[Other] Everything is gone

[Fair Warning]

Life, where does it go
Love, it wont show
People don't understand
The world wont hold hands
All of this is hard to take in
Be with me till the days end

Life, its coming around
Love, it's become profound
Everyone is staying together
The Earth is getting better
Nothing comes this easy
Stay with me we're free

Death, it shows up cold
Hate, it tears up the soul
No one alive can realize
Our home, uncivilized
All of this is gone
Stay with me at ends dawn.
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Wow, that sucked, but i dont care, at all

 

[naruttebayo]

fair attempt, keep it up

 

[Mangekyō1]

Writing feels awesome man! Even if you don't share it! I liked it though! Nice work!

 

[Fair Warning]

fair attempt, keep it up

that was it, i have nothing else to think up. I am short minded

 

[Narutohokage7]

Not bad. Better than I could come up with most likely lol.

 

[Awkward Linguist]

You're right, it sucks.
Good job. O_<

 

[Fair Warning]

Not bad. Better than I could come up with most likely lol.

You must really suck

You're right, it sucks.

I know, it doesnt even have a style

 

[Tingun]

Dat AABB.

UaU

 

[FemmeFatale]

Your right it did suck!....

It sucked all of the dullness out of my mind, and filled it with wonder and thoughts.
I loved it <3

 

[Narutohokage7]

You must really suck


I know, it doesnt even have a style

I do.

Will cost ya a bit though.

 

[Fair Warning]

Dat AABB.

UaU

the hell does that mean, I never took poetry