The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 27 [42]

[Michael92]

Oh God... Here I was thinking I posted here a few minutes ago and it has passed so many time :|

Three Kingdoms, uh? Will have to google some stuff before reading it XD

I see what you did there you evil maniac! :devil: Jk

It sure flies xD

Yep, it's more history than a concept actually... I did in fact reveal some information about it in my Social Group 1-2 years ago actually, providing links to Wikipedia sites and such... Don't remember which of the discussions that was though, but most likely one of the closed ones. Maybe I'll look it up later. Regardless, I'll make sure to make the FF&AN at the end of chapter 30 quite interesting then

Just an excellent salesman

 

[Danielgf04]

It sure flies xD

Yep, it's more history than a concept actually... I did in fact reveal some information about it in my Social Group 1-2 years ago actually, providing links to Wikipedia sites and such... Don't remember which of the discussions that was though, but most likely one of the closed ones. Maybe I'll look it up later. Regardless, I'll make sure to make the FF&AN at the end of chapter 30 quite interesting then

Just an excellent salesman

Be sure to show that to me :heh:

You better make it XD

Yeah yeah... You just like playing with my mind... :devil:

 

[Michael92]

Be sure to show that to me :heh:

You better make it XD

Yeah yeah... You just like playing with my mind... :devil:

I'll look it up then and give you a link or a quote to it xP

Haha, not playing, just reasoning In fact, I think I only showed the initial version of the first chapter to four of my NB friends (Nikkou Arashi, Wesobi, Escorpiius and Kuroi Honoo), but then I made an updated version later on. Still need to make up important names to the characters and such though, but other than that, the 1st chapter of it has been finished for a long time. And the only reason to why I haven't posted it yet, is because it would only crash with TLSoK, and I would have to abandon one of them xD

 

[Danielgf04]

I'll look it up then and give you a link or a quote to it xP

Haha, not playing, just reasoning In fact, I think I only showed the initial version of the first chapter to four of my NB friends (Nikkou Arashi, Wesobi, Escorpiius and Kuroi Honoo), but then I made an updated version later on. Still need to make up important names to the characters and such though, but other than that, the 1st chapter of it has been finished for a long time. And the only reason to why I haven't posted it yet, is because it would only crash with TLSoK, and I would have to abandon one of them xD

Thanks!

I see... No probs! Everything at it's time XD

 

[Michael92]

Thanks!

I see... No probs! Everything at it's time XD

Yeah well... For now, I need to finish this sequel xD Looking at my schedule, I'm not even sure if I'll be able to kick off Three Kingdoms on this side of the year, and then there's the military from Jan-Dec xD We shall see indeed what will happen. One thing is for sure though, Chapter 28-30 will be released next week ;D

 

[Danielgf04]

Yeah well... For now, I need to finish this sequel xD Looking at my schedule, I'm not even sure if I'll be able to kick off Three Kingdoms on this side of the year, and then there's the military from Jan-Dec xD We shall see indeed what will happen. One thing is for sure though, Chapter 28-30 will be released next week ;D

You're crazy! Too much stuff on your list bro! That will exhaust you!

 

[Michael92]

You're crazy! Too much stuff on your list bro! That will exhaust you!

Nah it won't xP Or at least I don't hope so, haha xD But yeah, just have to find the perfect mix between doing too much and not doing anything at all I suppose ;D 3 days left to "Final" release-week btw

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

First of all, I apologize for this extreme late feedback-I stated in your last chapter that I would read this in one go however, you exceeded the length expectancy I had in mind thus I was unable to plus I also had other Fanfictions to read lol And finally-I’ve done a wall of text which hasn’t happened in quite a while XD

Starting off, I liked how compassionate Sai was with the former Team 10 and loved Ino’s response! ^^ It appears as though the deaths and advancement to Raikage has changed the rambunctious Killer B-I was surprised but then again death can change people indeed. I can’t recall A having daughters-I think they’re original characters but I cannot be sure due to my bad memory of course -_- Wow, B is married and has a child as well-crazy! Well one good thing happened and that is Sasuke ranking up to Tsuchikage =D I’m shocked that Karin actually made an appearance lol You have done a great job attempting to incorporate as many canon characters as possible And it appears as though she is still obsessed with Sasuke! I am dying to know who the Rokudaime Mizukage is and you’re doing a hell of a job keeping it secret! XD It is interesting to know that Mei has a daughter and that she will be taking the next title when the time come-I wonder who the father is *fingers crossed its Ao* lol Again another shocking moment-Naruto awakes from his coma not too long after entering it! I suppose the fact that he was able to get up so quickly after his ordeals was somewhat peculiar but he was the Juubi jinchuuriki thus I suppose that is the logic. The villager who shouted out at Naruto in anger due to the noise and late hour was hilarious and the famous crow as well XD So the Black/White Zetsu’s true colors are revealed and they seem to be insane. I was nice to see the annoyed Sakura beating up on the prankish Naruto-he had that punch coming lol I liked that you chose an original character but a character neverless associated with a canon character. So Mei’s brother-that is cool and its nice to have her linage still serving at the very least ^^ My bad, I thought Killer B had changed to a more serious persona but he actually still seems more or less the same. Poor Sasuke has much to learn about being a Kage as he must earn their respect before any Kage can give his opinion the benefit of the doubt. Gaara’s idea definitely sounded interesting and was agreed upon but I wonder if the chosen Sekaiteki Kage-would spark something between the rest of the Kage like the time with Hashirama/Madara. I liked seeing the Sasuke from Part I shine when he in a little words disagreed with naruto being elected lol Personally, I thought Gaara would have been the perfect choice as he was a Kage longer than the others and his intelligence but they chose instead to go with the one who was the most powerful amongst each other. I think Naruto’s desire for answers from the Great Toad Sage is interesting. I liked the reasoning you created for the Great Toad Sage’s former persona I suppose I had forgotten about most of what the old Toad stated but I like what I heard and I wonder who these two are. I think one is Naruto’s son Jiraiya but the other having both Uchiha/Uzamaki blood-I vaguely remember something about that in the future. Oh Naruto, he is still naive-the next Sage was right in front of him and he just couldn’t see it XD I didn’t expect a seven year time-skip and I can’t wait to find out the changes. Whoa, so Sasuke renounced his title I assume to move back to Konoha-its really a shame as I liked him being a Kage T_T Hopefully there is something much better that awaits him in the near future. I liked how Asuka/Mito(both female) within this time-skip became a Jonin before her two male team mates which is definitely an accomplishment as females are unfortunately much more underrated. Wow, the fireworks are sparking already for Miyuki/Jiraiya lol Itachi has a rude persona and that is vastly different from his uncle’s XD Whoa-another time-skip! lol Another character dies and Miyuki even though she didn’t know him very well decided not to go-that is cold. I thought after the second time-skip perhaps more would occur throughout this chapter and I appear to be right lol Miyuki/Jiraiya’s first time-how would I put it...XXXRATED O.O I was shocked to say the least XD It was crazy how the situation between Itachi/Jiraiya escalated and how they both already achieved such power. So, it appears that Itachi will unfortunately continue to degenerate and perhaps Mu as well due to that Iwa Rookie training camp that appears to cause mental problems. I liked how you paced the time-skips and it all came together in the end so great job there.

Overall, I thought this huge-gigantic-enormous-humongous chapter was excellent and very well thought out-I don’t know how you do that but keep doing what you do! As always looking forward to what occurs next ^^

 

[Michael92]

First of all, I apologize for this extreme late feedback-I stated in your last chapter that I would read this in one go however, you exceeded the length expectancy I had in mind thus I was unable to plus I also had other Fanfictions to read lol And finally-I’ve done a wall of text which hasn’t happened in quite a while XD

Starting off, I liked how compassionate Sai was with the former Team 10 and loved Ino’s response! ^^ It appears as though the deaths and advancement to Raikage has changed the rambunctious Killer B-I was surprised but then again death can change people indeed. I can’t recall A having daughters-I think they’re original characters but I cannot be sure due to my bad memory of course -_- Wow, B is married and has a child as well-crazy! Well one good thing happened and that is Sasuke ranking up to Tsuchikage =D I’m shocked that Karin actually made an appearance lol You have done a great job attempting to incorporate as many canon characters as possible And it appears as though she is still obsessed with Sasuke! I am dying to know who the Rokudaime Mizukage is and you’re doing a hell of a job keeping it secret! XD It is interesting to know that Mei has a daughter and that she will be taking the next title when the time come-I wonder who the father is *fingers crossed its Ao* lol Again another shocking moment-Naruto awakes from his coma not too long after entering it! I suppose the fact that he was able to get up so quickly after his ordeals was somewhat peculiar but he was the Juubi jinchuuriki thus I suppose that is the logic. The villager who shouted out at Naruto in anger due to the noise and late hour was hilarious and the famous crow as well XD So the Black/White Zetsu’s true colors are revealed and they seem to be insane. I was nice to see the annoyed Sakura beating up on the prankish Naruto-he had that punch coming lol I liked that you chose an original character but a character neverless associated with a canon character. So Mei’s brother-that is cool and its nice to have her linage still serving at the very least ^^ My bad, I thought Killer B had changed to a more serious persona but he actually still seems more or less the same. Poor Sasuke has much to learn about being a Kage as he must earn their respect before any Kage can give his opinion the benefit of the doubt. Gaara’s idea definitely sounded interesting and was agreed upon but I wonder if the chosen Sekaiteki Kage-would spark something between the rest of the Kage like the time with Hashirama/Madara. I liked seeing the Sasuke from Part I shine when he in a little words disagreed with naruto being elected lol Personally, I thought Gaara would have been the perfect choice as he was a Kage longer than the others and his intelligence but they chose instead to go with the one who was the most powerful amongst each other. I think Naruto’s desire for answers from the Great Toad Sage is interesting. I liked the reasoning you created for the Great Toad Sage’s former persona I suppose I had forgotten about most of what the old Toad stated but I like what I heard and I wonder who these two are. I think one is Naruto’s son Jiraiya but the other having both Uchiha/Uzamaki blood-I vaguely remember something about that in the future. Oh Naruto, he is still naive-the next Sage was right in front of him and he just couldn’t see it XD I didn’t expect a seven year time-skip and I can’t wait to find out the changes. Whoa, so Sasuke renounced his title I assume to move back to Konoha-its really a shame as I liked him being a Kage T_T Hopefully there is something much better that awaits him in the near future. I liked how Asuka/Mito(both female) within this time-skip became a Jonin before her two male team mates which is definitely an accomplishment as females are unfortunately much more underrated. Wow, the fireworks are sparking already for Miyuki/Jiraiya lol Itachi has a rude persona and that is vastly different from his uncle’s XD Whoa-another time-skip! lol Another character dies and Miyuki even though she didn’t know him very well decided not to go-that is cold. I thought after the second time-skip perhaps more would occur throughout this chapter and I appear to be right lol Miyuki/Jiraiya’s first time-how would I put it...XXXRATED O.O I was shocked to say the least XD It was crazy how the situation between Itachi/Jiraiya escalated and how they both already achieved such power. So, it appears that Itachi will unfortunately continue to degenerate and perhaps Mu as well due to that Iwa Rookie training camp that appears to cause mental problems. I liked how you paced the time-skips and it all came together in the end so great job there.

Overall, I thought this huge-gigantic-enormous-humongous chapter was excellent and very well thought out-I don’t know how you do that but keep doing what you do! As always looking forward to what occurs next ^^

O__o That's one big ass reply =D Much like the one of Danivass ^_^ ;D

No problem bro, seeing as I was late at your chapters as well, I guess we can call it a even xP Besides, mine's so long that it would definitely take some time reading through it to begin with.

Your review means everything bro, had a great time reading it =) As for future chapters, the plot is coming to "an end" very soon, and the founding blocks for the final sequel is just about to be revealed ;D
I don't have much time, so I'll keep this reply at a minimum seeing as you didn't have any particular questions that won't be answered next chapter Thanks again my friend, I've taken your review close to my heart, haha ^_^

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

O__o That's one big ass reply =D Much like the one of Danivass ^_^ ;D

No problem bro, seeing as I was late at your chapters as well, I guess we can call it a even xP Besides, mine's so long that it would definitely take some time reading through it to begin with.

Your review means everything bro, had a great time reading it =) As for future chapters, the plot is coming to "an end" very soon, and the founding blocks for the final sequel is just about to be revealed ;D
I don't have much time, so I'll keep this reply at a minimum seeing as you didn't have any particular questions that won't be answered next chapter Thanks again my friend, I've taken your review close to my heart, haha ^_^

I know-I returned with those wall of texts that used to rival you/Escorp lol I’m glad you enjoyed my feedback and yeah, I actually didn’t have any questions and or confusion for a change XD Well even though this FF is coming to a close, there will be a finale sequel to follow it thus I can’t be anymore happy ^^ Definitely looking forward to that final sequel to see how this huge story finally ends =D

 

[Michael92]

I know-I returned with those wall of texts that used to rival you/Escorp lol I’m glad you enjoyed my feedback and yeah, I actually didn’t have any questions and or confusion for a change XD Well even though this FF is coming to a close, there will be a finale sequel to follow it thus I can’t be anymore happy ^^ Definitely looking forward to that final sequel to see how this huge story finally ends =D

Hehe, and I'm glad to see that you did xP
Yeah, I was actually thinking through a little on how my four last chapters have progressed, and I just realized that with each chapter, I'll be writing some of Kishi's Canon characters for the last time. Characters that I've been used to write about for the past three years. This chapter saw the last of characters like Shikamaru, Temari, Sakura, Rock Lee, Ino, Sai, Choji, as well as some others. And starting with the next one, the list will be shortened down even further =p

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

First of all, I apologize for overlooking the Fun Facts & Author's Note segment of your chapter. Secondly I love Star Wars and I’m glad you do too and its nice to hear a piece from that epic series!!! ^^

Fun Facts & Author's Note:

1: Its very fascinating to know that you’ve had parts of future chapters lying in wait for such long periods of time!

2: Your pace of time in completing chapters is wonderful compare to me XD

3: You really put a lot of effort into this chapter and kudos to you for pulling it off ^^

4: Thank you for the insight and not can you write but you seem pretty skilled with numbers

 

[Michael92]

First of all, I apologize for overlooking the Fun Facts & Author's Note segment of your chapter. Secondly I love Star Wars and I’m glad you do too and its nice to hear a piece from that epic series!!! ^^

Fun Facts & Author's Note:

1: Its very fascinating to know that you’ve had parts of future chapters lying in wait for such long periods of time!

2: Your pace of time in completing chapters is wonderful compare to me XD

3: You really put a lot of effort into this chapter and kudos to you for pulling it off ^^

4: Thank you for the insight and not can you write but you seem pretty skilled with numbers

I'll be highlighting this one for my reply, because it is something that I completely forgot to mention earlier xP
I don't know for how long, but I suspect that I've been awaiting this chapter, ever since Sasuke was revealed as the Active 5th Tsuchikage at the end of chapter 12 of my original work. I remember back then that you asked me what I had planned for Sasuke and that you were glad that he finally had a new part to play in my series. In the end though you wished for him to be able to come back to Konoha, but that you thought the way things turned out was good enough as well.

And I... I remember that I told you that I had things planned for Sasuke, and that I so badly wanted to spoil that to you, but I couldn't xP The thing was that, even back then, I had planned out that he was returning to Konoha with his family in this chapter (27, although I had no idea that it would be chapter 27 as I didn't think this sequel would turn out as lengthy as it did xD), and that was the moment that I was very much looking forward to show you, as I knew that would probably make you happy =p I don't know how you felt at that moment, but Sasuke returning was like a... Turning point in many regards, and perhaps one of my favorite moments to write/show in this series, even though it was two years in the making at least xP ;D

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

I'll be highlighting this one for my reply, because it is something that I completely forgot to mention earlier xP
I don't know for how long, but I suspect that I've been awaiting this chapter, ever since Sasuke was revealed as the Active 5th Tsuchikage at the end of chapter 12 of my original work. I remember back then that you asked me what I had planned for Sasuke and that you were glad that he finally had a new part to play in my series. In the end though you wished for him to be able to come back to Konoha, but that you thought the way things turned out was good enough as well.

And I... I remember that I told you that I had things planned for Sasuke, and that I so badly wanted to spoil that to you, but I couldn't xP The thing was that, even back then, I had planned out that he was returning to Konoha with his family in this chapter (27, although I had no idea that it would be chapter 27 as I didn't think this sequel would turn out as lengthy as it did xD), and that was the moment that I was very much looking forward to show you, as I knew that would probably make you happy =p I don't know how you felt at that moment, but Sasuke returning was like a... Turning point in many regards, and perhaps one of my favorite moments to write/show in this series, even though it was two years in the making at least xP ;D

Well, let me first start off by saying I didn’t expect a reply like that lol

You definitely took me through a trip from the past XD I appreciated and liked it =D I suppose so many things occurred in that chapter that Sasuke’s return wasn’t able to completely be analyzed but with everything said and done-I am happy that you decided to have him return as it was originally his home and why not plus like you stated, I preferably always wished for Sasuke to return and you made that happen so thank you ^^

 

[Michael92]

Well, let me first start off by saying I didn’t expect a reply like that lol

You definitely took me through a trip from the past XD I appreciated and liked it =D I suppose so many things occurred in that chapter that Sasuke’s return wasn’t able to completely be analyzed but with everything said and done-I am happy that you decided to have him return as it was originally his home and why not plus like you stated, I preferably always wished for Sasuke to return and you made that happen so thank you ^^

Haha, I would imagine xP

Yeah, so many different things happened in this chapter that it in fact was hard to grasp it all I suppose, so there was bound to be some scenes that got less attention than what they would have had if the chapter was smaller (the *** scene for instance xD). I just hope that even though Sasuke doesn't have a important role at the very end of things, he still have two chapters more to shine, including the next which you've already read =p I did write in an appearance on the final chapter as well just to round things off, but it was quite short I suppose. You will understand what I mean when you get there ;D

 

[darkstar94]

105 pages of MS WORD, is this a joke or what...!!hats off to you dude,i haven't read the chapter yet but writing such a big chapter is really a big deal

 

[Michael92]

105 pages of MS WORD, is this a joke or what...!!hats off to you dude,i haven't read the chapter yet but writing such a big chapter is really a big deal

Hahaha, thanks The real question is if you manage to read it all in one go ;D xP

 

[darkstar94]

in author's note you said karin made the debut in TLSOK in this chapter, but i couldnt find a reference to karin in the chaper....!!!

 

[Michael92]

in author's note you said karin made the debut in TLSOK in this chapter, but i couldnt find a reference to karin in the chaper....!!!

She did at the end of Sasuke's scene in Iwagakure, just as he was about to head to his Tsuchikage ceremony You missed that? O__o xP Just press Ctrl + f And the type in "Karin" to see for yourself, haha ;D