Here is what i thought
Forgiveness:
Starts with sai in the kamp
Sai: Excuse me sakura i wanted to talk to you
Sakura: sai cant it be talked later i m busy on healing master.
Sai :no sakura !this has to be told now
Sakura : then hurry up and say it
sai :Naruto has left the village (sakura and shizune are shocked)
Sakura: wat are u talking about he was prohibbited to leave the village and ...
Sai:its alrite kakashi and yamato sensi are with him (sakura got more anxious) they went to talk to raikage to ask forgiveness for wat sasuke did.
and i dont think it will happen.Bcz i know a lot about Raikage.He is pretty darn strict about his disicions.
Switch scene to Naruto:
Naruto :now i think u will listen wat i need to say!!!!!!!
Mifune:stares at wat naruto has caused and trembles with anger.
u lousy brat i will kill u for wat have u done and after that he attacks naruto .
(all other kages are also shocked at wat naruto had done especially Danzo and Raikage)
mifune just draw his sword and in the blink of eye he stabbed naruto in stomach every one is shocked and surprised .Gaara get worried.
Naruto: i just wanted to talk
Mifune : i will listen to u in our next life kidd.....just then naruto vanished
mifune is shocked!wat was that a clone (Gaara smiled)and then he appeared in front of him with sage Kyubi mix eyes and air around him gets burning.
Swtich scene to sasuke:
Karin : wat is he,his chakra is horrifying and how could he do that is this the power of some deamon.
Saske : (thinking) so madara was wright he has got strong but still he is ammature poor naruto.
We will wait karin and see i am sure he will make our work easier
Jugo : how can u say that sasuke ?
sasuke: beleive me i know him that is why we need to stay calm
Swith scene to kakashi and yamato ;
Yamato :kakashi senpai i have a bad feeling about this
Kakashi : i kno bcz after our refusal the Danzo may kno wat we have done and if he sees naruto there he can take some serious actions.
Yamato: but then wat should we do /
Kakashi : thinking of Gaara and Minato and said dont worry i beleive in him and after all he got some allies there tooo ( yamato is confused)
end..........
that is wat i am going to write so far .ihave few plans too but it will get longer and longer i want to know first how do u guys think of this
this one is my own


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