Road to ninja Hinata!

[Bantos]

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I wanted to draw Hinata. And tried to make her look feminine, since according to 80 per cent of the base my females look too masculine.
I MAY color this later, if this lineart even is good enough for that.

 

[Professor Finesser]

She's not the Hinata that Naruto deserves... But the Hinata that Naruto needs right now.

 

[I Hope Everyone Dies]

She looks to kind in this drawing to be RTN Hinata. Lol
Skillz though.

 

[Blondephile]

Looks nicer!!!!

btw how long did it take you to draw it?

 

[Sabaki]

Her face is drawn terribly; far too masculine.​

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[Akemi]

her face's different from Hinata ...............

 

[KGB Kakuzu]

Wow this is great!

the only CC I'd give would be to soften her face (feels a little masculine for some reason), and only thing after that is make her thighs a little smaller.


Still... I'm not in a position to critique...GREAT WORK!

 

[Sakura Bunny]

I think it looks great! :3

 

[Henchman24]

Great job. You should color it. You've got a nice style.

 

[Bantos]

her face's different from Hinata ...............

That's because this is drawn with MY style. Not Kishimoto's.

Her face is drawn terribly; far too masculine.​

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Give me some tips how to make faces more feminine. D:

Looks nicer!!!!

btw how long did it take you to draw it?

I'm glad. About an hour since I wanted to draw the stupid trees. D:

 

[Avonomemi]

You should go ahead and color it

 

[Sakuradasoloqueen]

She's not the Hinata that Naruto deserves... But the Hinata that Naruto needs right now.

Uhmm Batman?

 

[KGB Kakuzu]

Give me some tips how to make faces more feminine. D:

I'm no expert, but her face feels Wide. The on the right side of her face (Hinata's right) where the cheek curves to form the chin... it's too curved. It is more masculine as it makes more defined Cheek Bones.

Maybe make that curve a little softer (closer to how the other side was made).

I think because of that, it also makes her lips appear more like they are just big lips as opposed to the lip stick styled ones.

I'd say that's it for me. The byakugan being active is never the most attractive thing, but then again that's angry RTN Hinata.

 

[Supermacaquecool]

That's because this is drawn with MY style. Not Kishimoto's.



Give me some tips how to make faces more feminine. D:



I'm glad. About an hour since I wanted to draw the stupid trees. D:

I'll try: it is probably because the nose looks kind of rough. That and you soften the chin lines...perhaps. I tried Lol
Anyway, her right arm looks awkward. Are you sure about the forearm's length?
... Oh..Nice work btw xd It's good you used your own style!

 

[Bantos]

Thanks for the tips!

 

[tyltyl]

maybe make the face more curvy. Women's heads are more round. I say curve her jaw line going up more. I think it's the shape of the face that's making it seem "manly"

 

[RinSwarovski]

This looks awesome

 

[Itachi Edo]

She's not the Hinata that Naruto deserves... But the Hinata that Naruto needs right now.

She better fits the role of main female love interest in their culture though. I stayed in Japan for a while and it isn't unusual to read manga or watch stuff where the woman acts like a Hinata in RTN where we as westerners would view it as abusive. Over there it's more for a comedy reason.

Since I stayed over there for a while I actually prefer this Hinata to the pushover that she usually is in the manga.

 

[Bantos]

This looks awesome

Thanks a lot!

 

[Aominecchi]

The body looks awesome
I think the face could use some adjustments