-ahhimane-
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That was epic shit I just read, so much awesome content to comprehend/expierience, it is too much LOL !
Ok, Now let go straight to your feedback
First, Pros:
Now Cons:
- Your epic format style of prediction rocks ! (Yeah I began to mimic your format style and put in my prediction to make it much better). Everything is clear/visible, it is easy to differ Action, from Characters speech, same with description of scene.
- As always each scene is very describable with a lot of details give us impression/feeling as we could read really stuff. Action is not complex thanks to use of simple words but easy to follow thanks to very good descriptions. I can literally picture each scene in my mind which you try to show us(readers) by using descriptions.
- Great feeling of peace of plot. It changes as it should depends on plot's demands, exactly like Kishi instead of going just slow or going just fast, which is boring and lack tense. I feel non-stop intrigued and interested what will happen next
- Use of simple but keep great meaning words, which are the most accurate to describe what you would like to say/show us. Yeah I can't stop being amazed how much epic your mastery over words is.
- Almost lack of grammar mistakes/error. Of course it happens sometimes, me too unfortunetly
, but your is almost always perfect... , you don't even make syntax error which to me happens quite often...
- Great characterization/understanding how each character act, which make it even more close to real stuff Kishi writes.
- Great understanding of surrondings, what action where happen and what happen here while something happen somewhere else(yeah it is really hard to explain... but I hope you get my point.), It simply makes flow of plot in prediction naturally flowing, keeping fluidity while preserving elasticity.
Seriously although:
- Well It feels too long sometimes(Same as my problem). As well as you focused too much on Hashirama vs Madara battle which was dynamic and tense but prolonging it too much cause it gets sloppy sometimes and boring
- Too little focus on Juubi Jinchurki Obito, he seems to be more focus of attention then Madara or Hashirama.
- Well I would like for you to make sequels because it was nice read and feel hungry for more lol
- Your prediction is too epic in compare to mine..., I am jealous sometimes, why I am not as talented as you
It is over 9000 in epicness
keep it up
(looking at the text) O_O
THANKS KCMNaruto =D
* A 1 vs 1 battle includes lots of detailed action. (I guess that's why we, fans, like an epic battle)
That's why reading out all the actions as well as imagining it takes a lot of time and sometimes gets bored. But then chaining every action in a fast forward mode and imagining it makes it really epic.
* I wanted to make an epic battle between Madara and Hashirama since most of their techniques are very well known. Juubito's techniques are still not clear so I drag his character slowly towards the end of the prediction.
* A sequel to the previous one sometimes ruins my prediction so I try not to make a sequel and let the people enjoy my prediction to its fullest. So that they remain excited till the original release of the chapter.
