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Re: Suiton with Oasis Nara

Urasan: When I said "overpower", that was my bad (I was on my phone and was in a rush).
If the weapons where to collide, the metallic one would possibly lose it fire aura or, the flames wouldn't be effective.

*Both brothers focus chakra into their right hands and begin to knead chakra with nature transformation. Slowly but surely, the water released from their hands begins to take on the appearance of a standard katana. Now, with one in their hands, the brothers proceed to swing the swords around, but find that they are not as sharp as a metallic weapon.​
 
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Re: Suiton with Oasis Nara

Urasan: When I said "overpower", that was my bad (I was on my phone and was in a rush).
If the weapons where to collide, the metallic one would possibly lose it fire aura or, the flames wouldn't be effective.

*Both brothers focus chakra into their right hands and begin to knead chakra with nature transformation. Slowly but surely, the water released from their hands begins to take on the appearance of a standard katana. Now, with one in their hands, the brothers proceed to swing the swords around, but find that they are not as sharp as a metallic weapon.​
Now you need to release water chakra from your arm to create a water shield to protect you from my kunais. Try it.

-Throws 2 kunais-

( Suiton: Junsai no Jutsu ) - Water
Release: Water Shield Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will
manipulate their water chakra and
releasing it from their arm which is
held outwards infront of them and
they then create a shield of water
that can aide in defence against
projectile weapons and close combat
techniques.
 

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*Seeing two incoming kunai, the brothers take a single leap backwards (one meter) whilst recalling senpai's instructions. Quickly, they stream chakra into their right arms and then just as rapidly, they release the chakra from their arms. The newly expelled water (thanks to nature transformation) manifests in the form of a small shield for each brother. As soon as the shields are formed, the brothers proceed to block the incoming kunai with their newfound shields of water.*​

Strong points:
  • It can be quickly made and provides protection against metallic projectiles and low-level forms of taijutsu.
Weak points:
  • The shields are small and if enough weapons are thrown, the user may have trouble blocking the attack.
Combinations-strategies:
  • It can be used well in freeform, in collaboration with punches and kicks.
Ways to counter this technique:
  • Tools infused with lightning or wind chakra can still pierce the shields.
 

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*Seeing two incoming kunai, the brothers take a single leap backwards (one meter) whilst recalling senpai's instructions. Quickly, they stream chakra into their right arms and then just as rapidly, they release the chakra from their arms. The newly expelled water (thanks to nature transformation) manifests in the form of a small shield for each brother. As soon as the shields are formed, the brothers proceed to block the incoming kunai with their newfound shields of water.*​

Strong points:
  • It can be quickly made and provides protection against metallic projectiles and low-level forms of taijutsu.
Weak points:
  • The shields are small and if enough weapons are thrown, the user may have trouble blocking the attack.
Combinations-strategies:
  • It can be used well in freeform, in collaboration with punches and kicks.
Ways to counter this technique:
  • Tools infused with lightning or wind chakra can still pierce the shields.
Congrats! ,You have completed your D rank jutsus.
Do you have any doubts?
 

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Urasan: No senpai, we are ready to proceed to the next set of techniques!​
Now channel your chakra into the water and manipulate it using shape manipulation to create a water shark that would jump out of it and attack my clone.

-creates a clone that stands near the water source-

Remember: Detailed description.

(Suiton: Suikōtoppa) – Water
Release: Water Shark Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra cost 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a
water shark to jump into the air and
bolt towards the opponent, striking
them.
Note: Requires a water source.
 

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*Upon senpai's instructions, Urasan and Saki proceed to stream their chakra into the water in their immediate vicinity. Keeping in mind that the water needs to look like a shark, the brothers focus deeply on an illustration they had seen a while back and proceed to apply shape manipulation to the chakra-infused water. Within a brief moment, the water bursts upwards and just as suddenly, takes on the appearance of a shark before plowing into senpai's clone.*​

Strong points:
  • It can be used to strike an enemy who is behind a small barricade/defense.
Weak points:
  • When it rises upwards, that window of time gives the enemy a chance to prepare a counter.
Combinations-strategies:
  • Saki could place his hands on the water source and use (Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique to make waves/blasts to distract the enemy whilst Urasan uses the jutsu to strike from a different angle/elevation.
Ways to counter this technique:
  • Earthen barricades of D-rank and up, when tall enough, can negate the technique.
 

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*Upon senpai's instructions, Urasan and Saki proceed to stream their chakra into the water in their immediate vicinity. Keeping in mind that the water needs to look like a shark, the brothers focus deeply on an illustration they had seen a while back and proceed to apply shape manipulation to the chakra-infused water. Within a brief moment, the water bursts upwards and just as suddenly, takes on the appearance of a shark before plowing into senpai's clone.*​

Strong points:
  • It can be used to strike an enemy who is behind a small barricade/defense.
Weak points:
  • When it rises upwards, that window of time gives the enemy a chance to prepare a counter.
Combinations-strategies:
  • Saki could place his hands on the water source and use (Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique to make waves/blasts to distract the enemy whilst Urasan uses the jutsu to strike from a different angle/elevation.
Ways to counter this technique:
  • Earthen barricades of D-rank and up, when tall enough, can negate the technique.
Good.

Now perform these handseals *show handseals* and channel your chakra into your hand to create a long whip. You can use this whip to attack your opponent in verious ways. You can also channel your lightening chakra to make it deadly. Try it on my clone.

*create clone*

(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release:
Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs
a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog
→ Ox, the user creates a whip of
water that can be used to strike the
opponent with a lashing action or
wrap around the target to bind
them. This technique can also have
lightning techniques channeled
through when they have bound their
victim with the water whip.
 

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Urasan: Rat → Dog → Ox? Remember them well brother.
Saki: Oi, oi. This time I didn't need you to remind me...

*Without moving from where they preformed the last technique, the brothers proceed to make the three hand-seals that senpai demonstrated and begin kneading chakra into their right hands. After an exceptionally brief moment passes, the brothers release their chakra, now in the form of water, and proceed to apply shape manipulation to the water. Almost immediately, two long whips manifests from the water and are then swung at senpai. Urasan's whip finds itself wrapped around the clone's right arm whilst Saki's whip is wrapped around the clone's left leg, restraining the clone.*​

Strong points:
  • It has exceptional range, at least when compared to other water techniques of the same level.
Weak points:
  • Raiton streaming works both ways; that means that the enemy can also flow their chakra into the whips.
Combinations-strategies:
  • Saki could place his hands on the water source and use (Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique to make waves/blasts to distract the enemy whilst Urasan uses the jutsu to restrain the enemy for a follow-up.
Ways to counter this technique:
  • Earthen barricades of D-rank and up, when tall enough, can negate the technique.
  • Lightning techniques can make using this technique quite the risky move.
 

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Re: Suiton with Oasis Nara

Very nice indeed.

Now, one of the most interesting jutsus.
You form these handseals and spew out a highly viscous chakra enhanced fluid that has sticky property. If used directly, the opponent can be immobilised.
Try it.

(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) -
Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture
Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After
performing the required hand seals
Ram → Tiger spits out high-viscosity,
chakra infused water, aimed at a
surface of wide scope. This is a
stream of sticky liquid which can be
used to form an adhesive trap that
can inhibit a person's mobility. One
can effectively reduce their enemy's
area of activity with this technique,
and has the effect of being able to
take complete control over the
battlefield. The normal scope of this
technique is normally just a few
metres, but if prepared, it is also
possible to make an entire pond of
starch syrup. Being caught in the
technique can be avoided by
channelling chakra to one's feet
allowing one to walk upon it
uninhibited, beforehand.
 

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*Both brothers release their whips and proceed to make the Ram hand-seal immediately followed by the Tiger hand-seal whilst kneading chakra in their throats. After a brief moment, the brothers expel their chakra, now converted to high-viscosity, chakra infused water which lands in the clone's immediate vicinity. Soon after, the clone will find himself unable to move freely, so long as he fails to knead chakra into his feet before touching the sticky liquid.*​

Strong points:
  • Its range can be altered according to the user's techniques.
Weak points:
  • The technique is quite obvious and because it doesn't directly strike the opponent, may be negated.
Combinations-strategies:
  • After using the jutsu, Saki can stream Raiton through the liquid.
Ways to counter this technique:
  • Earthen barricades of D-rank and up, when tall enough, can negate the technique.
  • Simply kneading chakra in one's feet is enough to negate the entrapment caused by the jutsu
 

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*Both brothers release their whips and proceed to make the Ram hand-seal immediately followed by the Tiger hand-seal whilst kneading chakra in their throats. After a brief moment, the brothers expel their chakra, now converted to high-viscosity, chakra infused water which lands in the clone's immediate vicinity. Soon after, the clone will find himself unable to move freely, so long as he fails to knead chakra into his feet before touching the sticky liquid.*​

Strong points:
  • Its range can be altered according to the user's techniques.
Weak points:
  • The technique is quite obvious and because it doesn't directly strike the opponent, may be negated.
Combinations-strategies:
  • After using the jutsu, Saki can stream Raiton through the liquid.
Ways to counter this technique:
  • Earthen barricades of D-rank and up, when tall enough, can negate the technique.
  • Simply kneading chakra in one's feet is enough to negate the entrapment caused by the jutsu
Good.

Now channel your water chakra throughout your body and release it just near you, to create a clone which has the same property as that of water. It has only 1/10th the chakra so it can perform only C rank water techniques. Create it.

(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Release:
Water Clone
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the
Tiger hand seal the user creates a
clone of themselves made of water.
These water clones have 1/10th of
the users chakra. These clones are
also limited in that they can only
travel short range from the user
without losing control. When a water
clone take enough damage they
revert back to normal water.
Note: Can only perform up to C rank
Water techniques and requires a
water source.
 

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*Still standing in knee-deep water, the brothers proceed to make the tiger hand-seal and start to knead chakra. After a brief moment, the brothers begin to channel their chakra into the water in their immediate vicinity. Just as quickly, some of the water begins to rise up and rapidly assumes the appearances of both brothers, making two clones out of water.*​

Strong points:
  • Though weak, the clone(s) can serve as a distraction or be used for an ambush.
Weak points:
  • The description itself lists several negatives.
Combinations-strategies:
  • After using the jutsu, Saki can stream Raiton through the liquid.
Ways to counter this technique:
  • Most elemental techniques above C-rank can overpower the clone(s).

 

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*Still standing in knee-deep water, the brothers proceed to make the tiger hand-seal and start to knead chakra. After a brief moment, the brothers begin to channel their chakra into the water in their immediate vicinity. Just as quickly, some of the water begins to rise up and rapidly assumes the appearances of both brothers, making two clones out of water.*​

Strong points:
  • Though weak, the clone(s) can serve as a distraction or be used for an ambush.
Weak points:
  • The description itself lists several negatives.
Combinations-strategies:
  • After using the jutsu, Saki can stream Raiton through the liquid.
Ways to counter this technique:
  • Most elemental techniques above C-rank can overpower the clone(s).

You're lacking description again!

Ok, now manipulate the water from the source to make a liquid mass to come at hit my clone. Compress the water to form a spinning vortex characterised mass of water.

-crate a clone-

(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water
Release: Water Fang Bullet
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A technique that deals
physical damage to the enemy with
a liquid mass brought forth from
underwater. Its power to kill and
maim is augmented by adding a
spinning motion to the compactly
pressured water. During fights on
water, taking advantage of its
characteristic ability to attack from
anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in
conjunction with other techniques
for distraction, confusion and so
forth, this technique has an
extensive array of applications.
Note: Requires a water source.
 

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Apologies, sometimes I'm a bit out of it when I reply. I'll do my best to keep the descriptions well-detailed.

*Urasan and Saki reach for two kunai each and throw them, then, they begin to knead their chakra into the water in their vicinity. As the chakra reaches the water around senpai's unsuspecting clone, it begins to accumulate into six moderately-sized clusters; three belonging to each of the brothers but all appearing from behind. As the chakra becomes focused, the water begins to rotate with significant speed before exploding upwards, towards the clone, whilst maintaining its drill-like spinning. As each of the blows connect, the clone finds itself brutally maimed before exploding into a of smoke.*​

Strong points:
  • It can be used to take an opponent by surprise and for them to divide their focus.
Weak points:
  • It requires a preexisting body of water.
Combinations-strategies:
  • After any jutsu or attack that can be used as a distraction.
Ways to counter this technique:
  • Wind Release: Wind Stream / Water Style: Water Encampment Wall
 
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Apologies, sometimes I'm a bit out of it when I reply. I'll do my best to keep the descriptions well-detailed.

*Urasan and Saki reach for two kunai each and throw them, then, they begin to knead their chakra into the water in their vicinity. As the chakra reaches the water around senpai's unsuspecting clone, it begins to accumulate into six moderately-sized clusters; three belonging to each of the brothers but all appearing from behind. As the chakra becomes focused, the water begins to rotate with significant speed before exploding upwards, towards the clone, whilst maintaining its drill-like spinning. As each of the blows connect, the clone finds itself brutally maimed before exploding into a of smoke.*​

Strong points:
  • It can be used to take an opponent by surprise and for them to divide their focus.
Weak points:
  • It requires a preexisting body of water.
Combinations-strategies:
  • After any jutsu or attack that can be used as a distraction.
Ways to counter this technique:
  • Wind Release: Wind Stream / Water Style: Water Encampment Wall
How can you use water encampment wall to defend??
 

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How can you use water encampment wall to defend??
Urasan: Well, I suppose that one would need to have either the Sharingan or remarkably fast reflexes.
Saki: Sometimes, we like to include counters that may not be so prevalent, that's about it.
Urasan: Yes, it's inevitable that we will eventually have to face a member of the Uchiha clan.​
 
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Urasan: Well, I suppose that one would need to have either the Sharingan or remarkably fast reflexes.
Saki: Sometimes, we like to include counters that may not be so prevalent, that's about it.
Urasan: Yes, it's inevitable that we will eventually have to face a member of the Uchiha clan.​
Water encampment wall protects you from 4 sides. But it doesn't say anything about protecting you from below.
 

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*Shrugs* That's how Kakashi countered it in the manga.​
That's correct. But if you remember, Itachi attacked him from the sides, not directly under him. In our RP, no one actually attacks from the sides, everyone goes for the blind spot.
 
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