My latest gfx works
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lol id be more offended if you ahd any skills to back up your talk
Look at any of my GFX threads...
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I know that you are easily offended when you get some critique, but to the hell with it.
First off, what exactly is the thing where the text breaks apart in the first work? It looks like.. uhh, I don't know what it looks like exactly. But it certainly is NOT something you'd expect to appear when you break apart such a strong and sharp text. I think pieces of glass or metal or something of the sorts would work far better in that case.
The second work needs more work on the details, for example you could add some pieces of glass flying through the 'hole', and certainly it needs a glass effect for the rest of the work. The way it is now, it appears that a hole in a supposed glass surface appears out of nowhere. You need to add a glass panel on top of it to look more realistic.
The text is also quite bad, change font and put some more effort on it.
As for the fairy tale one, I need to know where you started from to know what exactly you've done. If you've started from scratch, it's quite nice.
The avatar, well, I don't really comment on avatars, they are not exactly the hardest of things to make. The fire effect is not bad, although at some places the editing is very, very poor. For example, the helmet and right above his left arm.
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i take proper cnc fine its the whinny bullshit like most of your comments that i do not anyway
the first one is more of a disintigration effect
the second one may look better with some flying glass but i was fine with it as it was so i moved on it is not for a contest or work or anything
the third i started with the picture below then i rendered the logo ran a new color over and added a clipping mask of fiore then the natsu render then the gray render then i rendered som of aces fire and applied it to natsu then i used some smoke and other brushes to make the ice effect on gray
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and the avatar you are right it could have blended better in those 2 spots i just did not catch them
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Dude, im gonna be honest...These are piss poor...you shouldnt assume the worst in someone when they tell you your work is bad, simply take the good from it and move on, theres no need to argue back over something silly like that.
work 1:
honestly that 'disintigration' effect is a bit off, it looks like u erased and then just used a spatter brush. Also goku should never join fairy tail XD. Using the same font on the bottom was semi ok tho, other than that its just a render
Work 2:
These are renders pasted onto backgrounds, 1 or 2 effects added and some out of place blur.
Work 3: isnt too bad aesthetically but its not like uve done a lot with it, and the contrast seems a little off...
Work 4: a lot of fire for no reason all the same too, sorta just takes over, not really the right sorta style for that render with that fire or the like cheesiness of it.
in future dont take offense even if someone hasnt offered cnc, unless theyre hard out trolling u just gotta take it as if its helping you to improve. + it's not even worth the effort if theyre just being dicks about it (which i dont think the dude u were talking to was)
work 1:
honestly that 'disintigration' effect is a bit off, it looks like u erased and then just used a spatter brush. Also goku should never join fairy tail XD. Using the same font on the bottom was semi ok tho, other than that its just a render
Work 2:
These are renders pasted onto backgrounds, 1 or 2 effects added and some out of place blur.
Work 3: isnt too bad aesthetically but its not like uve done a lot with it, and the contrast seems a little off...
Work 4: a lot of fire for no reason all the same too, sorta just takes over, not really the right sorta style for that render with that fire or the like cheesiness of it.
in future dont take offense even if someone hasnt offered cnc, unless theyre hard out trolling u just gotta take it as if its helping you to improve. + it's not even worth the effort if theyre just being dicks about it (which i dont think the dude u were talking to was)