[CFS] [Mantis Fist] - Scaze & Erzo

[Erzo]

Roy awaits his ill mannered friend outside an abandoned cave near the Iwagakure training grounds.

 

[System001]

Roy awaits his ill mannered friend outside an abandoned cave near the Iwagakure training grounds.

I'm imposing a new rule on both this thread, and your life. For every insult or negative connotation directed towards me, there must be at least 10 words of praise and adoration to balance it out. So in other words, praise me now betch. :|

 

[Erzo]

I'm imposing a new rule on both this thread, and your life. For every insult or negative connotation directed towards me, there must be at least 10 words of praise and adoration to balance it out. So in other words, praise me now betch. :|

Roy didn't speak those words, therefore you don't know what he really thinks of you, just RP. :|
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Roy ignored the weak threat of his inferior friend and began to stretch his muscles in preparation for what lay ahead.

This is going to be quite troublesome training, Scaze-san. :>

 

[System001]

Alright noob, tell me what you know about The Mantis Fist.

 

[Professor Sarutobi]

Oh so when I ask about learning it you need jutsu approved first but now that its erzo

 

[System001]

Oh so when I ask about learning it you need jutsu approved first but now that its erzo

Don't try and get at me, especially not by spamming this thread. Erzo was the very first person I talked to Mantis Fist about, he listened to my ideas, helped proof read, and even contributed every now and again. Naturally he would be the very first person I taught it to; what do you want me to do, make multiple simultaneous teaching threads? Nah, I'd much rather teach one person first, and decide how and when to go about it, teaching at my own leisure, which I can do with Erzo. Also the fact that I've only decided to teach Erzo now, when this has been approved for months, and he's been consistently telling me to make CJ for it, is blatantly because I've either realised something or something has changed.

Not that I have to even justify myself to you, since, at the end of the day, I said I'd save a spot for you. Meaning that, if six people came to me wanting to learn, I'd reject one of them and accept the other five. I never actually said that I'd teach you for sure, hell I don't even know what I'd be trading for, I don't even know if you could deliver on ideas, I don't like going into things blind, it's not my style. Hence, until I know what I want, how I want it, and if you can deliver on those wants, I'm not obliged to teach anything.

 

[Professor Sarutobi]

note the at the end. means i was joking, and spamming is what we iwa folk do best U_U
good luck on the training. I posted some cj for ur CFS on my QL if u hadnt seen

 

[System001]

note the at the end. means i was joking, and spamming is what we iwa folk do best U_U
good luck on the training. I posted some cj for ur CFS on my QL if u hadnt seen

Oh, lol. <_>
Dat rage for nothing.

 

[Erzo]

*Ignoring Iwarian lols*

Mantis fist = strikes with lightning channeled causing damage and other stuff.

 

[System001]

*Ignoring Iwarian lols*

Mantis fist = strikes with lightning channeled causing damage and other stuff.

Unfortunately for you, this isn't a joke thread. That reply ain't cutting it. Try again.

 

[Erzo]

Unfortunately for you, this isn't a joke thread. That reply ain't cutting it. Try again.

****. D:

Fineee, the attacks basically consist of finger strikes to random parts of the opponents body in which you go on to discharge lightning causing internal damage. Quite similar to gentle fist in terms of the speed of attacks.

As the style name says, the user can move in the style of a Mantis, making movements extremely random and hard to track, allowing for higher chance of hitting the opponent. Herp derp, it's hot, I'm tired, be content with this. <_<

 

[System001]

****. D:

Fineee, the attacks basically consist of finger strikes to random parts of the opponents body in which you go on to discharge lightning causing internal damage. Quite similar to gentle fist in terms of the speed of attacks.

As the style name says, the user can move in the style of a Mantis, making movements extremely random and hard to track, allowing for higher chance of hitting the opponent. Herp derp, it's hot, I'm tired, be content with this. <_<

I'm so tempted to make you redo this. But since you're having trouble with theory, we'll just do it in a more practical manner.

Alright, so here I've got a Kunai, pumped full of fire chakra to make it super hot, yaya, and a transparent frying pan, nice and sturdy for blunt damage good enough to remove the 'me' and 'th' from Meowth. Can you guess what I'm going to do to you? And why I'm going to do it? If you can, we'll skip this part and move on.

 

[Erzo]

I'm so tempted to make you redo this. But since you're having trouble with theory, we'll just do it in a more practical manner.

Alright, so here I've got a Kunai, pumped full of fire chakra to make it super hot, yaya, and a transparent frying pan, nice and sturdy for blunt damage good enough to remove the 'me' and 'th' from Meowth. Can you guess what I'm going to do to you? And why I'm going to do it? If you can, we'll skip this part and move on.

No Inuzuka-sama sir, no.

 

[System001]

No Inuzuka-sama sir, no.

Of course you can't, cause' your stupid.
Standing on your left side, Ling would swing the Kunai in his right hand into the back of your neck, slapping it onto your neck and intending to press it deeper and deeper as time goes on. The pan would be left hanging limply in his left hand.

 

[Erzo]

Of course you can't, cause' your stupid.
Standing on your left side, Ling would swing the Kunai in his right hand into the back of your neck, slapping it onto your neck and intending to press it deeper and deeper as time goes on. The pan would be left hanging limply in his left hand.

Y-yeas. What next, Inuzuka-sama sir.

Expecting it to be part of the training, Roy decides to hold his position and trust that his wild friend would not harm him.

 

[System001]

Man this thread was so long.
Just tell me what you know about the style so we can be done with it.
I'm presuming that you've already read it, yes?

 

[Erzo]

Man this thread was so long.
Just tell me what you know about the style so we can be done with it.
I'm presuming that you've already read it, yes?

Similar to gentle fist in terms of speed and the way you strike. Although instead of open palms, you'd use your finger tips. Erm, once you hit the opponent you basically penetrate their body with your chakra and it'd travel further into their bodies. herp.

Main element the concept was based on was Lightning, causing the usual paralysis and loss of feeling in areas hit due to the nerves present and things. Main difference between this and gentle fist would be the way the chakra diffuses once the opponent is hit. Rather than being a single pin pointed strike, from the hit area the chakra would travel another 3 or so inches in a cone sort of shape, allowing it to affect a bigger area, and even if you miss the intended point, you'd still hit it due to the way the chakra travels.

This alright?

 

[System001]

Yep, basically.
Any questions?

 

[Erzo]

No questions.

 

[System001]

So we're all good. Cool.