Haha, the next chapter is going to blow your socks off by its insanity, haha xD Can't wait to show you and the restNice chapter once again. Perfect balance of fight,talk and use of mind in fights. Plus Sage is just GOD. How??? Titans come back again,naruto should be dead by seeing them again =D
Length is just okkk for me, neither short nor long. All fight scenes are nicely done but its really hard to get that where are they fightingin air?? or in water?? or on earth
And once again,why didnt naruto use rinnegan powers???? At that ice cube place i thought noe he will use shinara tensei. Didnt like much that sage just break through kabuto's control just for this movement but its fine, its acceptable
Dont know what was that sage's technique but it was so powerful that killed all titans in one shot and they way naruto used it against sage himself was awesome, loved it
And then, all went useless
Naruto's attack on sage with rasenshuriken was nice.
2nd half is almost full of flashback and talk so nothing much to review about it but i'm getting a feel that naruto is going to get all sage's power or going to summon titans himself..... dont know what are you planning but make it epic
One thing i wanted to ask in last chapter, who is more powerful???? Jubi or titans??? Sage controlled jubi and sealed it. Did he use titans to defeat jubi??? or he got titans after jubi defeated???? Little confused about it.
Overall nice chapter,story/fights are going great. Great work as usual, Keep it up
Everywhere, haha. This dimension has a massive vast sea, surrounded by several islands with great forests and high mountains. So yeah, they fight up in the air, down on the ground and onto the sea through this one I believe...
Naruto is still a newbi when it comes to his Rinnegan powers, the Jubi even said so itself back in chapter 7;
" Jubi: [...] Like I said before, this took a lot of time, so don't expect to be able to use all of this new powers in no time... For now, you can forget using the seven paths of the Rinnegan, but it should still have greatly enhanced your vision..."
Although, this was some time ago, and Naruto actually uses his first Rinnegan power in the next chapter
Think you're going to be surprised about his smart, haha And checking back on chapter 7 has reminded me of something I need to refer to in Chapter 21...About the Titans and the Jubi... Honestly?? Even I don't know all the details, haha, but the Jubi said that the Sage used his Six Treasured Tools and the Legendary Sword to defeat and seal him away into his body in Chapter 7... Like I mentioned earlier (or perhaps that's in the Author's note of the next chapter??), I'm trying to keep as much as I can about the Sage secret, to leave some to the imagination of the reader, but also because I'm going to do a FF about the SoSP's life, and I can't really show everything here in this FF because of it (got to have something left to write about, haha). The Jubi kind of summed up the short version of what that FF will be about to Naruto in Chapter 7, so I'm going to borrow a lot from there, as well as incorporating how the Sage met the Giant Toad and the other Titans at Mt. Myo, and how he created the Great Toad Sage. It actually might become quite a lengthy FF in the end, only time will tell
I've planned for 8-12 chapters as of now though.I will, glad you enjoyed it ^_^
You pretty much covered all the good point I had to show in this chapter =pThis chapter started out as critical as I thought I would. Naruto has had to evade everything rather than fighting back. This quote in the narration; "Using his pure willpower to break free" reminded me of several debates I had in the past about how willpower wasn't logical in the Narutoverse lol I liked that Naruto nearly died and was saved via Rikudou’s regaining consciousness. It was a brilliant idea by Naruto to use Hiraishin no Jutsu in the last moment that way it backfired. I loved when Kabuto raged-it was an epic moment! XD Okay, all 9 Titans re-appearing as if nothing had ever happened seemed unbelievable. It took everything out of Naruto and his summonings to overcome them and they’re back-that is shocking! lol So, an underestimating Kabuto revealed the secret more or less behind this dimension and thus lies the answer. I think the way to overcome this would be for Naruto to somehow cancel out this genjutsu-like reality. Well, he was finally able to land a direct effective blow to the Rikudou and it was surprising. The flashback was necessary therefore us readers wouldn't remain in the dark about Naruto’s power-up. I liked the ending as Naruto gained an enhanced form of Bijuu Mode, the two elder frogs attained a new cool weapon and he seemed to have a new found resolve to continue the fight. Overall wonderful chapter my friend and I wonder how the fight will proceed ^^
About your author’s notes:
I will have to step up myself to read/reply before each release as for this chapter I’m behind.
It was nice of you to comment about the 9/10 Titans-I didn’t even know but I do know lol
A Rikudou Sennin FF hmm... very interesting. Maybe you've commented about it before and if so I've obviously forgotten -_- However, as surprised as I am about that-I’m looking forward to see what you have in store for that story and good luck
Good to hear that I'm still able to pull FF off after all these years, haha
^_^Glad you liked it bro, stay tuned for the next one!
Yep, see above for more details on the upcoming FF
