[Predictions] Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

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Naruto manga 644: Father and Son

if you didn't read my 643 prediction here is the link



[ ]- Flashback

( )- thoughts

The opening scene shows Kirin is making its appearance in the sky with a powerful Roar .

Sasuke : Die with the Roar of Thunder .

Obito : Shit !!!


In a blink of an eye , kirin attacks obito and causes a devastating explosion .


The alliance are safe but some of them were caught in the shockwave

Naruto : { cough } { cough } ( if it weren't for Sasukes Susanoo i would have been caught in that blast )

Naruto : Dad !!!

Sasuke : Relax Naruto , they are edo's . They will come back again .

The hokages are seen reforming beside them

Minato : What a powerful attack .

Tobirama : Pheew , you should have warned us Brat !

Hiruzen : ( what an attack )

Sasuke : hmmp

scene changes to madara

Madara : I see....the uchiha boy has tamed lightning . Interesting....

the gobi monster puches the ps in it's face

Hashirama : don't loose your focus Madara !

Hashirama : ( Wow , as expected from you Sasuke) . ( smiles )


Obito is seen laying down and unconscious .

Yin Kyuubi : do it now Minato , nows your chance

Minato : ( yosh )

Minato : Naruto raise your hands above

Naruto : Ok , but why .... gaaah

minato places his hand on naruto's belly seal and transfers the yin kurama to him

Naruto : Dad what are you doing ? your cloak !!

Minato's cloak starts to disappear

Minato : Naruto stay still , the seal is not done yet .

Obito : too bad ! ( with a RAPE face )

Hiruzen : i didnt even sense him

Sasuke : So fast { turns his head back }

Obito : shinra tensei

Obito blasts all of them

Naruto crashes to a rock , his seal is still incomplete

obito teleport's to where Naruto is

Naruto : my body ... arrgh { coughs out blood }

Obito : Well , it seems that i've finally caught you Naruto , dont worry i will let you be a hokage in my world . Farewell Naruto ....

Obito forms a spear with the biju bombs

Sasuke : Shit!!! , i cant make in time ....

everyone is shown with a shocked face

Minato is pierced right on his chest

Naruto : Dad !!!

Despite being pierced , Minato reaches to Naruto's belly and continues the seal

Naruto : Why did you ? { tear sheds from his eyes }

The seal is reforming again with a different look.

Minato : Naruto this is a different seal... { coughs up blood } The uzumaki's most precious seal ... Your mother taught me that ..eh { cough's blood } ..

scene changes to Hiruzen

Hiruzen : Just like before ... Minato ... { with a sorrowful voice }

Minato : Obito you have weakened , seem like that Kirin took a toll out of you ..

Obito : Sensei , you still protect him , Why ?..... Why did you sacrifice your self for him

Minato : because ,..eh.. { cough's blood } He's my son !!! { sheds a tear }

Obito : Your weak sensei , you don't deserve the title Hokage

Minato : Naruto , it was nice fighting with you . Side by side...

Minato : Seal !!!

only the voice of kurama is heard

Kurama : At last , i am whole again , Naruto release them all !!!

Naruto : Time to end this war

A huge shock wave occurs


[video=youtube;5sDHfGQqPpA]https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=5sDHfGQqPpA[/video]
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background music

the scene is covered with smoke

naruto's bm cloak changed

Naruto : thank you Dad , for everything

Obito : Ooh my God ...

all of them are in shock

everyone's expression is shown by panels

Naruto is seen with the Sage of Six Path's Staff

Madara : No ! it can't be

the scene zooms into Naruto's face

Hashirama : ...........

Sakura : Hinata what happened to Naruto

Hinata : { speechless }

Sakura : Hinata !!

Hinata : Naruto , ... ummm ...

Sakura : hurry up Hinata , what is it

Hinata : Naruto has the rinnegun

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I know some of it is not going to happen in the next chapter but i want to hear your thought's
 
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Seems quite possible Minato would sacrifice himself the same way to give Naruto the other half.

Rinnegan seems a bit far fetched but I certainly wouldn't mind seeing it happen :D

Nice read.
 

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It's not overpowered bro , Naruto unlocked the sage of six path mode
These contradict each other :p!!!!!!


OT: Really good read. I am expecting Minato to push Naruto aside or something like that once he completes the transfer. The only correction would be that Minato will not spit blood because he's an Edo Tensei. He will also likely not feel pain, and as such wouldn't really stutter.

Rinnegan is a bit much, but hey why not... the Alliance could use one :scorps:


Final part with Hinata... her being speechless would make sense, but maybe instead of the Rinnegan, Hinata (who seemingly wouldn't know quite as much on it) would say this.

Hinata: He has the eye's of that man! (a flashback image behind her of maybe Pain looking down on her before he stabs her).
 

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These contradict each other :p!!!!!!


OT: Really good read. I am expecting Minato to push Naruto aside or something like that once he completes the transfer. The only correction would be that Minato will not spit blood because he's an Edo Tensei. He will also likely not feel pain, and as such wouldn't really stutter.

Rinnegan is a bit much, but hey why not... the Alliance could use one :scorps:


Final part with Hinata... her being speechless would make sense, but maybe instead of the Rinnegan, Hinata (who seemingly wouldn't know quite as much on it) would say this.

Hinata: He has the eye's of that man! (a flashback image behind her of maybe Pain looking down on her before he stabs her).
Thanks for pointing those out

Next time ill do my best
 
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