naruto 635 prediction

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name: you are the one i was looking for


oru: tsunade seems like you are on a bad shape...

[the same i can say for the rest of the kages, the should have know they dont have a chance against uchiha madara]

tsunade: oru.... what... are you... doing here

oru: hehehe long story... uzumaki karin sensed your chakra and i wanted to come and see you that all...

tsunade: that chakra... what am i sensing what is going on at the battlefield 4 those moment (lol secret commercial XD)

oruchimaru: the ten tails have been revived by uchiha madara....

tsunade: what? than we all lost...

oruchimaru: well not exactly... the jubi isnt have its full power yet... the nine tails and the eight tails havent been captured yet...so i used the edo tensei jutsu to revive the previous hokage... right now they are fighting the jubi and madara...

(scene change to the battlefield)

naruto: we did it sasuke... look the other monsters are starting to barn too

sasuke: yes this is all over... sense the main body have been burn the other monsters will end up just like him soon.

[with out the first hokage seal that jutsu wouldn't even scratch that thing]

madara: you got a nice pair uchiha.... so young yet so powerful what are you doing with them? you should join me and i will give you all the power you want... i can see the darkness in your eyes... the seek for vengeance you are an avenger...

sasuke: by coming to you and help you win i will ruin everything my brother have wished for... i will become the next hokage and change the village...

shikamaru: i never thought i will said this but sasuke might really have changed...

sakura: sasuke...

naruto: haaa sasukeeee if you want to become hokage you have to beat me first

kiba: and me too!

K11: shut up kiba!

sasuke:( hmmmm seems like im starting to get their trust...)

madara: well than if you are not going to turn off the black flame i will...

hashirama: what make you thing we will let you do that

[tobirama,hiruzan,hashirama,minato jumps in front of him]

madara: you wont let me that all the fun... shirna tensei

[all the 4 got hit]

tobirama: the rinngan? those are the sage eyes only some one who have both of our DNA can get this power... NO it cant be!

madara: hahahahhhahahahaha hashirama you cant stop me with my currect power...

[madara use his EMS to cancel the black flames]

sasuke: this is going to be harder than i though... we have to take care of uchiha madara if we want to successfully hit the jubi without being disturb...

[the jubi starts to get crazy]

jubi: ghaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

the earth is shaking

fodders: what is going on here? run!!!!

[the jubi starting to grow and the seal is starting to break]

madara: the fight have just begin hashirama...

(scene change back to tsunade and oruchimaru)

[karin healed tsunade by using her special medical jutsu]

karin: you were very lucky you know

suigetsu: well... she is blessed with those huge...

karin: shut up suigetsu!@@#!$

tsunade: without katsuyu i would have been dead... (seems like sakura needed her at the battlefield she might have used my byakugu already)

tsunade: buy why would you help us in this war...?

oruchimaru: well you see... i work under uchiha sasuke now since he and i have the same motive...

tsunade: and that will be?

[oruchimaru make a hole on tsunade chest]

oruchimaru: hehehehehe to kill the elders for all they have dont to me... and to him!

tsunade: oru..chi...maru.....

(tsunade collapse)

oruchimaru: but first im going to need your body tsunade...

(oruchimaru use the body replacement jutsu on her)

tsunade/oru: hmhmhmhmhm finally i have the power of a senju... and the title hokage...
karin i want you to heal all the others while they are still collapse and get out of here as fast as you can...
im taking the kages to the battlefield hehehehehe.

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It was ok. Needs some work but meh. The part with tsunade and oro was pretty bad considering that he technically already has a senju body along with his own (zetsu). And if katsuyu already healed her. Karin wouldnt need to. And im pretty sure they dont wanna kill the elders... Just think about more stuff before u make predictions
 

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i know but its really hard to cover so many plot holes...

im not kishi you know i dont like the story of naruto at this currect moment so i dont know how to cover everyting... i think it will make a lot of sense that they aim to the elders cause oruchimaru have a motive to attack the village on part 1 if you remember (we dont know what the motive is tho)

i do have my own original manga that im currectly writing but my drawing level is not so good so i have hard time drawing it
 

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and he have senju DNA ok but he dont have the chakra to use it properly and with a senju body he might be able to use it the way he wants too
 
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Well to be frank with you love the creativity and originality of the concept gotta hand it to you pal *thumbs up* but I seem to recall sasuke saying that his brothers sacrifice would not go to waste and him doing what you said Orochimaru n him are planningwould not just be goingagainst his brothers wish it would also be. Disrepcting his death
 

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Fail. Orochimaru is sadist, but he wouldn't kill Tsunade with cold blood.
 

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Horrible, she wouldn't be able to summon katsuya if Tsunade had her. Also katsuya was not concerned about tsunade's well being so she is probably already done healing the kage and herself. But shes probably gone back to her old form. If it was serious katsuya would have addressed that immidiately.
 

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Horrible, she wouldn't be able to summon katsuya if Tsunade had her. Also katsuya was not concerned about tsunade's well being so she is probably already done healing the kage and herself. But shes probably gone back to her old form. If it was serious katsuya would have addressed that immidiately.

last chapter confirmed it was katsuya... and kishi have too many plot holes i cant fill
 

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yep... she have to die or explain how some one will be titled as hokage...

Simply 3rd hokage and 4th hokage Existed as Hokages at the same time.Retirement May be explanation She is about 54-70Years Old
And Your Prediction well its Fine but u must Change Shikamaru Part Cous Sasuke and Oro realy Gona do something Bad...
And shikamaru is not that dumb to belive in something like that.And Orochimaru Kills Tsunade No Way And to kill the elders for all they have don Realy They Culd do that When they was in Leaf Village so no......
 
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last chapter confirmed it was katsuya... and kishi have too many plot holes i cant fill

I know that! I am saying the part where you make it look like katsuya was just taken from Tsunade because sakura summoned her is false. Me saying in my last post about katsuya not being concerned as well implies i was calling sakura's slug tsunade as she didn't seem to concerned to tell sakura 'tsunade is dying we need to help her now'
 

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Simply 3rd hokage and 4th hokage Existed as Hokages at the same time.Retirement May be explanation She is about 54-70Years Old
And Your Prediction well its Fine but u must Change Shikamaru Part Cous Sasuke and Oro realy Gona do something Bad...
And shikamaru is not that dumb to belive in something like that.And Orochimaru Kills Tsunade No Way And to kill the elders for all they have don Realy They Culd do that When they was in Leaf Village so no......

i think kishi wil lfind a reason that he look like a snake since he was a child and i think they are the key to that
 

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you've made a little numbers of spelling mistakes there, but good prediction.
 
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