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(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Performing chidori in mid air the user releases all of the lightning chakra within the chidori to create a Giant Thunder bolt that can be shot at the opponent.

Perform the chidori in mid-air. Then release all the lighting chakra within the chidori to create a giant thunderbolt, that you will send towards my clone.

-Create clone.-
 

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(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Performing chidori in mid air the user releases all of the lightning chakra within the chidori to create a Giant Thunder bolt that can be shot at the opponent.

Perform the chidori in mid-air. Then release all the lighting chakra within the chidori to create a giant thunderbolt, that you will send towards my clone.

-Create clone.-

*I begin by kneading a large amount of chakra and channeling a large portion of it to my dominant, right hand; I focus all the gathered energy into the palm of my hand and materialize it in the form of condensed lightning - a Chidori. Afterwards, I sprint forward at full speed towards your clone; At the moment I close a quarter of the distance between us, an earthen pillar rises from the earth from beneath the heel of my right foot, allowing me to launch myself a fair distance into the air. Once in the air, I feed the remaining amount of gathered chakra into the chidori in a quick burst, sending the chidori flying in the form of a projectile lightning bolt and eventually piercing your clone through his chest.*

Pro:This is a powerful, long ranged projectile version of the chidori technique.

Con: The user has to be in midair to use this technique, according to the description.
 

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(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.

Okay with this, this is just a bigger chidori, pretty much just a lot more chakra and refine it.
 

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(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.

Okay with this, this is just a bigger chidori, pretty much just a lot more chakra and refine it.

Arigato

As I did earlier, I begin by kneading a large amount of chakra and channeling it to my dominant, right hand. After a little while, when I mold the necessary amounts of chakra, I drastically increase the vibrating frequencies of my chakra in order to generate lightning in the palm of my hand. I proceed to form a layer of regular chakra around the crackling electricity in order to compress and maintain and compress the chakra. It's at that moment that I give it a bit more juice and add more chakra to the jutsu, all the while keeping it compressed. The color of the lighting in my hand goes from blue to near white, noticeably more powerful. Once finished, I rush towards your clone and force the lightning cutter through the center of his chest, causing him to dissipate.*

Pro:It's a more powerful version of the already powerful chidori technique. It can literally, effortlessly cut your opponent in two.

Con: It's limited to short range @_@. I'm not really sure if it has any real cons, since it's an improved version of the chidori. If this is an unacceptable response, I'll try to dig deeper.
 

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( Raiton: Kaminari no Ako ) - Lightning Release: Thunder Fall
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user whilst in the air will drop down on their target with a lightning-charged hand strike. This jutsu is a weaker version of the Lightning Cutter.
Note: Must know Lightning Cutter.

Okay get up into the air, then make a weaker version of the lighting blade and drop down on my clone.

-Creates clone.-
 

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( Raiton: Kaminari no Ako ) - Lightning Release: Thunder Fall
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user whilst in the air will drop down on their target with a lightning-charged hand strike. This jutsu is a weaker version of the Lightning Cutter.
Note: Must know Lightning Cutter.

Okay get up into the air, then make a weaker version of the lighting blade and drop down on my clone.

-Creates clone.-

*I begin by kneading my chakra and channeling a majority of it to my right hand. Once I feel I've gathered enough chakra, I jump into the air in such a way that I would eventually land/pounce on your clone. While in the air, I compress and simultaneously, excite the chakra gathered at the palm of my hand, increasing its vibrating frequencies and generating lightning. However, the jutsu is a 'lesser' form of the lightning cutter, with less chakra imbued than usual. Just as I drop over your clone, I drive the charged lightning strike into his back form behind.*

Pro:The user can drop down on and surprise the enemy if used correctly (For example - In a similar fashion to when Naruto killed the Naraka path of pain).

Con: The crackling of lightning would probably give away the users position if used in the way mentioned above.
 

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(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Lightning blade and splits it in two, then zigzags at the opponent and finishes by slamming them with lightning Cutter.

Perform the lighting cutter, split it into two, then zigzag at my clone and then slam him into the ground using the lighting cutters.
 

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(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Lightning blade and splits it in two, then zigzags at the opponent and finishes by slamming them with lightning Cutter.

Perform the lighting cutter, split it into two, then zigzag at my clone and then slam him into the ground using the lighting cutters.

*As I did previously with the Lightning Blade technique, I begin by kneading an exceptional amount of chakra; This time however, instead of channeling it solely to my right hand, I distribute the chakra evenly among both hands, concentrating the chakra in the area just above each of my palms. I continue to accumulate chakra until I feel it's sufficient (until I gather enough to generate lightning in both hands), at which point I excite my chakra and generate lightning in both of my hands in the form of a concentrated lightning blade. Once I finish that, I rapidly charge and zig-zag towards your clone slamming one lighnting blade after the other into him, before violently killing him .-.*

Pro: It's a more advanced / powerful form of the already powerful lightning blade technique; It boats high offensive ability.

Con: Same as with an ordinary Lightning Blade, this technique is somewhat limited in range; I'd also imagine that, if one managed to stop the initial assault, the technique would fail to be effective - Or at least as effective as it could have been (You wouldn't be able to zig-zag and what not).
 

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Good job mate!

(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.

Perform the hand seals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger then gather your raiton chakra all around your body, then create from your body a blinding light.
 

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Good job mate!

(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.

Perform the hand seals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger then gather your raiton chakra all around your body, then create from your body a blinding light.

Lol I like your signature

*I begin by kneading large amounts of chakra, channeling it all throughout my body. It's then that I remember that light is just electromagnetic radiation on a spectrum visible to people, and knowing that, I should be able to release my chakra in the form of light. When I feel that I've molded enough chakra, I begin releasing it into the area around me from every pore on my body; Unlike most forms of lightning release, because of the nature of this technique, this time around, it'll be safe for me to mold the electricity internally. Afterwards, I perform the string of handseals that I previously memorized, and I release all of the gathered energy in the form of light - A bright light that emanates from my body and near immediately illuminates the entire area around me.*

Pro:This technique can be used to blind people and distract your opponent, serving as a good way to set up for your next attack.

Con: The opponent can defend against this technique and avoid blindness by simply avoiding the use of their eyes the moment the light begins to emanate - Although it still means temporarily giving up their sight, it would mean they could still use their eyes whenever they wanted when the light faded.
 

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Hehe, thank you. ^^

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

Create a chidori then manipulate it to spread from your palm into lighting bolts that cover a circular area.
 

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Hehe, thank you. ^^

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

Create a chidori then manipulate it to spread from your palm into lighting bolts that cover a circular area.

*I begin by kneading a large amount of chakra and channeling it to my dominant right hand. After a brief few moments pass, when I mold the necessary amounts of chakra, I drastically increase the vibrating frequencies of my chakra in order to generate lightning in the palm of my hand. Instead of keeping the lightning compressed however, I give the technique some more juice by pumping additional chakra into the lightning. Unable to maintain its original form around my hand due the the lack of 'restraint' the lightning begins to rapidly spread away from my palm, encompassing and destroying a majority of the area in front of me out to mid range.*

Pro: This technique is generally powerful and can be used to level a majority of impeding objects like for example, the great stone golem.

Con: As said before this technique is generally powerful, so there isn't much of a clear weakness, however I would say that the possibility of electrocution on the user's part might be a con. For example, if the opponent was able to avoid the technique and drop water on you in some way. But other than that I'm not too sure :x
 

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Well done, I do like that con. Correct.

Do you know the shadow clone technique?
 

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Thank you. ^_^

That's a shame.

(Raiton: Chidori Shinsō) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.

Make a chidori, then dash at my clone, as you get close to my clone, use shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales my clone and hurtles him into the air, then you will increase the potency of the lighting, creating a powerful explosion at the end of the spear, sending my clone back down to the ground.
 

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*I begin by kneading large amounts of chakra, channeling it to my right hand and concentrating it there. When I've gathered a sufficient amount of energy, I excite my chakra, increasing its vibrating frequencies and generating focused lightning in my hand. In conjunction with manifesting the lightning I coat it in a layer of ordinary chakra so that it will conform to my will and shape easily. And that's when I run, dashing straight towards your clone. While maintaining a constant feed of chakra into the chidori, I'm extending it into spear at an impressive speed. The spear pierces your clones chest at which point I hurtle I'm into the air. Once in the air, I concentrate and channel a quick burst of additional chakra through the lightning which results in the finishing electric explosion. Your clone dissipates afterwards.*

Pro: It can be extended to reach and pierce an enemy out to mid range, and has that extra kick that the ordinary chidori spear doesn't

Con: I assume it's like the original Chidori in that it's easy to see your way through and evade the strike seeing as your bound to certain mannerisms when using it.
 
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(Raiton: Raikiri Nirentotsu) - Lightning Cutter Two Sequential Crashes
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user first creates a slightly larger Lightning Cutter than usual with both hands, but then quickly grasps the lighning and pulls it apart into two hands. They then charge at the enemy with one Lightning Cutter, uppercutting the enemy into the air. Then the user appears above the enemy and releases all the lighting into the enemy, charging down with them in a giant cyclone of lightning.

Create a slightly larger lighting cutter then usual using both your hands, then grasps the lighting and pull it apart into your hands, then change at my clone, uppercutting it with one of the lighting cutters, then as he is in the air. Appear above my clone, release all the lighting into him, charging down them into a giant cyclone of lighting.
 

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Alright perform the last technique and what have you.
 
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