The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 28 [43]

[Lovelyanime]

great chapter i really like it =D

 

[~Uzumaki~]

Nice one man. Good to see u taking a gander at description ^^ for me who just stated reading, you don't have to worry about shattering any mirrors lol. So all the kages have retired and a new generation is taking over...that's pretty cool...though Mu taking the post right offntye bat after his 7 year training might have been a bit of a stretch lol. The Kage journey is cool...I thought Bee might join up wit them too. I wonder wat he's up to anyways it seems Sasuke's in for a family reunion. Keep me posted!

 

[Dragonking43]

awesome chapter, love the dragonball like ending. thanks for the link to this chap, I always try to stay up to date one your work, just rarely post

 

[Byron123]

Good job but seriously with so many characters it's difficult to keep up with who is who

 

[Jinrou]

Another awesome story yet again :bouncy:
Line that made me rofl : "Gaara: Indeed... And yeah, Kushina says hey btw." XD The way i imagined gaara saying this part made me laugh XD
Keep up the good work bro expecting the next :bouncy:

 

[Michael92]

It didn't have much action but was great nonetheless. It filled me in on who had what child. I liked meeting the child of Ten Ten and Kiba. Also I can't wait to see what you have in store for little Minato. he seems like he's going to be the new savior!

Thanks ^_^ This one kind of felt a bit weak compared to the rest, but it was nonetheless set up as a build-up chapter, so in the end, I think it was needed. One of the reason to why I'm doing a triple release this week as I didn't really see the chapters standing much on their own for a longer period of time. Next one to be up tomorrow
You're the first one to comment about that actually =p One of the many things I've just thrown into the mix as I've been writing the chapters =p Hehe, we shall see

great chapter i really like it =D

Thanks, glad you liked it =D

Nice one man. Good to see u taking a gander at description ^^ for me who just stated reading, you don't have to worry about shattering any mirrors lol. So all the kages have retired and a new generation is taking over...that's pretty cool...though Mu taking the post right off the bat after his 7 year training might have been a bit of a stretch lol. The Kage journey is cool...I thought Bee might join up wit them too. I wonder what he's up to anyways it seems Sasuke's in for a family reunion. Keep me posted!

Yeah, I figured I would test out the description more than usual with the remaining three chapters, as I'm going to do the FF about the SoSP in novel style, so I better start preparing for it and taking baby steps xP

Thinking about that fact, that's a bit sad really xP You started reading when this FF series is coming to an end xD You totally missed out on the action of 3-26 xP 27 and onward really is the beginning of the end, and thus, it will have a lot of heavy dialogue. So far, Naruto has been battling the Sage of Six Paths, Kabuto, Tobi, the Jubi, and plenty of other battles with Sasuke vs Suigetsu, Kakashi and his lost brother against Sakumo, Naruto vs the previous Hokages, Kushina, Jiraiya, Madara and Orochimaru... And well, Killerbee and Gaara have had their fight as well... Starting on the end of my FF like this, would definitely put a big break on the overall experience if you ask me, haha xP
Yeah, the whole thing about Mu moving back to Iwa and he becoming Kage was really off the bat, and I had to just squeeze it in wherever I could as I didn't/don't have much time otherwise to describe it =p And therefore, it was meant as a shocker =p

You will just have to wait and see I suppose, and I really recommend reading the past ones bro, as the end is only suppose to be mediocre, nothing more XD

awesome chapter, love the dragonball like ending. thanks for the link to this chap, I always try to stay up to date one your work, just rarely post

Oh really now? =p Too bad I never saw that series :-/ xD Sure no problem, and thanks yourself ;D

Good job but seriously with so many characters it's difficult to keep up with who is who

Haha, you just have to keep paying attention, we're almost at the turning point now And thanks for reading it =)

Another awesome story yet again :bouncy:
Line that made me rofl : "Gaara: Indeed... And yeah, Kushina says hey btw." XD The way i imagined gaara saying this part made me laugh XD
Keep up the good work bro expecting the next :bouncy:

Haha, thanks bro ^_^xP
I will try my best as always ;D

 

[~Uzumaki~]

Thanks ^_^ This one kind of felt a bit weak compared to the rest, but it was nonetheless set up as a build-up chapter, so in the end, I think it was needed. One of the reason to why I'm doing a triple release this week as I didn't really see the chapters standing much on their own for a longer period of time. Next one to be up tomorrow
You're the first one to comment about that actually =p One of the many things I've just thrown into the mix as I've been writing the chapters =p Hehe, we shall see



Thanks, glad you liked it =D



Yeah, I figured I would test out the description more than usual with the remaining three chapters, as I'm going to do the FF about the SoSP in novel style, so I better start preparing for it and taking baby steps xP

Thinking about that fact, that's a bit sad really xP You started reading when this FF series is coming to an end xD You totally missed out on the action of 3-26 xP 27 and onward really is the beginning of the end, and thus, it will have a lot of heavy dialogue. So far, Naruto has been battling the Sage of Six Paths, Kabuto, Tobi, the Jubi, and plenty of other battles with Sasuke vs Suigetsu, Kakashi and his lost brother against Sakumo, Naruto vs the previous Hokages, Kushina, Jiraiya, Madara and Orochimaru... And well, Killerbee and Gaara have had their fight as well... Starting on the end of my FF like this, would definitely put a big break on the overall experience if you ask me, haha xP
Yeah, the whole thing about Mu moving back to Iwa and he becoming Kage was really off the bat, and I had to just squeeze it in wherever I could as I didn't/don't have much time otherwise to describe it =p And therefore, it was meant as a shocker =p

You will just have to wait and see I suppose, and I really recommend reading the past ones bro, as the end is only suppose to be mediocre, nothing more XD

Well...I might read the earlier chaps but they're so long tho...well i do like a challenge plus I wanna know what makes this FF so freaking loved. I'm ok with reading dialogue and mediocrity cuz I wanna improve my dialogue. I've actually had a few lol moments just reading the dialogue in your stuff. Wanna learn how yo make mine as interesting XD

Anyways if you're looking to improve description and go for the novel style, might I recommend you read a bit of Germanicus' work ^^. Also, I could link you to some even more descriptive FFs outside the Base. Just to get a sense of how literary description goes. The key is to 'show, don't tell.' As in, show your readers what is happening with only your words!

 

[Michael92]

Well...I might read the earlier chaps but they're so long tho...well i do like a challenge plus I wanna know what makes this FF so freaking loved. I'm ok with reading dialogue and mediocrity cuz I wanna improve my dialogue. I've actually had a few lol moments just reading the dialogue in your stuff. Wanna learn how yo make mine as interesting XD

Anyways if you're looking to improve description and go for the novel style, might I recommend you read a bit of Germanicus' work ^^. Also, I could link you to some even more descriptive FFs outside the Base. Just to get a sense of how literary description goes. The key is to 'show, don't tell.' As in, show your readers what is happening with only your words!

Well, the first chapter you read was my biggest ever, so I don't see reason in that complaint xP
Haha, it's not that loved, but sure, I wouldn't mind that ;D I'm not saying these chapters are mediocre by my standards though, I'm just saying they might come off as mediocre by the people whose not read what this FF has been all about... The actual war xP

Yeah, already checked his out some time ago, as well as taking glimpses at other works as well... Doubt I'll dig too much into FF/OF to find inspirations though, as I have some heavily "novel style" books laying around that I might look over After all, it's going to be a tryout to determined whether... if I'll ever make it, will I make it as an author or as a script writer =p

 

[~Uzumaki~]

Well, the first chapter you read was my biggest ever, so I don't see reason in that complaint xP
Haha, it's not that loved, but sure, I wouldn't mind that ;D I'm not saying these chapters are mediocre by my standards though, I'm just saying they might come off as mediocre by the people whose not read what this FF has been all about... The actual war xP

Yeah, already checked his out some time ago, as well as taking glimpses at other works as well... Doubt I'll dig too much into FF/OF to find inspirations though, as I have some heavily "novel style" books laying around that I might look over After all, it's going to be a tryout to determined whether... if I'll ever make it, will I make it as an author or as a script writer =p

Novels are even better. Way better. Didn't suggest em' cuz o didn't know if you were the nov reading type. They'll do way more for your writing that anything else. You om the right track man. only advice I'll add is don't rush it. Finish at least one novel before you start on your novel style FF

Btw, I think you might be more scriptwriter though. It'll be cool cuz then you can turn my novel into a movie and we'll both be rich and famous and swimming in awards XD but you never know for sure till you delve into novel and see how you like it. I used to write script style before till I discovered the archetype. Anyways nice chap and goodluck!

 

[Michael92]

Novels are even better. Way better. Didn't suggest em' cuz o didn't know if you were the nov reading type. They'll do way more for your writing that anything else. You om the right track man. only advice I'll add is don't rush it. Finish at least one novel before you start on your novel style FF

Btw, I think you might be more scriptwriter though. It'll be cool cuz then you can turn my novel into a movie and we'll both be rich and famous and swimming in awards XD but you never know for sure till you delve into novel and see how you like it. I used to write script style before till I discovered the archetype. Anyways nice chap and goodluck!

Yeah of course... Doubt I'll be re-reading the only book I have in my collection anytime soon though, as I'm not really the reading type to begin with, and it's over 2500 pages or so I believe xP

Haha XD That right there, is an excellent idea, haha, although if I was going to become a script writer, I would probably go on and create my own universe, George Lucas style xP And thanks ^_^

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Of course this chapter had to start off with yet again another time-skip XD This journey that Minato will be taking with his grandfathers is interesting. So Mu has been absent the entire eight year time-skip and missed out on a lot of history lol Also, it appears as though he fortunately for the time being, doesn’t seem affected by the camp. I can’t wait to find out the reasoning behind Itachi’s abandoning Konoha. So, this is what Itachi has been up to more or less. That is a disappointing development but on the flipside he was against harming his family thus there is something more to him. Wow, all the children have grown up and had children of their own lol Interesting choices for their appearances btw. And now even Mu has taken the role of the next Tsuchikage-I’m glad that Sasuke’s son was able to bear that title as well ^^ Nice, I like that their journye was in search of Itachi-well I’m not completely sure, perhaps a coincidence instead lol Nevertheless I liked where the ending went. I was able to read it all in one go so it was a long chapter but one that you could get through in a couple of hours ^^ This chapter overall was a excellent in terms of much character development as well as revelations

Fun Facts & Author's Note:
I would’ve never guessed that you liked Eminem and he used to be an idol of mine but once I got into Japanese music-I lost interest for rap. However, I have made very rare exceptions and he has been one of them due to how much I regarded him lol And it is shocking that you chose to display him ^^

1: Yeah, now that I think about it, character descriptions hasn’t been a focus of yours and frankly me neither for that matter XD However, it was refreshing to read and very interesting but then again I completely understand your reasoning behind not having done this and either way-I was acceptant ^^

2: Yes indeed, kudos to danivass for that epic scene between the Uchiha bros.!!! =D lol And I too am glad that you decided to incorporate more characters as well ^^

3: lol You’re the proactive master XD

 

[Michael92]

Of course this chapter had to start off with yet again another time-skip XD This journey that Minato will be taking with his grandfathers is interesting. So Mu has been absent the entire eight year time-skip and missed out on a lot of history lol Also, it appears as though he fortunately for the time being, doesn’t seem affected by the camp. I can’t wait to find out the reasoning behind Itachi’s abandoning Konoha. So, this is what Itachi has been up to more or less. That is a disappointing development but on the flipside he was against harming his family thus there is something more to him. Wow, all the children have grown up and had children of their own lol Interesting choices for their appearances btw. And now even Mu has taken the role of the next Tsuchikage-I’m glad that Sasuke’s son was able to bear that title as well ^^ Nice, I like that their journye was in search of Itachi-well I’m not completely sure, perhaps a coincidence instead lol Nevertheless I liked where the ending went. I was able to read it all in one go so it was a long chapter but one that you could get through in a couple of hours ^^ This chapter overall was a excellent in terms of much character development as well as revelations

Fun Facts & Author's Note:
I would’ve never guessed that you liked Eminem and he used to be an idol of mine but once I got into Japanese music-I lost interest for rap. However, I have made very rare exceptions and he has been one of them due to how much I regarded him lol And it is shocking that you chose to display him ^^

1: Yeah, now that I think about it, character descriptions hasn’t been a focus of yours and frankly me neither for that matter XD However, it was refreshing to read and very interesting but then again I completely understand your reasoning behind not having done this and either way-I was acceptant ^^

2: Yes indeed, kudos to danivass for that epic scene between the Uchiha bros.!!! =D lol And I too am glad that you decided to incorporate more characters as well ^^

3: lol You’re the proactive master XD

Well technically, this chapter continues from the last scene on chapter 27 xP Although we do have a skip one year back in time before we go back to the current time again. Then there is a three months skip there though, but other than that, this chapter actually keeps the time from skipping, haha xP

Well, this chapter doesn't display much, but I think you will like how it turns out in the end with Itachi 2
That is actually one of the main reasons to why Sasuke went back to Konoha (not why he went back, but why I had him come back, haha), so that Mu could take his role eventually

Actually, it was just what I was listening at the time, so I just chose it without thinking much about it for a change, haha xP ;D

1: Haha, well good to have a change then I suppose? xD Quite frankly, I never really pictured anything when reading about my own created characters, which is a bit strange I suppose. As if Naruto, for instance, was talking to a shadow, haha =p

2: Felt like I had to give him some sort of credit for it, hehe And yeah, always try my best you know ^_^

3: Hehe, thanks I suppose xD =)

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Well technically, this chapter continues from the last scene on chapter 27 xP Although we do have a skip one year back in time before we go back to the current time again. Then there is a three months skip there though, but other than that, this chapter actually keeps the time from skipping, haha xP

Well, this chapter doesn't display much, but I think you will like how it turns out in the end with Itachi 2
That is actually one of the main reasons to why Sasuke went back to Konoha (not why he went back, but why I had him come back, haha), so that Mu could take his role eventually

Actually, it was just what I was listening at the time, so I just chose it without thinking much about it for a change, haha xP ;D

1: Haha, well good to have a change then I suppose? xD Quite frankly, I never really pictured anything when reading about my own created characters, which is a bit strange I suppose. As if Naruto, for instance, was talking to a shadow, haha =p

2: Felt like I had to give him some sort of credit for it, hehe And yeah, always try my best you know ^_^

3: Hehe, thanks I suppose xD =)

I must have misconstrued your wording for a time-skip-my bad lol Thanks for the insight though

I can’t wait to read on about Itachi/Mu!!! ^^