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This is a sequel to my previous chapter,if you would like to see it,go to the link below:
*Naruto starts running towards Yin,with a fist*
*As Naruto tries to hit Yin,Yin dodges the attack and hits Naruto with his leg*
*Naruto almost blocks it,as Yin hits him with his right leg in the head and makes him fall on the ground*
Naruto: I'm kind of cornered here!Yang,mind if you can help me somehow?
Yang: *in Naruto's psyche* How am I supposed to help you?I cannot escape your-wait!
Naruto: What?
*Yin grabs Naruto by his hand and throws him into the air*
*Suddenly,Yang's spirit emerges from Naruto's body,as Naruto flies in the air*
*Yang drops to the ground and performs a hand seal*
Yang: Rinne Rebirth Jutsu! *Yang slowly starts reviving himself*
Yin: How can you revive yourself?It's impossible!
Yang: Brother,I have trained under the teachings of our father,while you chose to take a path of your own.
*Naruto falls next to Yang*
Naruto: Now,there's two of us to deal with!
Yang: What is your name again?
Naruto: It's Naruto!
Yang: Naruto...that is a good name.
*Naruto looks at Yang and smiles,but Yang looks at him with a serious face*
Yang: Naruto,step aside.It is my duty to rid my brother of this hatred of his.
Naruto: His hatred?
*flashback to when Naruto first met Yang in his psyche*
Yang: No.I must take care of my brother,for he is lost in darkness.
*flashback ends*
Naruto: Ok,Yang.I hope you win! *Naruto flies away to the battle with Madara*
Yin: You expect me to forgive you for making father choose you?Just forget it!
Yang: I never made father choose me!Please understand this,brother!
Yin: *performs hand seals* Daron no Hekibiki Choujyuu Maranosamari!
*over 50 zetsu-like white creatures with a big Sharingan for a face appear from the ground and charge at Yang*
*Yin also rushes towards Yang,who starts to fight the creatures*
Yin: Watch out,brother!Every time you hit them,they starts getting bigger and bigger!
Yang: *hits one of them* Huh?
*the creature extends his size to 15 meters*
*Yang looks at it in shock*
Yang: B-brother...where?How?
Yin: While father was guiding you,I was training for this day!I knew,that something like this might happen!
*meanwhile Naruto enters the battle between Madara and the Alliance*
*everybody,including Madara sees Naruto in his Rikudou Sennin cloak and his staff*
Minato: Naruto?You are..
Naruto: Ok,everybody!I'm back and ready! *performs a hand seal*
*everybody suddenly gains Kyuubi chakra cloaks*
Ay: What is this?
Orochimaru: *thinking* Hmph,it looks like Naruto has perfected his jutsu and control over Kyuubi.
Shikamaru: I see,he perfected his chakra manipulation and managed to give chakra without even touching the person.He's giving it through the atmosphere in the form of a blue gas.
Sakura: Naruto...when did you..
Madara: A power-up,eh?I won't be enough,though!
*Madara charges a bijuudama at Naruto*
*Naruto turns towards the bijuudama unprepared to escape*
*suddenly a FTG kunai hits the ground in front of Naruto*
*Minato teleports in front of Naruto as Naruto looks in shock*
Naruto: Dad!
*The bijuudama forms a blade and pierces Minato in the stomach*
Minato: Naruto...don't worry.I came here to make sure you're safe after all this time.
*a clock appears,showing its 11:58*
Minato: *looks at Naruto who's tearing up* Tomorrow is your birthday,right?The day you were born.
*everybody looks in shock*
Minato: I'm sorry we couldn't be with you all this time.Your mother was so sad,that she couldn't spend more time with you.
*the clock appears again,showing it's 11:59*
Minato: Well,happy birthday,Naruto. *Madara drags the blade up towards his head and completely cuts Minato in half,as he falls to pieces*
*the clock appears for the last time,showing it's 12:00 AM*
*Naruto stops tearing and looks at Madara*
Madara: Oh,are you sad?
*Naruto hits Madara in the face with a rasengan*
Madara: But how!?!Ninjutsu doesn't work against me!
*Madara flies away,crashing at the ground*
Naruto: I am the Sage's next successor and I'm gonna be the next Hokage!
Tsunade: Naruto,you have grown so much. *sheds a tear* Dan,Nawaki,this boy surpassed all of us.
Ay: Charge while he's unconsious!
Hinata: Naruto kun!You never gave up on your ninja way!
*everybody rushes towards Madara with Naruto in the front*
*Madara stands up,as Naruto pierces him in the chest with a bijuudama blade*
*meanwhile back at the two brothers*
*Yang lies in blood on the ground,as Yin looks at him,while the creatures,who are already 30 meters tall look at him too*
Yang: *coughs blood* Why?B-brother...
Yin: You were not supposed to be the successor after all.You are a failure!
To be Continued...
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*Naruto starts running towards Yin,with a fist*
*As Naruto tries to hit Yin,Yin dodges the attack and hits Naruto with his leg*
*Naruto almost blocks it,as Yin hits him with his right leg in the head and makes him fall on the ground*
Naruto: I'm kind of cornered here!Yang,mind if you can help me somehow?
Yang: *in Naruto's psyche* How am I supposed to help you?I cannot escape your-wait!
Naruto: What?
*Yin grabs Naruto by his hand and throws him into the air*
*Suddenly,Yang's spirit emerges from Naruto's body,as Naruto flies in the air*
*Yang drops to the ground and performs a hand seal*
Yang: Rinne Rebirth Jutsu! *Yang slowly starts reviving himself*
Yin: How can you revive yourself?It's impossible!
Yang: Brother,I have trained under the teachings of our father,while you chose to take a path of your own.
*Naruto falls next to Yang*
Naruto: Now,there's two of us to deal with!
Yang: What is your name again?
Naruto: It's Naruto!
Yang: Naruto...that is a good name.
*Naruto looks at Yang and smiles,but Yang looks at him with a serious face*
Yang: Naruto,step aside.It is my duty to rid my brother of this hatred of his.
Naruto: His hatred?
*flashback to when Naruto first met Yang in his psyche*
Yang: No.I must take care of my brother,for he is lost in darkness.
*flashback ends*
Naruto: Ok,Yang.I hope you win! *Naruto flies away to the battle with Madara*
Yin: You expect me to forgive you for making father choose you?Just forget it!
Yang: I never made father choose me!Please understand this,brother!
Yin: *performs hand seals* Daron no Hekibiki Choujyuu Maranosamari!
*over 50 zetsu-like white creatures with a big Sharingan for a face appear from the ground and charge at Yang*
*Yin also rushes towards Yang,who starts to fight the creatures*
Yin: Watch out,brother!Every time you hit them,they starts getting bigger and bigger!
Yang: *hits one of them* Huh?
*the creature extends his size to 15 meters*
*Yang looks at it in shock*
Yang: B-brother...where?How?
Yin: While father was guiding you,I was training for this day!I knew,that something like this might happen!
*meanwhile Naruto enters the battle between Madara and the Alliance*
*everybody,including Madara sees Naruto in his Rikudou Sennin cloak and his staff*
Minato: Naruto?You are..
Naruto: Ok,everybody!I'm back and ready! *performs a hand seal*
*everybody suddenly gains Kyuubi chakra cloaks*
Ay: What is this?
Orochimaru: *thinking* Hmph,it looks like Naruto has perfected his jutsu and control over Kyuubi.
Shikamaru: I see,he perfected his chakra manipulation and managed to give chakra without even touching the person.He's giving it through the atmosphere in the form of a blue gas.
Sakura: Naruto...when did you..
Madara: A power-up,eh?I won't be enough,though!
*Madara charges a bijuudama at Naruto*
*Naruto turns towards the bijuudama unprepared to escape*
*suddenly a FTG kunai hits the ground in front of Naruto*
*Minato teleports in front of Naruto as Naruto looks in shock*
Naruto: Dad!
*The bijuudama forms a blade and pierces Minato in the stomach*
Minato: Naruto...don't worry.I came here to make sure you're safe after all this time.
*a clock appears,showing its 11:58*
Minato: *looks at Naruto who's tearing up* Tomorrow is your birthday,right?The day you were born.
*everybody looks in shock*
Minato: I'm sorry we couldn't be with you all this time.Your mother was so sad,that she couldn't spend more time with you.
*the clock appears again,showing it's 11:59*
Minato: Well,happy birthday,Naruto. *Madara drags the blade up towards his head and completely cuts Minato in half,as he falls to pieces*
*the clock appears for the last time,showing it's 12:00 AM*
*Naruto stops tearing and looks at Madara*
Madara: Oh,are you sad?
*Naruto hits Madara in the face with a rasengan*
Madara: But how!?!Ninjutsu doesn't work against me!
*Madara flies away,crashing at the ground*
Naruto: I am the Sage's next successor and I'm gonna be the next Hokage!
Tsunade: Naruto,you have grown so much. *sheds a tear* Dan,Nawaki,this boy surpassed all of us.
Ay: Charge while he's unconsious!
Hinata: Naruto kun!You never gave up on your ninja way!
*everybody rushes towards Madara with Naruto in the front*
*Madara stands up,as Naruto pierces him in the chest with a bijuudama blade*
*meanwhile back at the two brothers*
*Yang lies in blood on the ground,as Yin looks at him,while the creatures,who are already 30 meters tall look at him too*
Yang: *coughs blood* Why?B-brother...
Yin: You were not supposed to be the successor after all.You are a failure!
To be Continued...
i just read all of your chapters 