My version of the juubi revival arc

What do you rate this series as a whole?


  • Total voters
    5

Sennin of Logic

Sannin of the Scrolls 📜
Elite
Joined
Apr 13, 2013
Messages
8,874
Reaction score
906
Back when the most recent chapter was 634, I started making this.


This is how I imagined things should go in the manga. It's my fanfiction, but most people do not browse the fanfiction section since it's at the bottom and most occupy this section. The global rules did not state that I can't put fanfiction in the discussion section. It also is on topic since it's discussing how the manga should have, and will go. Also, it won't start any flame wars. With that said, I present you with the 7 parts of the juubi revival fanfiction I made so far.

part 1:
Naruto prances around celebrating their victory over the 10 tails. Madara chuckles.

Madara: DO THOSE FOOLS REALLY THINK THAT THIS WILL KILL THE JUUBI?

Madara proceeds to use wood style to uproot the seals on the juubi, and it runs amok. Hashirama responds by having his clone attack Madara, which he easily dispatches.


Madara: I TOLD YOU A CLONE WOULD BE BORING.

Naruto realizes that he can't preserve Kurama's chakra any longer. He enters biju mode and uses Kurama cloak. Naruto prepares a huge TBB and launches it against the juubi, but it's swatted away by it and it slams Naruto away with one of its tails.

Sasuke: YOU IDIOT! DID YOU HONESTLY THINK THAT YOU COULD BEAT THE JUUBI HEAD ON?!

Naruto(smirking): HEY, I CAN'T STAND AROUND DOING NOTHING.

Sasuke: NARUTO, YOUR 9 TAILS IS JUST CHAKRA RIGHT?

Naruto: YEAH?
Sasuke: IF WE CAN COMBINE ARE TECHNIQUES SO WELL, I CAN COMBINE SUSANOO WITH YOUR 9 TAILS.

Sasuke combines susanoo with 9 tails like Madara did and Naruto gives Sasuke a cloak and then they attack the juubi. The juubi attempted to punch them, but the susanoo's shield covered in black flames blocked the attack, hurting the juubi more. They counter attacked with flame control swords enhanced by Naruto. Naruto and Sasuke combined a barrage TBBs and inferno style to make amaterasu explosions that caused the juubi to recoil in agony.

Madara realized that things were getting out of hand and attacked the edo kage, forcing them to stop the barrier.

Madara: IT'S TIME FOR THE ENTERTAINMENT TO BEGIN HASHIRAMA!

Hashirama: LEAVE MADARA TO ME. THIS IS ALL MY FAULT FOR NOT KILLING MADARA WHEN I HAD THE CHANCE. I MUST STOP MY BEST FRIEND NOW.

Hashirama opened the fight with wood style: deep forest emergence, which Madara overpowered using Perfect Susanoo. Madara kept slicing Hashirama's roots and wood hands with his sword.

Madara: ALL THIS LONG WAIT, AND THIS IS ALL YOU CAN OFFER HASHIRAMA!

Hashirama uses wood clones to use wood dragoon, wood golem, and deep forest emergence to keep Madara occupied.

Madara: COME NOW HASHIRAMA! DO YOU THINK THIS IS ENOUGH TO CHALLENGE ME?!

Madara blasts through all of them. The forest sprouts flowers with the knock out pollen. However, Madara uses yasaka magatama to destroy them. Then Madara finds Hashirama, however, he's in sage mode. Hashirama uses the wooden statue to attack the Perfect Susanoo. Much to Hashirama's shock, Madara stops Perfect susanoo and absorbs the statue using the rinnegan.

Hashirama: WHAT DID YOU DO?

Madara: THANKS TO YOUR UNWITTING CONTRIBUTION, I NOW HAVE THE POWER OF THE SAGE OF 6 PATHS. I AM A GOD NOW.

Madara activates susanoo and summons a meteor. Hashirama uses wood style to stop the meteor, but Madara then uses wood style: deep forest emergence to trap and damage Hashirama. Madara then uses sealing jutsu: chains of hatred to immobilize him (yes I made this up).

Madara: THAT WAS DISAPPOINTING. I EXPECTED MORE OF A CHALLENGE FROM YOU HASHIRAMA. YOU'RE MY RIVAL, THE ONLY ONE WHO COULD STAND IN MY WAY. THEN AGAIN, NO ONE CAN STOP THE POWER OF OUR ANCESTOR. LOOKS LIKE I WAS THE STRONGER GOD. I HAVE 2 NEW TOYS TO TRY OUT (looks in Naruto and Sasuke's direction).

Minato: WE WON'T LET YOU THROUGH!

Madara: RELAX. LET'S SEE WHAT THE CURRENT GENERATION CAN DO BEFORE WE CONTINUE.

The fight against the juubi rages on. Ninjas are getting hurt in the crossfire.

Sakura (mind): THERE'S GETTING TO BE TO MANY NINJA FOR KATSUYU TO GET TO. I MIGHT NOT LAST MUCH LONGER AT THIS RATE.

Naruto: I'VE GOT TO GIVE THEM CHAKRA!

Sasuke: DOING THAT WILL INJURE YOU. WE CAN'T SAVE EVERYONE. THEY'RE IN OUR WAY. LET THEM TAKE CARE OF THEMSELVES.

Naruto: I WON'T TURN MY BACK ON MY FRIENDS NO MATTER WHAT! WHAT HOKAGE WOULD LEAVE HIS ALLIES TO DIE TO MAKE HIS LIFE EASIER?

Naruto uses shadow clones and transfers chakra cloaks to the alliance. As a result, they survive the explosion caused the the juubi's massive TBB blocked by the susanoo shield. However, it destroys the susanoo and Kurama cloak, Naruto is reduced to KCM.

Sasuke: WE'RE AS GOOD AS DEAD.

Naruto: I'M NEVER GIVING UP!

Kurama: NARUTO YOU FOOL! SASUKE WAS RIGHT.

Naruto: KURAMA, CAN YOU LET ME SPEAK TO THE ALLIANCE?

Kurama: YES, WHAT ARE YOU PLANNING NARUTO?

Naruto: I'VE GOT A PLAN TO TO WIPE OUT THE JUUBI.

Kurama has Naruto communicate with the alliance through the cloaks.

Naruto: EVERYONE! WE NEED TO USE COLLABORATION TECHNIQUES TO DEFEAT THE 10 TAILS!

Sakura: NARUTO! THERE'S NO WAY WE CAN ALL COMBINE OUR JUTSU LIKE YOU AND SASUKE DID! WE CAN'T COORDINATE OUR CHAKRA!

Naruto: YES YOU CAN, IT'S MY CHAKRA. EVERYONE, WE'VE ONLY GOT ONE SHOT AT THIS, IT'S ALL OR NOTHING! HAVE THE WATER STYLE USERS AND LIGHTNING STYLE USERS PARALYZE THE JUUBI AND THEN THE WIND AND FIRE STYLE USERS TARGET THE BLACK FLAMES!

Sakura: HOW DID YOU KNOW THAT ELECTRICITY PARALYZES?

Naruto: I SAW IT IN A CARTOON.

Everybody facepalms.

The water style users flood the juubi, and the lightning style users take advantage of the water and paralyze the juubi. The wind and fire style users make a huge flame jet and hits the black flame.

Naruto: NOW SASUKE!

With the empowered black flame, Sasuke uses inferno style to engulf the juubi and makes it collapse from the damage being done.

Tsunade arrives with the edo hokage.

Tsunade: IT'S PAYBACK TIME MADARA!


part 2: successors of the 1st hokage
Tsunade has arrived.

Naruto: GRANNY TSUNADE!

Sakura: LADY TSUNADE!

Madara(surprised): WHO PUT YOUR BODY TOGETHER? YOU COULDN'T HAVE POSSIBLY REGENERATED YOUR LOWER HALF.

Tsunade: A CERTAIN SNAKE DID.

Flashback to when Orochimaru found Tsunade.

Tsunade: WHAT DO YOU WANT YOU TWISTED EGOIST?

Orochimaru: OH, I JUST WANT TO MOVE THINGS ALONG. I HAVE NO INTEREST IN THIS WAR SINCE IT'S NOT OF MY DESIGN. MY INTEREST LIES IN THE PATH SASUKE WILL CHOOSE, BUT I CAN'T OBSERVE IT DURING THIS WAR. THAT'S WHERE YOU COME IN. YOU'LL HELP WRAP THINGS UP QUICKER.

Orochimaru puts Tsunade's halves together and her regen connects the 2 again. Orochimaru slowly walks away.

Tsunade: WHERE ARE YOU GOING YOU DIRTBAG?

Orochimaru: OH, TO A PLACE IN KABUTO'S MEMORY. IT'S NOW POSSIBLE. MY AMBITION IS NOW WITHIN MY GRASP!

Orochimaru makes a grin that could sicken a man with an iron stomach.

Transfer to the present. Tsunade reveals that she has 2 slugs on her.

Tsunade: THESE ARE THE GREAT SLUG SAGES OF SHIKKOTSURIN. I HAD THE TIME TO SUMMON THEM AFTER I WAS HEALED. THIS IS WHY I KNEW WHAT YOU'D BE CAPABLE OF IN SAGE MODE NARUTO.

She merges with them and enters a slug sage mode.

Madara(activates PS): THIS MEANS NOTH..

Tsunade causes massive damage on the perfect susanoo. Madara has a shocked expression.

Naruto: I'LL JOIN IN TO!

Tsunade: NO, NARUTO! SPREADING THE KYUBI'S CHAKRA IS LIKE EXTRACTING HIM. YOU'RE KILLING YOURSELF! SAKURA! HEAL NARUTO FIRST!

Sakura: YES MY LADY!

Sakura starts healing Naruto.

Tsunade: WE, THE HOKAGE, WILL HANDLE THIS. YOU'VE DONE MORE THAN ENOUGH NARUTO.

Madara slashes at them with the shockwave. Tsunade tanks it and blasts toward Madara and punches it rapidly in the chest, causing it to almost shatter. Minato blocked it with space-time barrier. Hiruzen and Tobirama were damaged, but quickly recovered. Madara fired yasaka yagatama at Minato, but he dodged it with FTG. The explosion created was immense, and caused ninja in the distance discomfort.

Madara(thought): HE'S TO FAST TO HIT DIRECTLY, BUT NO MATTER HOW FAST HE IS, HE CAN'T DODGE AN ATTACK THAT HE DOESN'T SEE.

He uses wood style behind him in an attempt to catch him off guard, but Minato sensed the attack and dodged with FTG again. Madara regenerated his susanoo. Hiruzen summoned Enma and transformed him into a massive staff which he used to knock Madara's perfect susanoo to the ground after hitting it in the head. Tobirama entered sage mode and used water style: raging tsunami to make a huge blast of water to slam and submerge Madara's perfect susanoo. He then used water style: liquid explosion to make the water around it turn into a huge explosion (water can be used to amplify the power of explosives and make them more concentrated). Madara's susanoo is also heavily damaged by this. Minato throws kunai around the perfect susanoo to shape a square and weaves hand sings. Then he throws a kunai toward it. He uses sealing jutsu: parasite seal to seal the susanoo chakra inside the kunai. Then, all of the edo hokages run toward and attack Madara all at once, but suddenly, they're dragged away by an invisible force and thrown away from Madara.


Obito appears. He used the deva path to drag the hokages away from Madara.

Naruto: OBITO! BUT DIDN'T KAKASHI-SENSEI TAKE CARE OF HIM?

Obito: YOU TELL ME.

He uses kamui to teleport an object out of his dimension. It's Kakashi's battered body.

Naruto: KAKASHI-SENSEI!!!


part 3: despair
Minato uses a chakra arm to grab Kakashi and puts him Near Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke. Sakura crouches near him.

Sakura: HIS INJURIES ARE VERY SEVERE, BUT WE'RE NOT TO LATE TO SAVE HIM.

Sakura begins healing Kakashi.

Minato: OBITO? YOU'RE THE MASKED MAN?

Obito: YES, I WASN'T JOKING WHEN I SAID THAT I WOULD RULE THE WORLD. I'LL HAVE MORE CONTROL THAN ANY KAGE, ANY FEUDAL LORD, OR EVEN THE SAGE OF 6 PATHS. REALITY ITSELF WILL BE MY KINGDOM.

Minato: THE OBITO I KNOW WOULDN'T DO THIS TO THE WORLD, OR KAKASHI.

Obito: OBITO DIED IN MADARA'S LAIR. I AM NO ONE. I HAVE NO NAME.

Minato: ARE YOU BLAMING ME FOR WHAT HAPPENED, THAT I WASN'T THERE TO SAVE YOU AND RIN?

Obito: NOT REALLY. THIS REALITY IS A FAKE. MY REAL SENSEI WOULD HAVE MANAGED TO SAVE ME AND RIN. HOWEVER, YOU DIDN'T, SO YOU'RE A FAKE VERSION OF SENSEI.

Minato has a deeply depressed look to see his student this way.

Obito: IT'S TO LATE NOW! THIS REALITY WILL CRUMBLE!

He uses almighty push against Minato, but he uses FTG in an attempt to evade, however, the almighty push lasted long enough to hit him when he reached his kunai. Minato was blown away a great distance smashing into a boulder.

Meanwhile, the hokages fight Madara. Madara activate perfect susanoo. Tobirama in sage mode uses water style:from the depths to make a huge amount of water that forms a sea serpent that attacks Madara.

Madara: PATHETIC!

Madara makes the susanoo cut the sea serpent in half strait through the middle. Tsunade and Hiruzen combined their attacks at the susanoo's gut. Madara was knocked back and suffered damage. They continued to attack again. However, Madara switched to sharingan and predicted their attacks and used timing to counter. He swatted them away and then slashed at them using the sword's shockwave.

Minato and Obito traded failed blows. Minato would attempt to punch Obito. It would pass through him and Obito would counter attack. Minato used FTG to escape. Minato attempted to blitz Obito with KCM speed, but found that he couldn't catch him off guard. Obito used wood style as a suprise attack. Minato used FTG again, but Obito took this opportunity to use universal pull to rip out the kunai and compress them into a ball and crushed them. Obito tried to use fire vortex to overcome Minato's speed with the large size. Minato dodged it without trouble anyway. Obito keeps Minato at bay with mixes of taijutsu, giant ninja tools, and wood style.

Madara; IT'S TIME TO END THIS LITTLE GAME!

Madara activates the rinnegan and combines 25 wood clones with susanoo. He uses heaven's wrath to summon a meteor shower, each one as strong as the one used against Onoiki.

Tsunade: THIS IS WHAT HE COULD HAVE DONE THE WHOLE TIME?

Tobirama: TO THINK THAT I THOUGHT I COULD BEAT THIS!

Naruto has a shocked look. Sasuke remains silent, but inside, he feels terror.

Minato uses space-time barrier to teleport the meteors away.

Obito(thought): HE CAN'T TELEPORT WHILE USING A BARRIER. HE'S MINE!

Obito teleports next to Minato and sends him to his dimension with kamui.

Naruto: DAD!

Soon after, Obito releases him. Minato returns with injuries that he didn't have previously.

Naruto: WHAT HAPPENED! HE WAS FINE JUST A SECOND AGO!

Obito uses a reverse contract to break the edo tensei slowly, making Minato powerless in the mean time. Madara uses 2 sword slashes simultaneously in PS to wound the hokages. His clones use the reverse contract. Tsunade regenerates from the attack easily.

Tsunade: I CAN'T BE BEAT WHILE IN SAGE MODE! MY SAGES SUPPLY ME WITH CONSTANT SAGE CHAKRA, KEEPING MY MITOTIC SEAL INTACT FOR AS LONG AS I WISH.

Madara: YES, THAT MAY BE, BUT THERE'S AN EASY REMEDY FOR THAT.

Madara uses deep forest emergence and wood spikes to kill the sages, reducing Tsunade to base mode.

Madara: AND NOW IT ENDS.

Madara stabs Tsunade with a susanoo sword and then uses a seal to disrupt Tsunade's chakra, getting rid of the healing ability is has. The ninja alliance looks on in horror.

Sakura:WHAT CAN WE DO?

Kiba: AW MAN! WE HAVE TO DEAL WITH THAT?!

The alliance's will is broken. Despair's tight grip latches on to their fragile hearts. How will this be resolved?

part 4: The new Sannin's battle
The alliance's moral is decimated by the defeat of the hokages.

Obito: THERE IS NO HOPE FOR YOU. SUBMIT TO THE WORLD TO COME.

The alliance is on the verge of losing hope.

Naruto: EVERYONE! ARE YOU GOING TO GIVE UP JUST BECAUSE THE HOKAGES CAN'T FIGHT WITH US ANYMORE? THEIR FEELINGS WILL STILL BE WITH US! DO THEY REALLY MEAN THAT LITTLE TO YOU?! WELL I'M NOT GIVING UP, AND I NEVER WILL! SAKURA, SASUKE, LET'S GET THEM!

Sasuke: HEH. YOU CAN HAVE THE OTHER ONE. I WANT MADARA. I WANT TO SEE WHICH UCHIHA IS STRONGER. THE HEAD OF THE UCHIHA CLAN OF THE OLD DAYS, OR THE SON OF THE LAST HEAD OF THE UCHIHA.

Naruto: ARE YOU CRAZY! I'VE FOUGHT HIM BEFORE! HE'LL DESTROY YOU!

Madara: YOU WOULD DO WELL TO LISTEN TO YOUR FRIEND. YOU MAY HAVE THE ETERNAL MANGEKO SHARINGAN, BUT YOUR PUNY SUSANOO CAN'T POSSIBLY MATCH MY PERFECT SUSANOO!

Sasuke(smirks): THEN I'LL JUST HAVE TO MAKE IT PERFECT.

Madara: IMPOSSIBLE. IT TOOK MONTHS BEFORE I COULD LEARN HOW TO USE PERFECT SUSANOO. THERE'S NO WAY A BRAT LIKE YOU COULD PERFECT IT SO QUICKLY. IF YOU HAD IT, YOU WOULD HAVE USED IT AGAINST THE 10 TAILS AT THE VERY BEGINNING.

Sasuke: DON'T TELL ME THAT YOU'RE SO USED TO THE SPECIAL POWERS OF THE MANGEKO, THAT YOU FORGOT THE MOST BASIC ABILITY OUR EYES HAVE! OUR ABILITY TO COPY ANY NIJUTSU! I NOW, THANKS TO YOU, HAVE THE PERFECT SUSANOO.

Sasuke activates his perfect susanoo, which looks like a samuri with a bird shaped helmet. Sasuke immediately attacks with flame control swords which Madara blocks with his sword. Naruto and Sakura take on Obito together. Naruto uses a dash kick at full speed against Obito, but he slips through him. As Obito tries to grab Naruto while he's off guard, a kunai is thrown at him at incredible speed. Obito slips through it at the last second. It blasts through a boulder behind Obito. Naruto gets away. Obito looks and finds that it was Sakura that threw the kunai.

Obito: THAT'S RIGHT, SHE HAS INCREDIBLE STRENGTH. SHE CAN USE THAT STRENGTH TO THROW OBJECT WITH INCREDIBLE SPEED AND FORCE.

Naruto: WHERE'D HE GO?

Obito teleports toward Sakura in an attempt to absorb her, but Naruto's speed allowed him to intercept Obito before that was possible. Obito counter attacked, but Naruto used a huge chakra arm to catch him off guard and hit him with incredible force. Obito slipped through the ground when this happened. Obito reemerges behind Naruto and prepares to absorb him while he can't be sensed because of kamui. However, Sakura notices him and smashes the ground, making Obito and Naruto lose balance. Naruto's chakra arms makes use of the derbies to move, forcing Obito on the defensive again.

When the derbies cleared, Naruto used shadow clones and attacked Obito. Naruto repeatedly dashed toward Obito and used the shadow clones to attack when Obito prepared to counter. Sakura joined in and Obito used almighty push to blast them away. The real Naruto anchored himself deep into the ground with chakra arms and created other shadow clones to brace himself against it. When 5 seconds passed, Obito used universal pull to drag Naruto toward him and ripped him out of the ground. Naruto used a chakra arm to force Obito to use kamui and stop using deva path. Obito fought Naruto in taijutsu and used universal pull to make Naruto fall down and then absorbed him with kamui. Sakura was to late, but managed to land a brutal punch that made an immense shockwave that caused discomfort to those near.

Sakura: GIVE NARUTO BACK RIGHT NOW!

Obito: THERE'S NOTHING THAT YOU CAN DO TO HELP HIM.

Sakura tries to punch him again, but Obito teleports away.

Sasuke and Madara's fight commences. Madara attacks Sasuke's susanoo's chest with susanoo sword, but Sasuke blocks the attack with flame control sword and creates a second one and makes a deep cut in Madara's PS torso. Madara uses the rinnegan and summons a gigantic meteor in an attempt to crush Sasuke. Sasuke however, Cuts it in half. Sakura smashes the one that would have hit the alliance. Madara uses yasaka magatama but Sasuke uses his shield to block it and counters with his own black yasaka yagatama. Madara's perfect susanoo bursts into flames. Sasuke uses his bow to fire a flame control arrow that hits the flames on the perfect susanoo and causes it to burst into even greater flames.

Sasuke: I CALL THIS, INFERNO STYLE: FIRESTORM.

Madara's PS is destroyed.

Madara: NOT BAD, IF I WERE LIVING, YOU'D WIN.

Sasuke: I WILL BEAT YOU NOW!

Madara(chuckles): AS YOU'VE UNDOUBTEDLY NOTICED, THE PERFECT SUSANOO PUTS A TREMENDOUS STRAIN ON YOUR STAMINA EVEN THOUGH YOU HAVE THE ETERNAL MANGEKO. REGENERATING IT TAKES EVEN MORE OUT OF YOU. AS A REANIMATION, MY STAMINA WILL NEVER RUN DRY. EVENTUALLY, YOU WILL TIRE, AND THEN I'LL KILL YOU.

Sasuke(thought): HE'S RIGHT! IF I DON'T MANAGE TO FINISH HIM IN ONE FELL SWOOP, I'LL LOOSE THIS FIGHT!

Naruto is teleported to the kamui dimension.

Naruto: IT'S HIS DIMENSION AGAIN. I HAVE TO FIGURE A WAY OUT OF HERE.

Suddenly, the cubes of the kamui dimension start to form a throne. Obito teleports to the dimension onto it.

Obito(smirks): WELCOME TO MY WORLD, NARUTO.


part 5: Will to fight.
Obito: WELCOME TO MY WORLD NARUTO.

Naruto(thought): RATS! HOW'M I SUPPOSED TO GET OUT OF HERE WITHOUT KAKASHI SENSEI?

Obito: YOU WON'T SURVIVE LONG ENOUGH FOR HIM TO RECOVER. NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE IN THIS DIMENSION. CONSIDER THIS A PREVIEW OF THE INFINITE TSUKYOMI.

Naruto(thought): WE'RE IN HIS DIMENSION, HE CAN'T BECOME INTANGIBLE ANYMORE.

Naruto then dashed head on against Obito and prepared a tailed beast ransengan, but suddenly, a barrier was created. His attack was repelled, and Naruto was blocked backwards since the blast effected him instead.

Obito created an immense landslide made from the floor. Naruto used chakra arms to prevent himself from being crushed by putting one on the land slide and one on ground away from it to get over it. However, Spikes came from it, forcing Naruto to use chakra arms to move midair. He found that a huge fireball was waiting for him. He used shadow clones to block it and launch himself away. When the fireball hit them, they where instantly incinerated.

Then, when Naruto landed, Obito made the ground shoot Naruto up into the air. Naruto was then blasted with a beam of pure yin-yang energy. Naruto used shadow clones as a shield and created a cloak to make a powerful barrier between it and him, but it was easily overpowered, and Naruto was severely wounded. Naruto healed, but he was running out of options. Spheres of yin-yang chased after Naruto. He dodged them, but they managed to corner him and get him with an explosion.

Transition to Sakura and Kakashi. Kakashi is healed by Sakura.

Kakashi: WHERE'S NARUTO!

Sakura: OBITO ABSORBED HIM! WE NEED YOU TO BRING NARUTO BACK!

Kakashi: OH NO!

Sakura: WHAT IS IT?

Kakashi: SAKURA, HEAL ME AS QUICKLY AS YOU CAN! IN HIS DIMENSION, OBITO IS INVINCIBLE! HE CAN CREATE ANYTHING! THAT'S HOW HE BEAT ME AND UNDOUBTADLY HOW HE BEAT MINATO SENSEI (he says this after seeing him). NARUTO, UNLIKE MINATO, HAS A SPECIAL PROTECTION TO THE GENJUTSU OF HIS WORLD, SO HE CAN RESIST, BUT WE NEED TO GET HIM OUT AS QUICKLY AS POSSIBLE. NOT EVEN NARUTO CAN BEAT OBITO.

Then, back at the kamui dimension, Naruto looked on in horror when a fake 9 tails was created.

Kurama: THAT'S HOW I WAS BEFORE I WAS SEALED INSIDE YOU! HE'S TWICE AS STRONG AS ME!

The fake 9 tails charges. Naruto dodged its attempt to slam him by jumping. However, the fake 9 tails used a shockwave on Naruto while he was in midair. Then he swatted Naruto away with his tail. The impact shocked and hurt Naruto. The fake then used tailed beast bomb against him. Naruto managed to dash away, but he was still caught in the explosion. He was battered.

Naruto(thought): HE'S INVINCIBLE! THERE'S NO WAY TO BEAT HIM!

Then Naruto thought about his friends, and what they'll be facing if Obito goes back.

Naruto: BUT I CAN'T GIVE UP! I HAVE TO FIND A WAY TO BEAT HIM NO MATER WHAT! (he recalls the time Itachi told him that every jutsu has a weakness, and that he should remain calm) I JUST HAVE TO FIND IT! SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!

Naruto attacks head on, but the fake used its tails to get rid of his clones, but , as Naruto was knocked back, a huge batch of shadow clones appeared behind the fake. The clones used massive tailed beast ransengan barrage, a barrage of tailed beast ransengans, each the size of a biju's. They slammed all of them into the fake, and the resulting combined explosion was massive.

The fake 9 tails suffered massive damage, but Obito made it regenerate. Naruto then entered biju mode. He used Kurama cloak and charged toward it head on. They blasted into each other with equal force. They both tried to punch and claw each other. They both used rapid biju damas and perfectly countered their attacks.

Obito: MY 9 TAILS HAS COMPLETE CHAKRA. IT SHOULD BE TWICE AS STRONG AS NARUTO! UNLESS... THE FUSION OF A BIJU AND JINCHURIKI'S CHAKRA GIVES A SPECIAL CHAKRA STRONGER THAN EITHER WOULD BE ALONE.

Naruto used shadow clones. They threw massive ransenshurikens at the fake 9 tails. At the same time, the original used a huge biju dama and destroyed it. It was reforming until the blast nearly reached Obito. He made a barrier, and the 9 tails disappeared.

Naruto(thought): WHEN HE DEFENDED HIMSELF, HE DESTROYED HIS 9 TAILS.

Obito created all the biju. Naruto used shadow clones and had them use ransenshuriken to cut through them, and used rapid biju dama to keep them at bay. Obito started to make an army of bijus, but then, a shadow clone appeared at Obito's blind spot with ransenshuriken. He hits him with it.

Obito: WHAT ARE YOU?!

Naruto: I SAW THAT YOU COULDN'T KEEP YOUR MONSTERS WHEN YOU DEFENDED. THAT MEANS THAT YOU COULDN'T DEFEND WHILE YOU HAD THEM. ALL I HAD TO DO IS MAKE YOU FOCUS SO MUCH ON ATTACKING ME, AND THEN CATCH YOU OFF GUARD. TAKE THIS!

Naruto's ransenshuriken launched Obito away and then detonated. The blades ruined Obito's chakra system. The dimension was falling apart. Holes to the real world would form. Naruto picks up Obito.

Naruto: THIS IS WHAT MY DAD WANTED WHEN HE SEALED KURAMA INSIDE OF ME! LET'S END THIS ONCE AND FOR ALL!

Suddenly, Naruto appeared into the real world. He finds Kakashi panting.

Naruto(waving his arms in raging fashion): AGH! KAKSHI-SENSEI! YOU COULDN'T HAVE BUTTED IN AT A WORSE TIME! I WAS ABOUT TO END THIS!

Sakura: NARUTO! YOU WERE TRAPPED IN THERE! YOU SHOULD BE THANKING US! DON'T MAKE US WORRY ABOUT YOU LIKE THAT!(Sakura slugs Naruto in the head)

Hinata(thought, relieved): NARUTO! YOU'RE SAFE.

Kiba(thought, depressed): OH GREAT! HE TOOK OUT THE ENEMY LEADER. HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO RIVAL HIM NOW?

Naruto looks toward Sasuke and finds that he's exhausted while using perfect susanoo.


part 6: the 6th hokage
Sasuke was exhausted from using perfect susanoo. He breathed deeply and frequently.

Madara: IT WON'T BE LONG NOW.

Sasuke gives a stare of pure hatred.

Naruto(looks and finds Tsunade wounded): GRANNY TSUNADE!

Naruto then proceeds to quickly move Tsunade to Sakura.

Naruto: SAKURA! CAN YOU HEAL TSUNADE?

Sakura(begins healing): I'LL DO WHAT I CAN!, BUT HER INJURIES ARE SEVERE. WE NEED THE HOKAGES BACK!

Kakashi: NARUTO, HAND ME THE REANIMATED HOKAGES. I MIGHT BE ABLE TO USE SHARINGAN TO ANALYZE THE SEALS AND FIND A WAY TO BREAK IT.

Naruto: RIGHT!

Naruto then takes the hokages to Kakashi. Then the battle between Sasuke and Madara continues.

Sasuke and Madara cross blades. Sasuke's flame control sword cut trough Madara's sword and slashed right through Madara's susanoo. Sasuke knocked it backwards. He then used the sword shockwave, but unlike the traditional ones, it's filled with black flames. The flames engulf Madara's susanoo. Madara then uses wood style: deep forest emergence. Trunks wrap around Sasuke's susanoo's arms and binds him. Madara then repeatedly slashed Sasuke's susanoo while it was defenseless. Sasuke regenerates it each time, but each time he does, he wears himself out. Sasuke fires black yasaka yagatama on the ground and then uses inferno style to turn it into a spear that hits Madara's susanoo. Madara then uses yasaka magatama to destroy Sasuke's perfect susanoo by hitting the areas Sasuke didn't regenerate.

Madara: YOU WERE FUN, ALMOST AS FUN AS HASHIRAMA WAS, BUT NOW THIS ENDS.

Naruto: NOT SO FAST!

Naruto and Sakura back up Sasuke.

Sasuke(thought): THE IDEA THAT I HAVE TO BE RESCUED BY THESE GUYS!

Sakura knocks over Madara's PS by jumping up and hitting it in the chest. Madara tries to counter attack by using yasaka magatama, which Sakura tanks with regen. Naruto is hurt, but then he's gone with a puff of smoke. Then Madara looks up and finds Naruto using many clones with massive ransenshurikens heading his way.

Naruto: YOU SAID THAT I WAS INCOMPETENT FOR USING CLONES BEFORE, SO HERE'S WHAT THEY'RE GOOD FOR! Wind style: ransen whirlwind!

Naruto's massive ransenshurikens combined to make a massive whirlwind of wind blades that tore apart What remained of Madara's susanoo.

Naruto: TAKE THAT JERK!

Naruto and Sakura got Sasuke and retreated.

Kakashi: I'VE ANALYZED THE JUTSU, BUT I CAN'T COMPLETELY UNDO THE SEAL! THEY WON'T DISAPPEAR, BUT THEY CAN'T MOVE. THEY WANT TO SPEAK WITH YOU NARUTO.

Naruto then goes to the hokages.

Tsunade(weakly): NARUTO, WE CAN'T FIGHT ANY LONGER. SOON I WON'T EVEN BE CONSCIOUS.

Tobirama: THE SEAL WILL SOON MAKE US UNCONSCIOUS AS WELL. THE ALLIANCE IS LEADERLESS.

Tsunade: YOU GOT THE ALLIANCE BACK ON IT'S FEAT WHEN EVERYONE ALMOST DESPAIRED.

Hiruzen: SASUKE HAS SHOWN GREAT SKILL, BUT SO HAVE YOU. UNLIKE SASUKE, YOU CARE FOR YOUR COMRADES.

Hashirama: AND THAT'S WHAT'S MOST IMPORTANT. YOU HAVE TO TAKE OVER THE FIGHT AGAINST MADARA'S PLAN.

Naruto: DOES THIS MEAN....

Minato: BEFORE YOU GO SON, HERE'S MY FINAL GIFT TO YOU.

Minato gives Naruto the yin chakra of the 9 tails. The circles in Naruto's biju cloak turn into yin-yang symbols with swirls. Naruto prepares to dash in Madara's direction.

Naruto(thought): THIS POWER. I'M STRONGER THAN EVER.

Kurama: OUR LINK IS NOW PERFECTED.

Hokages: NARUTO, FROM NOW ON...

Naruto enters Kurama cloak.

Hokages: YOU ARE HOKAGE!

Naruto dashes towards Madara with his new found power.


part 7: The reason for Madara's plan.
Kurama: NOW THAT YOU HAVE MY YIN CHAKRA, OUR LINK HAS NOW BEEN PERFECTED. THERE'S NOW NO TIME LIMIT TO BIJU MODE. TEAR MADARA APART!

Madara prepares to attack Naruto with a shockwave from the perfect susanoo, but Naruto overpowers it with his tailed beast shockwave, which knocks Madara back. Madara cut some of the 9 tails cloak in its torso, but then Naruto then made Kurama's fist larger and then made a devastating punch that sent the perfect susanoo flying backwards with a crack on its armor. The shockwave from such an attack nearly knocked away the alliance despite the distance they were from it. Madara then threw yasaka magatama at Naruto. Naruto effortlessly deflected them with a single tail. Naruto then fired rapid biju dama a Madara who deflected it with the blade shockwave of perfect susanoo.

Naruto(thought): MY BIJU DAMAS EXPLOSIONS WOULD BE POWERFUL ENOUGH TO OVERPOWER HIS SHOCKWAVE, BUT IT BLOWS THEM AWAY WITHOUT MAKING THEM EXPLODE! I HAVE TO DO SOMETHING ABOUT THAT SWORD.

Naruto then charges toward Madara and prepares to maul his head with an increased chakra hand. Madara gets all 4 susanoo arms to block it with all of his swords. Naruto then uses his tails to grab all arms and then fires a biju dama point blank and knocks Madara far away before making a massive explosion.

Madara's perfect susanoo was suffering severe damage from that attack and was almost destroyed. He regenerated it.

Madara(chuckles): YOU'RE A FUN ONE. YOU'RE AS STRONG AS HASHIRAMA, POSSIBLY STRONGER. YOU'RE MAKING THIS GAME INTERESTING.

Naruto: IS THAT ALL THIS IS TO YOU? A GAME!

Madara: OF COURSE! REALITY WILL SOON BE REPLACED. LIVES ARE NOW WORTHLESS! EVERYTHING IS GOING ACCORDING TO MY PLAN.

Naruto: WHY? WHY DID YOU MAKE THIS STUPID PLAN IN THE FIRST PLACE?!

Madara: YEARS AGO, OUR RESPECTIVE LINEAGES SLAUGHTERED ONE ANOTHER OVER A PETTY SQUABBLE AMONG BROTHERS. IT WAS A POINTLESS, STUPID BLOODSHED OF SOMETHING THAT NO LONGER MATTERED. HASHIRAMA AND I DISCUSSED HOW WE WOULD STOP THE CHAOS AS CHILDREN, BUT CIRCUMSTANCES PREVENTED THAT FROM HAPPENING. DESPITE HOW I PRETENDED TO ACT, I NEVER GAVE UP ON OUR DREAM, BUT NO ONE LISTENS TO ONE WITHOUT POWER. SO I TRAINED HARD. I BECAME THE STRONGEST IN OUR CLAN IN ORDER TO INFLUENCE THEM.

IT WORKED, BUT I COULD NOT RISK MY CLAN'S SECURITY ON HASHIRAMA'S WORD. I HAD TO CONTROL BOTH CLANS TO ENSURE PEACE ON BOTH SIDES. I COULDN'T RELY ON HASHIRAMA, ESPECIALLY AFTER MY BROTHER TOLD ME TO PROTECT THE CLAN WITH HIS DYING WORDS.

SEEING HASHIRAMA'S DETERMINATION GAVE ME HOPE, BUT IT DIDN'T LAST. DESPITE THE ALLIANCE, UCHIHA AND SENJU STILL RESENTED EACH OTHER FOR THE PAIN INFLICTED ON BOTH SIDES, AND I KNEW THAT IF TOBIRAMA BECAME THE 2ND HOKAGE, THE UCHIHA WOULD DIE.

I READ THE TABLET, AND IT HAD CODES THAT DESCRIBED THE SAGE'S LIFE. LIFE IN HIS TIME HAD THE SAME PROBLEMS AS MINE. HISTORY CONSTANTLY REPEATED ITSELF. THE TABLET STATED "IF 2 OPPOSING FORCES COOPERATED, TRUE PEACE WOULD BE ACQUIRED." IT IS THEN THAT I REALIZED THE TABLET'S TRUE MEANING. THE UCHIHA AND SENJU WOULD NEVER COOPERATE FULLY, SO TRUE PEACE WILL NEVER BE ACQUIRED!

Naruto: .......

Madara(creepy smile): THEREFORE, THE ONLY WAY TO ENSURE TRUE PEACE IS TO FORCE ALL TO COOPERATE TOGETHER VIA INFINITE TSUKYOMI! SINCE REALITY WILL BE ALTERED AND EVERYONE WILL BE RESTORED, I MIGHT AS WELL USE THIS REALITY AS MY ENTERTAINMENT IN THE MEANTIME! THIS IS MY SOLUTION! I'LL SUCCEED WHERE THE SAGE OF 6 PATHS FAILED! TELL ME THIS! WAS A WRONG ABOUT THE UCHIHA AND SENJU? DIDN'T ALL THAT I PREDICTED COME TO PASS?!

Naruto(angry expression): YOU WERE RIGHT, BUT YOU GAVE UP.

Madara: .......

Naruto: YOU KNEW EXACTLY WHAT WOULD HAPPEN, BUT YOU TURNED YOUR BACK ON EVERYONE! YOU COULD HAVE STOPPED IT FROM HAPPENING, BUT YOU GAVE UP! I WILL NEVER GIVE UP! I'M THE 6TH HOKAGE!

Madara: DON'T CLAIM TO UNDERSTAND BRAT! YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT TRUE SUFFERING IS!

Naruto: I KNOW PLENTY!

Madara: ......

Naruto: NAGATO ATTACKED MY VILLAGE, KILLED 2 OF THE CLOSEST PEOPLE TO ME. I KNOW SUFFERING, BUT I NEVER GAVE UP! I WILL NOT FAIL!

Madara: THERE'S NOTHING LEFT TO DISCUSS. ONLY THE ONE WITH MORE POWER WILL DETERMINE THE FATE OF THIS WORLD. LET'S SEE WHO'S THE STRONGEST!

Naruto and Madara charge toward each other.

Hope you enjoyed them!=D Which part was your favorite?
 
Last edited:

sky4life

Banned
Veteran
Joined
Oct 20, 2011
Messages
2,949
Reaction score
150
Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!


Ot: Meh,This is not kishi's writing style,Since it is your,Im not going to critisize more...

Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!
 

Sennin of Logic

Sannin of the Scrolls 📜
Elite
Joined
Apr 13, 2013
Messages
8,874
Reaction score
906
Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!


Ot: Meh,This is not kishi's writing style,Since it is your,Im not going to critisize more...

Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!Caps!

What's so bad about caps? It makes it easier for people to distinguish when someone's talking even more. Anyway, this is my first fanfiction.
 

The Mentalist

Anbu Operative 🎭
Veteran
Joined
May 20, 2011
Messages
2,720
Reaction score
197
Sakura: HOW DID YOU KNOW THAT ELECTRICITY PARALYZES?

Naruto: I SAW IT IN A CARTOON.

Everybody facepalms.
HAHAHA! Man that was the funniest part,good work.XD
 

Sennin of Logic

Sannin of the Scrolls 📜
Elite
Joined
Apr 13, 2013
Messages
8,874
Reaction score
906
Sakura: HOW DID YOU KNOW THAT ELECTRICITY PARALYZES?

Naruto: I SAW IT IN A CARTOON.

Everybody facepalms.
HAHAHA! Man that was the funniest part,good work.XD

Thanks! I'll have to make part 8. What did you think of kamui verse?
 

Transcendence

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Jan 11, 2013
Messages
11,636
Reaction score
1,451
Really good, but Full BM would still get stomped by Madara.
 

Transcendence

Kage in the Making 👑
Legendary
Joined
Jan 11, 2013
Messages
11,636
Reaction score
1,451
But Naruto's power would be at least doubled.

Pure speculation. He already has the most chakra in the series. All this would do is let him sustain his BM longer (Indefinitely). He's still susceptible to Wood Dragon and Flower Tree World which will either incapacitate him or revert him back to base mode.

Something along the lines of Bijuu Sage Mode or Full BM+Rinnegan will let him go toe to toe or beat Madara (Or in the actual Manga's case, Obito).
 
Top