My first manga coloring attempt xD (Fail)

Klad

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Loool .

Though you're a beginner , it's bad . XD
 

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Errors are as follows:

- Madara's eyes are supposed to be a shade a violet

- Madara should be a darker tone

- Madara's armor should be a darker toe

- Minato's kunai shouldn't be almost completely red

- Minato shouldn't be so yellow, more yellow-orange

- Everything isn't colored in

- Hashirama's wood clone isn't white it's brown

- The background needs some work

- Tobirama looks like a monkey

 

OfficialRikudouSennin

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Errors are as follows:

- Madara's eyes are supposed to be a shade a violet

- Madara should be a darker tone

- Madara's armor should be a darker toe

- Minato's kunai shouldn't be almost completely red

- Minato shouldn't be so yellow, more yellow-orange

- Everything isn't colored in

- Hashirama's wood clone isn't white it's brown

- The background needs some work

- Tobirama looks like a monkey


nooffense but im not into all detail I said I failed ok?
 

ismael

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It is a good drawing and there is room for improvement.
 
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