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Naruto 643:The Complete Link
Page 1
Minato's kurama is shown to be spirit-like and non-physical.
Minato's Kurama: I had always thought that my other half was immovable. To think that a brat would come this far...He must be the one grandpa rikudo was talking of.
Minato: He is my son after all. I will have to give him the gift soon but first I have to settle my past mistakes.Anyway, I appreciate the help you gave me on my revival.
Minato's Kurama looks annoyed
Minato's Kurama: If you need my full power, you could undo the seal.
Minato smiles
Minato: No. I prefer that you give it to Naruto. Whatever, I can deduce that you are friendlier than your other part.
Minato's Kurama: Hmph
Page 2
Minato returns to the present
Minato: I knew you could do it, Naruto.
Naruto: I have figured it out from Gamakichi. It appears that I can only hurt him in sage mode.
Tobirama: That's quite a kid you have, Minato.
Some distance away, Obito was getting to his feet, looking unappalled.
Obito: A rasengan mixed with natural chakra. Regardless,it's about time I show my full powers.
(Obito looks at Madara)
Obito:(He is planning something) But first, I have to separate myself from him
Obito performs hands seals.
Obito: Yin release-dimensional spirit barrier
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Tobirama: He is trying to separate us from Hashirama and Madara.
Minato looks puzzled
Tobirama is desperate
Tobirama: Okay, I will explain. This technique is a barrier that allows only the living to pass through and blocks the dead like the ones who have been resurrected through Impure World Resurrection.
Minato: So, we are also trapped here.
Sasuke: Kages, I leave everything to you and Naruto. I will go to stop Madara on my own.
Sasuke dashes towards the shinobi alliance, past the barrier set by Obito
Naruto:Wait Sasuke!
Page 4
Obito hovers high up in the air, forms a compressed chakra ball in his two hands and fire it in the form of two powerful beams.
Tobirama: Don't get touched by it! That's no normal ninjutsu!
The team manages to escape just before the battlefield explode with black chakra which reverberated in the atmosphere.
Naruto: Kage Bunshin No Jutsu.
Naruto clones: Senpou-Giant Rasengan Barrage
Obito's staff unleashes a shockwave and all clones disappear in an instant alongside with their techniques.
Minato performs hand seals.His cloak chakra hand replaces his lost hand.
Minato:Kuchiyose No Jutsu-Gamabunta
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Gamabunta: It has been a while Minato. I will do my best.
Gamabunta: Toad Oil Stream
Wild stream of oil shots forward
Minato: Fire Release:Toad Oil Flame Bullet
Giant flame burns through rocks and melts everything
Naruto(Sage Mode): Here I go. Fuuton:Rasen shuriken
Tobirama: Wind senjutsu combined with Fire senjutsu. Incredible!
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Gamabunta and Minato: That should be enough.
Obito:Preta Path!
Suddenly, the oil and the exploding empowered rasen shuriken were absorbed in a spherical shield.
Obito: Did you forget I had the rinnegan?
Naruto: Damn! That amount of senjutsu won't be enough to stop him and I am losing sage mode. What can I do?
Naruto remembers shima and fukasaku.
Naruto: Kuchiyose no Jutsu
Tobirama:There have been a lot of summonings lately.
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Shima: Pa, this is the child of prophecy.
Fukasaku: How are you doing Naruto and Minato chan?
Naruto: Save the talk for later. Right now, we have to stop this man who uses the sage techniques.
Fukasaku: How can this be? So, the prophecy was true.
Minato: He is also the juubi's jinchuriki. Only senjutsu is effective on him.
Naruto: Let's get the show on the road
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Minato,shima and fukasaku: Senjutsu-Goemon!
Obito: Preta Path
The boiling oil vanishes
Shima Fukasaku: It's like at that time we were atop jiraiya.
Tobirama: I will have to create an opening. Water Release- Water encapment
Obito is surrounded by water.However, obito tries to nullify the water ninjutsu with his staff.
Obito: I can't see them. There's too much water.
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Only when Obito succeeded in getting rid of the water that Kage Bunshins of Naruto and Minato come out of nowhere.
Obito slices through all of them. They disappear one after another.
Obito: Hmph. So pathetic of you.
Minato: Don't understimate me. Time–Space Barrier
Portals begin appearing where Minato had placed his FTG kunais while the kagebunshins were distracting Obito a while ago.
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Minato: Kage bunshin no jutsu
Each clone holds a kunai in one hand and a rasengan in a kyuubi chakra hand
Minato clones: Rasen senkou chourinbu kousanshiki
Each clone strikes Obito with rasengan through the time barrier and disappears into another portal. Obito tries to nullify the attacks but they were so fast. After being consequently hit, Obito was severely injured and was enraged.
At the same moment,Gamabunta pinpoints his sword attack directly on the injured Obito
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Naruto: What kind of jutsu is that? It's way too fast,father.
Tobirama: You have surpassed me , Minato, who was the creator of the Flying Thunder God technique.
Minato: My technique should occupy him for another minute. Let's develop a strategy.
Shima: Come here,Naruto. Me and Pa will merge with you.
After using the body merge technique, Fukasaku and Shima stood atop naruto shoulders.
Naruto: Awesome! Now, I wont lose sage mode anymore.
Fukasaku: The link is complete. From now, you will access full senjutsu power.
Shima: You don't need to create bunshins anymore for your wind jutsu. Pa is connecting his wind chakra to yours.
Meanwhile, Tobirama and Minato formulate their strategy.
Tobirama: Do not use FTG kunais anymore. You will only put yourself in the way of his attacks.
Minato: Understood, Lord Second. I will distract him while you and Naruto pass on the offensive.
Page 12
Scene changes to Sasuke
Sasuke was standing in front of Madara and Hashirama who were fighting.
Sasuke enters susanoo mode and launches enton arrow at Madara whose susanoo has been broken by hashirama.
Madara: Shinra Tensei! Jutsus of that level don't work on me. So, the uchiha clan still exists to this day.
Sasuke: No. All the clan members have been annihilated. I am the sole survivor.
Madara: It's obito's doing. I am sure of it. Even if you join the fight, you should know that all is meaningless before overwhelming power.
Sasuke joins Hashirama's side to confront Madara.
Page 13
Hashirama uses Mokuton whilst Sasuke uses enton and blazes the mokuton. Hashirama uses it to surround Madara who was pulling out perfect susanoo.
Madara: I have to agree that you two form a formidable team. I will have to use susanoo at full power. Now then, let's see what the new generation of the Uchiha Clan is good for.
Perfect susanoo destroys everything in the surroundings. Luckily, the shinobi alliance was not present. It is revealed in a flashback that shikamaru had gotten them further from Madara for their safety and to formulate a plan.
Page 14:
Hashirama and Sasuke were safe somehow
Hashirama: Keep combining your enton. Wood Style: Deep Forest Emergence
Sasuke: Enton
Trees with amaterasu entangles perfect susanoo. The amaterasu burns perfect susanoo's coating.
Madara: It is useless. As long as I can repel techniques, my PS can do the same.
Perfect susanoo uses shinra tensei which does destruction on a 5 kilometer radius. Hashirama has protected sasuke coated in susanoo with sanjuu rashoumon.
Sasuke: What in the world.....
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Scene changes to Obito who was injured
Obito casts a hand seal and all he was instantly healed
Tobirama: He keeps on using yin and yang techniques. Is your son ready Minato?
Naruto: Yeah! More than ever. I had never been so close with nature before. I feel an incredible source of knowledge.
Fukasaku: That's because you have established the perfect link with natural chakra.
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Obito: I am tired of your worthless blabbering. Yang release!
Obito's staff becomes brighter all of a sudden and glows with life. (His chakra changes from black to green-like)
Tobirama: He has switched from Yin-Yang release to Yin.
Obito: With this, I control all living energies and therefore life itself. I shall prove to you how powerful the sage jutsus are.
END OF CHAPTER
Thoughts?
Page 1
Minato's kurama is shown to be spirit-like and non-physical.
Minato's Kurama: I had always thought that my other half was immovable. To think that a brat would come this far...He must be the one grandpa rikudo was talking of.
Minato: He is my son after all. I will have to give him the gift soon but first I have to settle my past mistakes.Anyway, I appreciate the help you gave me on my revival.
Minato's Kurama looks annoyed
Minato's Kurama: If you need my full power, you could undo the seal.
Minato smiles
Minato: No. I prefer that you give it to Naruto. Whatever, I can deduce that you are friendlier than your other part.
Minato's Kurama: Hmph
Page 2
Minato returns to the present
Minato: I knew you could do it, Naruto.
Naruto: I have figured it out from Gamakichi. It appears that I can only hurt him in sage mode.
Tobirama: That's quite a kid you have, Minato.
Some distance away, Obito was getting to his feet, looking unappalled.
Obito: A rasengan mixed with natural chakra. Regardless,it's about time I show my full powers.
(Obito looks at Madara)
Obito:(He is planning something) But first, I have to separate myself from him
Obito performs hands seals.
Obito: Yin release-dimensional spirit barrier
Page 3
Tobirama: He is trying to separate us from Hashirama and Madara.
Minato looks puzzled
Tobirama is desperate
Tobirama: Okay, I will explain. This technique is a barrier that allows only the living to pass through and blocks the dead like the ones who have been resurrected through Impure World Resurrection.
Minato: So, we are also trapped here.
Sasuke: Kages, I leave everything to you and Naruto. I will go to stop Madara on my own.
Sasuke dashes towards the shinobi alliance, past the barrier set by Obito
Naruto:Wait Sasuke!
Page 4
Obito hovers high up in the air, forms a compressed chakra ball in his two hands and fire it in the form of two powerful beams.
Tobirama: Don't get touched by it! That's no normal ninjutsu!
The team manages to escape just before the battlefield explode with black chakra which reverberated in the atmosphere.
Naruto: Kage Bunshin No Jutsu.
Naruto clones: Senpou-Giant Rasengan Barrage
Obito's staff unleashes a shockwave and all clones disappear in an instant alongside with their techniques.
Minato performs hand seals.His cloak chakra hand replaces his lost hand.
Minato:Kuchiyose No Jutsu-Gamabunta
Page 5:
Gamabunta: It has been a while Minato. I will do my best.
Gamabunta: Toad Oil Stream
Wild stream of oil shots forward
Minato: Fire Release:Toad Oil Flame Bullet
Giant flame burns through rocks and melts everything
Naruto(Sage Mode): Here I go. Fuuton:Rasen shuriken
Tobirama: Wind senjutsu combined with Fire senjutsu. Incredible!
Page 6:
Gamabunta and Minato: That should be enough.
Obito:Preta Path!
Suddenly, the oil and the exploding empowered rasen shuriken were absorbed in a spherical shield.
Obito: Did you forget I had the rinnegan?
Naruto: Damn! That amount of senjutsu won't be enough to stop him and I am losing sage mode. What can I do?
Naruto remembers shima and fukasaku.
Naruto: Kuchiyose no Jutsu
Tobirama:There have been a lot of summonings lately.
Page 7:
Shima: Pa, this is the child of prophecy.
Fukasaku: How are you doing Naruto and Minato chan?
Naruto: Save the talk for later. Right now, we have to stop this man who uses the sage techniques.
Fukasaku: How can this be? So, the prophecy was true.
Minato: He is also the juubi's jinchuriki. Only senjutsu is effective on him.
Naruto: Let's get the show on the road
Page 8:
Minato,shima and fukasaku: Senjutsu-Goemon!
Obito: Preta Path
The boiling oil vanishes
Shima Fukasaku: It's like at that time we were atop jiraiya.
Tobirama: I will have to create an opening. Water Release- Water encapment
Obito is surrounded by water.However, obito tries to nullify the water ninjutsu with his staff.
Obito: I can't see them. There's too much water.
Page 9:
Only when Obito succeeded in getting rid of the water that Kage Bunshins of Naruto and Minato come out of nowhere.
Obito slices through all of them. They disappear one after another.
Obito: Hmph. So pathetic of you.
Minato: Don't understimate me. Time–Space Barrier
Portals begin appearing where Minato had placed his FTG kunais while the kagebunshins were distracting Obito a while ago.
Page 10:
Minato: Kage bunshin no jutsu
Each clone holds a kunai in one hand and a rasengan in a kyuubi chakra hand
Minato clones: Rasen senkou chourinbu kousanshiki
Each clone strikes Obito with rasengan through the time barrier and disappears into another portal. Obito tries to nullify the attacks but they were so fast. After being consequently hit, Obito was severely injured and was enraged.
At the same moment,Gamabunta pinpoints his sword attack directly on the injured Obito
Page 11:
Naruto: What kind of jutsu is that? It's way too fast,father.
Tobirama: You have surpassed me , Minato, who was the creator of the Flying Thunder God technique.
Minato: My technique should occupy him for another minute. Let's develop a strategy.
Shima: Come here,Naruto. Me and Pa will merge with you.
After using the body merge technique, Fukasaku and Shima stood atop naruto shoulders.
Naruto: Awesome! Now, I wont lose sage mode anymore.
Fukasaku: The link is complete. From now, you will access full senjutsu power.
Shima: You don't need to create bunshins anymore for your wind jutsu. Pa is connecting his wind chakra to yours.
Meanwhile, Tobirama and Minato formulate their strategy.
Tobirama: Do not use FTG kunais anymore. You will only put yourself in the way of his attacks.
Minato: Understood, Lord Second. I will distract him while you and Naruto pass on the offensive.
Page 12
Scene changes to Sasuke
Sasuke was standing in front of Madara and Hashirama who were fighting.
Sasuke enters susanoo mode and launches enton arrow at Madara whose susanoo has been broken by hashirama.
Madara: Shinra Tensei! Jutsus of that level don't work on me. So, the uchiha clan still exists to this day.
Sasuke: No. All the clan members have been annihilated. I am the sole survivor.
Madara: It's obito's doing. I am sure of it. Even if you join the fight, you should know that all is meaningless before overwhelming power.
Sasuke joins Hashirama's side to confront Madara.
Page 13
Hashirama uses Mokuton whilst Sasuke uses enton and blazes the mokuton. Hashirama uses it to surround Madara who was pulling out perfect susanoo.
Madara: I have to agree that you two form a formidable team. I will have to use susanoo at full power. Now then, let's see what the new generation of the Uchiha Clan is good for.
Perfect susanoo destroys everything in the surroundings. Luckily, the shinobi alliance was not present. It is revealed in a flashback that shikamaru had gotten them further from Madara for their safety and to formulate a plan.
Page 14:
Hashirama and Sasuke were safe somehow
Hashirama: Keep combining your enton. Wood Style: Deep Forest Emergence
Sasuke: Enton
Trees with amaterasu entangles perfect susanoo. The amaterasu burns perfect susanoo's coating.
Madara: It is useless. As long as I can repel techniques, my PS can do the same.
Perfect susanoo uses shinra tensei which does destruction on a 5 kilometer radius. Hashirama has protected sasuke coated in susanoo with sanjuu rashoumon.
Sasuke: What in the world.....
Page 15:
Scene changes to Obito who was injured
Obito casts a hand seal and all he was instantly healed
Tobirama: He keeps on using yin and yang techniques. Is your son ready Minato?
Naruto: Yeah! More than ever. I had never been so close with nature before. I feel an incredible source of knowledge.
Fukasaku: That's because you have established the perfect link with natural chakra.
Page 16:
Obito: I am tired of your worthless blabbering. Yang release!
Obito's staff becomes brighter all of a sudden and glows with life. (His chakra changes from black to green-like)
Tobirama: He has switched from Yin-Yang release to Yin.
Obito: With this, I control all living energies and therefore life itself. I shall prove to you how powerful the sage jutsus are.
END OF CHAPTER
Thoughts?
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