
 

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Plotsengan > all. You should know that by now.

I bet next time plotsengan will solo Lord Jashin.
 

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DSM Kabuto shouldn't have 'died' that way. Itachi should have stayed dead
 

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You mad at Tobirama's ass pulling skill? :snick:

Kishi got my letter.
 

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Picked a great time to take over. A lot of improvements can be made after that

I agree.

1. Bee dies and loses the Hachibi
2. Naruto loses the Kyuubi but survives due to SM and Uzumaki heritage.
3. No Kabu-tensei army.
4. No Obito-Tobi

That's just a start.
 

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You mad at Tobirama's ass pulling skill? :snick:

Kishi got my letter.

Tobirama is boss... But really? With the power Juubito is supposed to have he should have buttraped Tobirama already, but instead he's getting owned
 

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I agree.

1. Bee dies and loses the Hachibi
2. Naruto loses the Kyuubi but survives due to SM and Uzumaki heritage.
3. No Kabu-tensei army.
4. No Obito-Tobi

That's just a start.

I like some of those. Would Kabuto retain DSM?
And, wouldja give justice to Danzo and root? I firmly believe that some form of civil war arc or coup could have followed either the kage summit arc or replaced it.
 

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I agree.

1. Bee dies and loses the Hachibi
2. Naruto loses the Kyuubi but survives due to SM and Uzumaki heritage.
3. No Kabu-tensei army.
4. No Obito-Tobi

That's just a start.

only 4 would be good.
 

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yall stupidasses actually think yall can do a better job at this than kishi
 

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I like some of those. Would Kabuto retain DSM?
And, wouldja give justice to Danzo and root? I firmly believe that some form of civil war arc or coup could have followed either the kage summit arc or replaced it.

I actually liked the kage summit arc. I'm mostly concerned with the war arc.
 

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I actually liked the kage summit arc. I'm mostly concerned with the war arc.

The arc wasn't bad. But, I felt it was a bad place to end Danzo and there could of been a better few transition arcs before the War Arc.

The War Arc,, I would honestly add in the minor villages here and have them being manipulated by Tobi; Or have some Uchiha in hiding leader and fight the major ones.

Let each Kage take on a minor village leader. ETC.
 

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The arc wasn't bad. But, I felt it was a bad place to end Danzo and there could of been a better few transition arcs before the War Arc.

The War Arc,, I would honestly add in the minor villages here and have them being manipulated by Tobi; Or have some Uchiha in hiding leader and fight the major ones.

Let each Kage take on a minor village leader. ETC.

I can tell you one thing for sure. The war certainly wouldn't be 2 days long... that's for sure.
 

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Tobirama would have been Tobi for me. :nindaime: = :hypertobi:
 

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get.....the **** .......over it....
 

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Are you sensing a pattern? These so called "asspulls" happen every arc basically. Do you get the clue?


They don't exist. Kishimoto knows what he is doing.
 

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Create such a powerfull villiain as DSM Kabuto was... I mean really he had no weakness, he was the perfect warrior, and then kishi realized he made a too OP villiain so he killed him with the biggest aspull ever izanami

Now he created Juubito... This guy really should have already buttraped all the alliance, but he's loosing to them, Tobirama already teleported to his back 3 times and Juubito still isn't doing anything... He not killing all the alliance in a second is a very big aspull... And Juubito's death will suck (i think its related to Madara's trump card, wich will be another aspull because kishimoto realized there's no other way to kill obito)

KISHIMOTO STOP THE ASPULLS, DON'T MAKE SUCH STRONG VILLIANS IF THEY'RE GONNA DIE BY MORE ASPULLS

Villians should always be stonger than the hero. and that is why you dont have a manga
 

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the reason why izanami was used because it tells how izanami and izanagi are exact opposites and that exact opposites
can succeed when working together
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ike what it said on the uciha tablet
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Kabuto is fodder I'd prefer mizuki
 
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