Finally something more than "Good job" and "Great Chapter"!! =p I like a little criticism from time to time to both improve and to create discussion.Nothing much to comment in this chapter....
It was more of dialogues and less of any action. But it was good to have such a get-together after so many fight chapters (previous).
The technicality was a bit off....cuz if you see, yin-yang is not considered to be an element its just two types of chakra. Earth, wind and water related to the yin part, while lightening and fire to the yang. But again, its a story so keep your brains aside and just enjoy I guess eh?
I felt Tobirama's and Madara's dialogues could've been better. Also, I felt Orochimaru's character lacked wisdom and that no importance was given to him lol. Hashirama was too good. The jutsus used were very good as well. Jiraiya had the best dialogues....short and precise....matching his character.
Its was good you sealed up only 1 character....dunno maybe sealing 4-5 characters at one may have spoiled the fun
But overall a good chapter. Good work!!
First of all, Yin/Yang/Yin-Yang is not a non-elemental release, you're right about that, but it's still part of the nature transformation (Light and Dark Release/Style). What part of the chapter were you referring to btw?? Here's from Naruto.wikia:
" Yin and Yang
Aside from the five basic types of nature transformation, there is also a sixth type: the Yin (陰, In), the basis of imagination and spiritual energy, used to perform Yin Release (陰遁, Inton); and the Yang (陽, Yō), the basis of vitality and physical energy, used to perform Yang Release (陽遁, Yōton). Together, they are used to perform Yin–Yang Release (陰陽遁, Onmyōton). Yamato implied that the Yin and Yang are the source of non-elemental techniques such as the Shadow Imitation Technique, Multi-Size Technique, medical ninjutsu, genjutsu, etc.[7]
The transformation of the Yin and Yang seemingly has to do with altering the amounts of and balance between spiritual and physical energy in chakra. As explained by Shikamaru Nara, Tayuya's spirit worms were forms of spiritual energy that have small amounts of physical energy, thus they require stability and feed upon the physical energy they lack. Shikamaru also mentioned that Tayuya was the same type of ninja as he is, being able to use such kinds of "special chakra" in battle, supporting the belief that the Nara clan's shadow-based techniques are also Yin and Yang-based."
That's the problem with having too many characters on screen at the same time... Some of them are bound to say less, and for the sake of the story/story-telling, I may have had to go a bit out of character with some of them. But basically, I'm not perfect, which is a good thing, haha =p
Thanks mate ^_^
