You are now in charge of the next chapter of Naruto Shippuden.

GrayParadise

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Kishi is on vacation but still needs to get oh the manga for next week, so he puts you in charge.
Your maximum of pages to be used is 20.
The scene must remain at the battlefield, but can be transitioned if the battle happens to go elsewhere.
There must be at least 1 punch thrown.
What do you do?

HARD MODE: End the series in this one chapter without killing anybody.
SUPER HARD MODE: Kill Obito.
IMPOSSIBLE MODE: Turn Naruto into SO6P and still have him die.


You must choose one of the modes, Hard through Impossible in your post. Let it be known which difficulty you choose and proceed with your post.
 
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Yeah hard mode or not i am go with this:
Juubito one shots Narutoverse.The end.
 

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Yeah hard mode or not i am go with this:
Juubito one shots Narutoverse.The end.
Are you sure you want to do that? You'd get a lot of negative feedback from the fans.
 

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Hard Mode.

Naruto holds up a book and, instantly, everyone forgets their lifelong ambitions and believes in Naruto. Even the Juubi's Jin.
 

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Obito exploded trying to handle the Juubi.
Fin.
 

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Hard Mode.

Naruto holds up a book and, instantly, everyone forgets their lifelong ambitions and believes in Naruto. Even the Juubi's Jin.
Id be stuck between the angriest person and hardest laughing person on earth.
 

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Naruto is the new Hokage and is celebrating with his parents while Sasuke is chilling with Itachi and the Uchiha Clan it is then revealed that everyone has gotten what they have always desired as Obito activated Infinite Tsukuyomi as soon as he became the Jin and they are in a dream world, we then see Obito holding hands with Rin =D
 

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Impossible Mode: As Obito goes into the Juubi's Tailed Beast form, Naruto leaps at him. Obito has a slight lapse because he's trying to control it. Naruto PUNCHES him ONCE, then several chakra chains come out of Minato's back. The chains bind Naruto and Juubito. Minato then uses a Fuinnjutsu to seal Juubito into Naruto. Now having Senju DNA, Rinnegan, Uchiha DNA and being the Juubi's Jinchuriki technically, he becomes Rikudou. However, due to having Obito's personality in him, his mind is destroyed and he becomes a lifeless husk.

Now give me all your reps.
 

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I guess this is Super hard mode combined with a little impossible mode?

Obito turns out to be Naruto from the future (what?) and becomes the juubi's jin, thus becoming the next Sage of Six Paths. Naruto commits suicide in order to stop his future self. Madara gets sealed by the 4 Hokage + 5 Gokage. The end.~

A lot of hate-mail was sent that day...
 

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Impossible Mode: As Obito goes into the Juubi's Tailed Beast form, Naruto leaps at him. Obito has a slight lapse because he's trying to control it. Naruto PUNCHES him ONCE, then several chakra chains come out of Minato's back. The chains bind Naruto and Juubito. Minato then uses a Fuinnjutsu to seal Juubito into Naruto. Now having Senju DNA, Rinnegan, Uchiha DNA and being the Juubi's Jinchuriki technically, he becomes Rikudou. However, due to having Obito's personality in him, his mind is destroyed and he becomes a lifeless husk.

Now give me all your reps.
I would be genuinely satisfied with my life if the series ended this way.

I'm so sigging this next time I get on a computer.
 

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Let me try, with a general bullet point thingamafreaker

Obito: So this is what true power feels like...

Madara: (Damn that Obito! He must have used Izanagi to avoid my manipulation)

Obito: I may have lost my precious eye, but in its place, another rinnegan. And with all this power...I could do anything. Anything I want.

*two wood dragons arc on both sides and yank Obito downward*

Hashirama: You're still a jinchuriki! I can soothe your inner biju from being too troublesome.

Obito: Now all I need to do is focus my chakra a little bit more and release it all at once...

Obito: SHINRA TENSEI!

*the air quakes around Obito, crushing the wood dragons and brushing aside all matter in a large radius. Many shinobi fly off in all directions, the edo kage barely keeping their traction. Due to the help of Minato and Naruto both, the shinobi managed to survive with a small portion of kyubi chakra*

Naruto: "Is everyone all right!?"

*everyone groans, three of the K11 stand up in shock at the destruction*

Madara: Not bad control for the first time... But I'm afraid you still owe me my thanks, boy. I will extract that biju out of you and kill you for your insubordination.

Obito: *grins* Is that so? I don't think I feel comfortable allowing you this power. Would you really go through with giving putting everyone under Infinite Tsukoyomi? Or would you just use it for your own selfish desires? See, unlike you, I have my full mind upon ridding all evil from this world. But it looks like that's not your mindset.

Madara: We'll see how long you keep that smile going when I rip it from within you!

*Madara's black will still kept within Obito writhes about, disturbing Obito's chakra. His eye lights up*

Madara: OBEY ME!
 
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Impossible mode:

Juubi overpowers Obito,and takes over Obito since he has a hole in his heart(Rin),thus killing Obito and being released in perfect form.Sensing the chakra of the Juubi in perfect form,the SO6P's chakra in naruto,via the tailed beasts,emerges and takes over Naruto.We now have the SO6P vs The Juubi.(1-5)

SO6P beats the Juubi,and its chakra is separated back into the tailed beasts.Then SO6P's chakra diminishes and is eventually gone.Naruto is left with a full matured rinnegan.(5-15)

Seeing the number of deaths,since only a few shinobis survived the battle,Naruto uses renni-tensi and sacrifices himself to revive the majority of the shinobi killed in the war.(15-20)
 

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Impossible mode:

Juubi overpowers Obito,and takes over Obito since he has a hole in his heart(Rin),thus killing Obito and being released in perfect form.Sensing the chakra of the Juubi in perfect form,the SO6P's chakra in naruto,via the tailed beasts,emerges and takes over Naruto.We now have the SO6P vs The Juubi.(1-5)

SO6P beats the Juubi,and its chakra is separated back into the tailed beasts.Then SO6P's chakra diminishes and is eventually gone.Naruto is left with a full matured rinnegan.(5-15)

Seeing the number of deaths,since only a few shinobis survived the battle,Naruto uses renni-tensi and sacrifices himself to revive the majority of the shinobi killed in the war.(15-20)
Amazingly great ending, I was thinking the same thing. But in my version, Naruto made a new planet to seal Obito in, Planet Jiraiya (in loving memory of his old master), and died from body exhaustion.

Cus you know, SO6P had a chance to get comfortable with that power and use it effectively, but being strapped for time Naruto would've had to do the best he could. But still, 10/10 chapter.
 
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impossible mode:

Obito laments the loss of his last mangekyou sharingan to izanagi when sealing the juubi, then starts to experiment with his powers. He begins to boss around everyone, and regains the banana fan using a massive technique with all 5 elements to kill off all the fodder. The edo hokage, edo Madara, Naruto and Sasuke manage to survive with the respective jutsu and band together vs Obito. Obito makes 4 clones and has each use banshou tenin on the edo hokage and pull out their souls with human path. The original goes to edo Madara and uses rinne tensei, however he revives him in his old state as vengeance. Madara slowly dies without hashirama's chakra to support him. Then Obito kills off Sasuke last to torment Naruto, at which Naruto starts to break down.

Just as Obito is starting to perform infinite Tsukuyomi, Kakashi who's been regaining his stamina in kamui's pocket dimension teleports back. He takes off Obito's neck with Kamui, and while the juubi's chakra quickly repairs it, Obito who was already wounded loses control of the Juubi. Naruto regains his spirit as Kakashi reminds him of his words, enters sage mode and punches Obito's wounded face.

At this point, Naruto who has the tailed beasts' chakra and Obito who's juubi chakra spiralling out of control find themselves back in the dimension where Naruto met the bijuu. The Sage of Six Paths appears and recognises Obito and Naruto as the descendants of his older and younger sons. Again he chooses the younger son, Naruto, to carry on his will of achieving peace.

Obito and Naruto reappear. Obito is extracted, yet with his senju dna doesn't immediately die. Naruto finds himself possessing the juubi and also the rinnegan. He recalls all of the important moments of his life, and remembers that Jiraiya had entrusted the task of finding peace to him, Naruto realises what he must do. He finally reached a complete understanding as Nagato had wished, and realised that as Minato had told him, while there is the current system peace cannot be attained. In the end he decides that Sasuke's wishes to end the system are the way to go, so he seals himself and the juubi back into the moon, ending the lines of the senju and uchiha, but not before using rinne tensei to get back all of the other shinobi.

The 5 kage and reach the battlefield to find Kakashi holding Obito's body, who in his last moments regained peace as he realised Naruto's way and that he would be rejoining Rin. The 5 kage discuss on how to rebuild the world, as Orochimaru enters Obito's lair.

Now there are two alternate endings: either Orochimaru destroys Obito's sharingan store and gedo mazou inc yamato, Obito's body is cremated and his name is struck off Konoha's war memorial. Tsunade dies shortly after due to age related issues and Kakashi succeeds as Konoha's representative (the kage and shinobi system is no more).

or.
Orochimaru takes over Yamato due to the fact that his zetsu body allows the cooldown for his rebirth jutsu to dramatically decrease from 3 years to 1 day. He implants a sharingan pair in his eyes, and with the Kabuto chakra he took he enters dragon sage mode. Knowing that he know has the knowledge to awaken the rinnegan and summon the juubi again, he aims to spend the meantime rebuilding the sound village and continuing his neverending search for the truth, in preparation for his final assault on the shinobi system which brought so much pain and suffering.

edit: I know I'm vastly in excess of 20 pages, but a series like Naruto deserves a grand sendoff :)
 
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