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SFX : TAP
(lands on Gamakichi's head)
NARUTO: ....Because this is what he wanted to become from the start....The Juubi's Jinchuuriki!!!!
SFX : CREAK!!! CREAK!!!
(a sound is created as Obito peels off the surrounding white skin from the right part of his face)
MINATO/SASUKE/NARUTO: (looking at Obito's face) ?!!
GAMAKICHI: What kind of monster is that?
SFX : SLAM!!!
(lands on the ground, crushing it)
(a back view of the Juubi)
(Shinobis surrounded on the battlefield witnesses the scene in awe)
(A terror is surfaced on their faces)
(The blocked hand-shaped tails are vanished leaving the ten Gates of God as it is)
(A rough boiling-like surface is shown on Juubi's butt)
SFX : BLOP...BLOP.....BLOP
(The rough boiling-like surface settles down leaving a smooth plain surface)
(A view of the battlefield from the back away from the battlefield and high above the ground is shown)
(Juubi lying on his knees and one hand without tails)
(A circular pyramid like hump with spikes on it)
(The head is shown surrounded by peeled off skin, having horns on the peeled skin, held in right hand of the Juubi)
(Wind brushes through the white hair of the Juubi's head whose only left part is shown open while right part still under the skin held by right hand)
SFX : TRRRR...TRRRRR....THAP..THAP..THAP
(The skin falls on the ground)
(A huge panel showing most of the shinobis in small panels)
INO/SHIKAMARU/CHOUJI: ?!!
HINATA/KIBA/SHINO: ?!!
SAI/SAKURA/TENTEN: ?!!
GAI/LEE/DARUI: ?!!
SHIZUNE/CHOUJURO/KITSUCHI: ?!!
KUROTSUCHI/KANKURO/TEMARI: ?!!
HOKAGES: (holding the barrier) ?!!
NARUTO/MINATO/SASUKE: ?!!
SUIGETSU/KARIN: ?!!
OROCHIMARU: .....
KAGES: (senses while approaching the battlefield on the sand) ?!!
HASHIRAMA: (worried) [ It has reached to its worse... ]
SFX : DIG!!!
(grounds the fan)
MADARA: (gets up holding the fan) Hmm... (sighs) Obito gave me some time to enjoy a fight with you, Hashirama... (smirks) Let the fun begin. [ I'll wait for my turn (an evil glare) ...Obito ]
HASHIRAMA CLONE: What happened to that man, Madara?
MADARA: Huh? He's now Juubi's Jinchuuriki. Juubi has reached it final form...
HASHIRAMA CLONES: ?!!
MADARA: ....The final form of... (focus on rinnegan) ...the Juubi is... (focus on blackened Sharingan) ...the Jinchuuriki himself!
(Panel zooms out showing Obito's half blackened face as the Juubi's head after the skin peels off)
(Shinobis surrounded are looking at Obito's face)
(While the Sharingan turns to Mangekyo Sharingan)
(Huge sized Obito's head blocked by the Gates of God around his neck)
(Body below his neck is covered with Juubi's skin)
(Several black rods pierced in the right side of his face at various places)
(Watery mouth)
(A devilish look in his eyes)
(Raises his head which phases through the horizontal bar of the gate and frees himself)
SFX : SSSHHHHHHH!
(Drags his right hand on the ground)
(Lifts the hand)
SFX : SLAM!!!
(In blink of an eye, slams his right hand on the trio standing on the toad)
(The ground is crushed under the palm of his hand lifting the dust in the air from the sides)
(The ground and the shinobis are shaken by the impact)
SAKURA: Sasukeee!!!
KONOHA 11: Narutoooo!!!
SFX : POOF!!
(A huge cloud of smoke appears outside the barrier's sorner where Minato is holding his position)
(Gamakichi along with the trio appears out of the smoke)
NARUTO: Gahhhh!!!
(crashes on the ground)
SASUKE: (one eye closed due to the crash landing) [ The fourth is quick ] Shit!!
(Jumps off from Gamakichi and manages to hold his ground)
SFX : POOF!!!
(Minato's clone poofs away due to their sudden and crashing teleportation)
(Gamakichi slides on the ground tumbling)
(His sword is thrown in other direction)
NARUTO: Gamakichi!!!
(Gamakichi poofs away)
OBITO: (roars in harsh voice) Wooaaaahhhh!!!!
(hand shivers)
(The Juubi clones dissolves and falls on the ground)
(The surrounding shinobis near the clones alerts and distances themselves)
NARUTO: (confused) What's with that behavior?
MINATO: (looking at Obito's eyes) .....
(Obito's rinnegan moves left-right then right-left)
(He attempts to stand)
MINATO: He's still under the Juubi's control...
NARUTO/SASUKE: .....
MINATO: Look at his feet and hands
(panel shows Obito's hand and leg shivering)
MINATO: He's not able to stand on his legs.
NARUTO: Why dad?
MINATO: Because of the tails.
SASUKE: Might be true. But on what basis? (turns to Minato)
NARUTO: (looking dumb in between genius people) How? (scratches head)
MINATO: Naruto, tail helps to balance a four-legged animal to stand on its back legs. That is one of tail's abilities....without the tails, the Juubi is unable to achieve equilibrium of his body on his back legs.
SASUKE: .....
(remembers his battle with Naruto at the Valley of End. Naruto gets covered with Kyuubi cloak and falls on his hands like a four legged fox when one tail appears)
SASUKE: This is our chance. Lets go!! (dashes towards Obito's location)
MINATO: (looking at "still confused" Naruto) Let it go Naruto. Go ahead.
(Scene changes to the battlefield)
MADARA: [ He's been taken over by the Juubi ]
OBITO: Woaaahhhh!!!
(A panel shows Obito in a colourless dimension which slowly starts turning dark towards Obito)
(remembers)
[
RIN: I'm watching you.
MINATO: Don't give up. We will become Hokage.
OBITO: (while being burried under the piles of rocks) I wanted... to be together with everyone longer....
OBITO: (holding dead Rin in arms) I will create a world where you're alive... [ I will... change the fate... of this world. ]
]
OBITO: [ No... I'm not...giving up. Never!!! ]
(looks at the right hand of the Juubi)
(His vision shakes showing double image of everything he's viewing)
(Multiple transparent images of his head move around the solid one)
SHINOBIS: He's losing control!!
(Obito grabs his head by right hand)
OBITO: Aaarrrrggghhhhh!!!! (screams)
HOKAGES: ?!!
ALLIANCE: ?!!
SASUKE: (reaches at the front) ?!!
SFX : PLUP.....PLUP....PLUP
(White random-sized small irregular spots appear on his blackened face)
(The size of the spots goes on increasing leaving the black rods intact)
OBITO: Aaarggghhh!!! Woaaahhh!! (puts his head on the ground in pain)
(Naruto lands near Sasuke)
NARUTO: What happened to him?
HASHIRAMA: He suppressed Madara's will completely.
(Everything and everyone is silent)
OBITO: Hmm....HmmmMmmm.... HmmHmmHmmHmm
ALLIANCE: ?!!!
SFX : GROW...MOVE...
(Akamaru barks)
KIBA: Huh? What's that?
(The spikes on the hump grows)
SFX : ZUUUUUU!!! ZUUUUUU!!!
( A bunch of figres emerges out of the hump rapidly with a spray of some fluid)
(The bunch separates out and whips over the sky)
ALLIANCE: ?!!
OBITO: (pants) Huh..Huhhuhhhuhh...
(The tails approaches the ground in pairs)
SFX : BAM!! SLAMM!! SLAMMM!!! BAMM!!! BAMMM!!!
(The five pairs of tails slams on the ground[)
(One slack pair holds the left side of the ground near the left shoulder while one of the slack pair holds the right near the right shoulder)
(The remaining three pairs holds the edge of the ground at back side tightly)
(The two pairs at the front pushes the ground while the three at the back pulls so as to lift the main body of the Juubi)
(Legs starts shaking while attempting to stand by the support of the tails on the feet)
(Puts his leg back and forth to maintain the balance the weight of the body and the tails' to locate the center of gravity)
(Releases the ground and lifts his tails in air)
SASUKE: [ He balanced himself ]
(activates Susano'o)
(The tails moves around)
(Shinobis retreats a little back away from the Jinchuuriki)
(The tails grabs Obito's hands, legs, body at different locations tightly)
NARUTO/SASUKE: ?!!
(The tails stretches the skin like rubber)
OBITO: Aaaaaaa!!!!
(Eyes widened)
(Wind brushing through his hair)
SFX : TRTTTRTTRRRR...
(Cracks appear at various positions on the body due to the pull)
SFX : TRTTTRTTRRRR...TRRRRRR...TRRRRRR
OBITO: AAAAARRRGGHHHHHH!!!!
NARUTO/SASUKE: What the..
(Last panel shows the cracks merge and the skin is taken off from the main body but still held by the hand-shaped tails in air, hiding the chakra-forged final form)
[ One step away from the Moon's Eye.... ]
[ ] : Thoughts
SFX : Sound Effects
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MANGA 638 : JINCHUURIKI HIMSELF
NARUTO: (holding Minato and Sasuke by chakra arms) He blocked Madara's attempt at controlling him.SFX : TAP
(lands on Gamakichi's head)
NARUTO: ....Because this is what he wanted to become from the start....The Juubi's Jinchuuriki!!!!
SFX : CREAK!!! CREAK!!!
(a sound is created as Obito peels off the surrounding white skin from the right part of his face)
MINATO/SASUKE/NARUTO: (looking at Obito's face) ?!!
GAMAKICHI: What kind of monster is that?
SFX : SLAM!!!
(lands on the ground, crushing it)
(a back view of the Juubi)
(Shinobis surrounded on the battlefield witnesses the scene in awe)
(A terror is surfaced on their faces)
(The blocked hand-shaped tails are vanished leaving the ten Gates of God as it is)
(A rough boiling-like surface is shown on Juubi's butt)
SFX : BLOP...BLOP.....BLOP
(The rough boiling-like surface settles down leaving a smooth plain surface)
(A view of the battlefield from the back away from the battlefield and high above the ground is shown)
(Juubi lying on his knees and one hand without tails)
(A circular pyramid like hump with spikes on it)
(The head is shown surrounded by peeled off skin, having horns on the peeled skin, held in right hand of the Juubi)
(Wind brushes through the white hair of the Juubi's head whose only left part is shown open while right part still under the skin held by right hand)
SFX : TRRRR...TRRRRR....THAP..THAP..THAP
(The skin falls on the ground)
(A huge panel showing most of the shinobis in small panels)
INO/SHIKAMARU/CHOUJI: ?!!
HINATA/KIBA/SHINO: ?!!
SAI/SAKURA/TENTEN: ?!!
GAI/LEE/DARUI: ?!!
SHIZUNE/CHOUJURO/KITSUCHI: ?!!
KUROTSUCHI/KANKURO/TEMARI: ?!!
HOKAGES: (holding the barrier) ?!!
NARUTO/MINATO/SASUKE: ?!!
SUIGETSU/KARIN: ?!!
OROCHIMARU: .....
KAGES: (senses while approaching the battlefield on the sand) ?!!
HASHIRAMA: (worried) [ It has reached to its worse... ]
SFX : DIG!!!
(grounds the fan)
MADARA: (gets up holding the fan) Hmm... (sighs) Obito gave me some time to enjoy a fight with you, Hashirama... (smirks) Let the fun begin. [ I'll wait for my turn (an evil glare) ...Obito ]
HASHIRAMA CLONE: What happened to that man, Madara?
MADARA: Huh? He's now Juubi's Jinchuuriki. Juubi has reached it final form...
HASHIRAMA CLONES: ?!!
MADARA: ....The final form of... (focus on rinnegan) ...the Juubi is... (focus on blackened Sharingan) ...the Jinchuuriki himself!
(Panel zooms out showing Obito's half blackened face as the Juubi's head after the skin peels off)
(Shinobis surrounded are looking at Obito's face)
(While the Sharingan turns to Mangekyo Sharingan)
(Huge sized Obito's head blocked by the Gates of God around his neck)
(Body below his neck is covered with Juubi's skin)
(Several black rods pierced in the right side of his face at various places)
(Watery mouth)
(A devilish look in his eyes)
(Raises his head which phases through the horizontal bar of the gate and frees himself)
SFX : SSSHHHHHHH!
(Drags his right hand on the ground)
(Lifts the hand)
SFX : SLAM!!!
(In blink of an eye, slams his right hand on the trio standing on the toad)
(The ground is crushed under the palm of his hand lifting the dust in the air from the sides)
(The ground and the shinobis are shaken by the impact)
SAKURA: Sasukeee!!!
KONOHA 11: Narutoooo!!!
SFX : POOF!!
(A huge cloud of smoke appears outside the barrier's sorner where Minato is holding his position)
(Gamakichi along with the trio appears out of the smoke)
NARUTO: Gahhhh!!!
(crashes on the ground)
SASUKE: (one eye closed due to the crash landing) [ The fourth is quick ] Shit!!
(Jumps off from Gamakichi and manages to hold his ground)
SFX : POOF!!!
(Minato's clone poofs away due to their sudden and crashing teleportation)
(Gamakichi slides on the ground tumbling)
(His sword is thrown in other direction)
NARUTO: Gamakichi!!!
(Gamakichi poofs away)
OBITO: (roars in harsh voice) Wooaaaahhhh!!!!
(hand shivers)
(The Juubi clones dissolves and falls on the ground)
(The surrounding shinobis near the clones alerts and distances themselves)
NARUTO: (confused) What's with that behavior?
MINATO: (looking at Obito's eyes) .....
(Obito's rinnegan moves left-right then right-left)
(He attempts to stand)
MINATO: He's still under the Juubi's control...
NARUTO/SASUKE: .....
MINATO: Look at his feet and hands
(panel shows Obito's hand and leg shivering)
MINATO: He's not able to stand on his legs.
NARUTO: Why dad?
MINATO: Because of the tails.
SASUKE: Might be true. But on what basis? (turns to Minato)
NARUTO: (looking dumb in between genius people) How? (scratches head)
MINATO: Naruto, tail helps to balance a four-legged animal to stand on its back legs. That is one of tail's abilities....without the tails, the Juubi is unable to achieve equilibrium of his body on his back legs.
SASUKE: .....
(remembers his battle with Naruto at the Valley of End. Naruto gets covered with Kyuubi cloak and falls on his hands like a four legged fox when one tail appears)
SASUKE: This is our chance. Lets go!! (dashes towards Obito's location)
MINATO: (looking at "still confused" Naruto) Let it go Naruto. Go ahead.
(Scene changes to the battlefield)
MADARA: [ He's been taken over by the Juubi ]
OBITO: Woaaahhhh!!!
(A panel shows Obito in a colourless dimension which slowly starts turning dark towards Obito)
(remembers)
[
RIN: I'm watching you.
MINATO: Don't give up. We will become Hokage.
OBITO: (while being burried under the piles of rocks) I wanted... to be together with everyone longer....
OBITO: (holding dead Rin in arms) I will create a world where you're alive... [ I will... change the fate... of this world. ]
]
OBITO: [ No... I'm not...giving up. Never!!! ]
(looks at the right hand of the Juubi)
(His vision shakes showing double image of everything he's viewing)
(Multiple transparent images of his head move around the solid one)
SHINOBIS: He's losing control!!
(Obito grabs his head by right hand)
OBITO: Aaarrrrggghhhhh!!!! (screams)
HOKAGES: ?!!
ALLIANCE: ?!!
SASUKE: (reaches at the front) ?!!
SFX : PLUP.....PLUP....PLUP
(White random-sized small irregular spots appear on his blackened face)
(The size of the spots goes on increasing leaving the black rods intact)
OBITO: Aaarggghhh!!! Woaaahhh!! (puts his head on the ground in pain)
(Naruto lands near Sasuke)
NARUTO: What happened to him?
HASHIRAMA: He suppressed Madara's will completely.
(Everything and everyone is silent)
OBITO: Hmm....HmmmMmmm.... HmmHmmHmmHmm
ALLIANCE: ?!!!
SFX : GROW...MOVE...
(Akamaru barks)
KIBA: Huh? What's that?
(The spikes on the hump grows)
SFX : ZUUUUUU!!! ZUUUUUU!!!
( A bunch of figres emerges out of the hump rapidly with a spray of some fluid)
(The bunch separates out and whips over the sky)
ALLIANCE: ?!!
OBITO: (pants) Huh..Huhhuhhhuhh...
(The tails approaches the ground in pairs)
SFX : BAM!! SLAMM!! SLAMMM!!! BAMM!!! BAMMM!!!
(The five pairs of tails slams on the ground[)
(One slack pair holds the left side of the ground near the left shoulder while one of the slack pair holds the right near the right shoulder)
(The remaining three pairs holds the edge of the ground at back side tightly)
(The two pairs at the front pushes the ground while the three at the back pulls so as to lift the main body of the Juubi)
(Legs starts shaking while attempting to stand by the support of the tails on the feet)
(Puts his leg back and forth to maintain the balance the weight of the body and the tails' to locate the center of gravity)
(Releases the ground and lifts his tails in air)
SASUKE: [ He balanced himself ]
(activates Susano'o)
(The tails moves around)
(Shinobis retreats a little back away from the Jinchuuriki)
(The tails grabs Obito's hands, legs, body at different locations tightly)
NARUTO/SASUKE: ?!!
(The tails stretches the skin like rubber)
OBITO: Aaaaaaa!!!!
(Eyes widened)
(Wind brushing through his hair)
SFX : TRTTTRTTRRRR...
(Cracks appear at various positions on the body due to the pull)
SFX : TRTTTRTTRRRR...TRRRRRR...TRRRRRR
OBITO: AAAAARRRGGHHHHHH!!!!
NARUTO/SASUKE: What the..
(Last panel shows the cracks merge and the skin is taken off from the main body but still held by the hand-shaped tails in air, hiding the chakra-forged final form)
[ One step away from the Moon's Eye.... ]
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